When We Meet Time

The subject matter is novel, the world view is unique, and the two protagonists are cute. It's admirable that a new writer can persist to more than 90,000 words (●'◡'●). The author can add some descriptions of the environment or characters appropriately, and the turning points of things can also be polished. If the length is full of character dialogue and event jumps, it will be a bit confusing. It may be better to connect the description and narrative smoothly🤔The imagination is good, and the writing style has a lot of room for improvement. You must know how to use strong ink and color, and be detailed and detailed. First create the characters, then create the environment, use clues and foreshadowing to connect the stories together, and secretly highlight the theme😆 It has been added to the bookshelf. I look forward to the improvement of writing and the completion of the story. Come on [full]

Very interesting, I feel like this type is hard to find

The writing is very good, everyone is very vivid and the writing style is always improving💕💕

The teacher's writing is very good (✪▽✪), and the setting is also very good (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡