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Prenatal Examination Essay
Is there a better imperial examination document that does not copy official documents, does not invent children, does not use alcohol, soap, hot pot, etc., Does not sell medicine at exaggerated prices, does not have top-notch relatives, and does not increase grain production overnight, it must be reasonable, reasonable, and reasonable.
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The wording in the novel is more literary, and the scene descriptions are more graphic. There are two points that need to be improved: 1. After reading the first 40 chapters, some chapters have repeated content. The author can read it back by himself to get a feel for it. For example, the description of calling "Mother" was written twice, and the timeline was a bit confusing. 2. It can be seen that the author wants to tell readers that some places are foreshadowing. For example, when Wang Mujing looks at his new baby brother, the author does not need to add those narration-like "emotions that breed the brother to take care of the younger brother." There is no need to "call out" these emotional directions. The readers will know it after reading your description. Talking about the details of foreshadowing, the author does not need to emphasize that this is a detail. He always shouts for readers to pay attention, hoping to clearly indicate to readers that I will start the plot in this place next. For example, when Wang Muqing and Liu Luqin met for the first time or when they met for the second time, you clearly announced that these two were the male and female protagonists. Come and enjoy CP! Just describe it, you don't have to speak for the readers all the time. Come on, author! You can refer to "No System?" I will still take the first prize and be the first assistant" "The Daily Life of a Rich Peasant Boy in the Imperial Examination"! I sincerely wish the author good luck. Your wording is gorgeous, just like high-quality fabrics, but the style of the clothes you make is not pretty enough.
Don't be impatient, tell the story eloquently, there is no top quality, the shortcoming is that there are too few, I haven't seen enough, the author, please come on
Not bad, although the pace is a bit slow, it's still good to watch slowly
Red and fiery, in a trance
The author's writing style is sophisticated and the narrative is delicate. There is no bloody family conflict in the book. It is a bit of the author's attachment to his hometown, family and love. It is a very comfortable novel to read.
Very picturesque and vivid life experience
The writing is beautiful, it is my favorite book and I love to read it. Please keep up the good work.