Meat Pigeons Cultivate Immortality, One Practice Will Increase the Effect by 10%

The author uses his strength to explain that humans are inferior to machines 666 Thirty times harder Qigong at the beginning. I won't tell you what kind of crossbow you have to resist. Are you a human being when you tell me that ordinary swords can't handle it? [Smile][Smile][Smile]

It's a good novel, with self-consistent and reasonable logic, and a good plot. However, the pace is too fast, many places are mentioned in one stroke, and there are even some details that are left unwritten. The readers have to guess by themselves. You can slow down the pace appropriately, use more writing to tell the story, and fill in the key points.

It looks very relaxed, there is nothing poisonous, the protagonist's IQ is online, the plot is reasonable, there is no situation where women can't run when they see them, and there is nothing to force hatred.

Seedlings, you can take a look It's a bit dry, could use some more details. You haven't written for a long time. There are too few people.

I have an idea, since spells are maintained by aura, why not create a spell that uses the fire aura in the air to explode automatically? As long as a little spiritual power is released from the explosion, and as long as there is a little fire spiritual power in the air, it will explode. Although the explosion power is not very powerful, if the element of fire will explode, then will the immortal cultivators with fire spiritual roots become extinct in the world of immortality?

There are some minor drawbacks, such as weakening the strength brought by Goldfinger. However, in terms of application, many functions can be developed, such as using high-level spiritual rain to create spiritual blessings or various weapon refining and elixir formations, etc. In terms of bonuses to combat power, fighting across large levels basically means escaping. This is considered to seriously weaken Goldfinger's strength. The overall adventure aspect is relatively bland, but it can still be seen.

Not to mention, I thought I was reading the Immortality Essay. Not bad.

It looks good, but it was difficult to practice martial arts in the early stage. In the later stage, I got the immortal cultivation method and practiced it for half a year to Qi Lian 7. The protagonist has no spiritual roots.

It's a step-by-step drama, although it's obscene but not obscene, and the plot is fascinating.

It's very nice, but it's a pity that the author doesn't update it anymore [smile][smile][smile]

Okay, be cautious enough! It's both chivalrous and not romantic, but the author's writing is too rough. It could have been more detailed. Ah hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!

Red and fiery, in a trance

Okay, I think

Be steady and take revenge [sneaky laugh]

Okay, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It looks good but is a bit stressful. The technique is too rare.

It is very worth watching, after getting the resource after the golden elixir.

A pure refreshing novel, but the pace is a bit fast. Now that you have the golden elixir, even if you have broken through to transcend the tribulation and become an immortal, it will only cost about 500 to 800.

The writing is very fluent, and you can read it in one sitting. Although there is no training, you can still read it, which is quite good.

Enjoy the article, don't be sloppy, have fun along the way, don't wrong yourself [learned]

There are some newcomers in the previous article, but it is a pity that they are not continued. Qiuxiang's writing is also good, and there is nothing that violates or crosses the line.

Steady improvement. The protagonist's character is very suitable for cultivation, and it works well with his plug-in. It can be said that one plus one is greater than two.

So far it looks pretty good, keep up the good work

You can see it, it seems more real.

You can read it if you are in a book shortage

Not bad, you can take a look

It's ok, to my liking

The writing is pretty good, keep it up👍🏻

Despite the small number of words, it actually looks good without being verbose.

Oh the hard work the hard work raises the methanol