I'm a Straight Man, Not Some Cool and Aloof Heroine!

As a novelist, it is very powerful to write like this, but the protagonist keeps emphasizing that he hates trouble, but he still saves a boy of unknown origin, alas

First of all, this book looks very comfortable and does not look like it contains AI (anyone who has used AI Tavern knows that AI writing books does not feel like a human being, and it is easy to repeat the same sentence once the article is long, even if it exceeds dozens of chapters) This book is indeed oriented toward daily life, but it seems that there are connections between the stories and it is not obtrusive. There are no particularly outrageous cheats. The only cheat is the system. The character description has good changes in the relationship between the protagonist and the main supporting characters. Each character has an IQ and his own motivations (check this to see if the author has written the book carefully, because this requires thinking about the background of the character in advance and how to reasonably add it to the story) So far, I am enjoying watching it. I don't know how many times better than Xiaobai's novel. I can follow it for a long time.

Good, good, very articulate! It's so much better than other articles about cultivating immortality on the machine! There are other things like being knocked unconscious by mortals in the Mahayana stage, and being afraid of a soul that is a little stronger than a mortal in the transformation stage. It's hard for me to comment. The combat power of Xiuxian has been dragged down into the abyss one by one. In traditional immortality literature, foundation building can already lead to fasting. Why? Because ordinary people rely on eating to absorb the energy needed by the human body to maintain life. Foundation building can now simply rely on absorbing the spiritual energy of heaven and earth to replace this. (I hope there will be no more questions about the spiritual energy of heaven and earth.) The same goes for breathing. Ordinary people need oxygen in the air to survive. I have cultivated immortality, established foundations, and sucked spiritual energy. You still think with ordinary people's thinking, eh, how can I not need to breathe? Hey, how can you not eat? (It's okay if the password says that the golden elixir monk almost starved to death. Nowadays, most people don't know much about traditional immortal cultivation. I can understand it. Is there anyone in the password asking whether he will starve to death if he doesn't eat? It's annoying to watch) What kind of immortal is he still cultivating? Could you please move to Gaowuwen? To cultivate immortality, if you still use the theories and logic of mortals; if you can easily see through the methods of cultivating immortality, then don't cultivate immortality. One by one, they suffered miserably from those "big brothers". And that god in the comment area, guess what, eh, the smart guy said that Xiao Hong is not wanted, why is he still keeping it? Laughed angrily, 1. It doesn't matter if you haven't heard of the word "pet" before. You can understand it. Then when the protagonist arrives in the world of cultivating immortals, he spends several months either cultivating or cultivating. Is it normal to have to tighten his nerves at all times to save his life and grab a little pet that can protect the Dharma and provide some emotional value for sparring? Not to mention confiscating your mobile phone for a month, you're probably going to be in trouble. 2. If you are very smart, if you read a few more chapters, you will find that there is no trace of Xiao Hong in the back. That fellow Daoist Lu is already gone. Xiao Hong, a monster, does not appear next to Mr. He. How can you not tell? Just put it into the machine. Woohoo, the author stabbed me in the back, Xiaohong appeared again, but it doesn't matter, I really like Xiaohong, don't listen to those people who are born with low self-esteem, they don't want others to have cute pets. However, the quality has declined since then. It feels like there is no enthusiasm. The author has no motivation and can no longer hold back any good products.

Since you become a woman, there is no need to repeatedly emphasize that you are a man.

Nice! Recommend. Aside from the common beginning, the book is well paced. Clear order change, no ambiguity

I don't know how to put it, but I feel like the author has forgotten some things while writing. Mo Qing was in a coma. After finishing his work, he didn't solve the problem immediately. Instead, he opened a new copy. There was also Xiao Hong, as if he had been completely forgotten. Then the author suddenly remembered that there was a Xiao Hong, and then he randomly named Xiao Hong and returned. .

Do you really want me to join the villain? Give it five stars when you reach the 100th chapter. Hey, let's take a look at the author's day~ I almost forgot, this book was left to gather dust. Now that I have finished reading the last ones, well, it's just okay. Made it up for you

I feel like it would be better to put a label similar to that of mortals cultivating immortals, or to practice daily immortality.

The rhythm of the whole book is very well controlled, and the character of the protagonist is well portrayed. Anyway, it suits my taste. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Sending my heartfelt wishes]

To all the book friends who are so enthusiastic about this book, the author asked me to read it [smile]