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The subject matter is novel, and the story begins with a man taking home a strange creature that is obviously not human and raising it carefully. This setting immediately aroused my curiosity. In the past, it was rare to see a theme that combined the development of strange creatures with an emotional story. The psychological description is very good, expressing the protagonist's inner struggle and relief. [Praise]

The true pure beauty is the adventure of trying to maintain wisdom and curiosity. Turning this into a dream pursuit is the path of eternity. Kindness, tenderness, consideration, kindness, strength, bond, trust, love and courage, happiness, wonder, inheritance, friendship, giving, exploration, brilliance, life, meaning, coexistence, protection, companionship, time, survival, future, hope, family affection, touching, happiness, joy, strength, truth, beauty, sincerity, integrity, order, justice, destiny, self, brave heart... What can really transcend fear is never things like hatred and resentment, or in other words, it is never the dark side of human beings, but the most beautiful essence of human beings... It is the heart of loving others and the eyes that care for others. If you can do this, you should be a brave person.

The character descriptions are detailed and in line with my understanding of the plot. Especially the psychological portrayal of the characters is very real, as if you are immersed in the scene. Come on, the author is optimistic about you [Hold][Hold][Please update]

Envy the original work, imitate the original work, surpass the original work Excellent works are known all over the world. Perseverance, broad thinking, focused thinking, and indispensable courage make the words written become medals.

Small suggestions, hope you can see them. You can write based on the rough basis of the original work, but it is best not to have a straight line or any ending, which will affect the perception. You can directly choose an ending, and then write it with personal information. Personal suggestion, this will make it more immersive and more like a novel. Rather than some imitation [eating melon]

The game adaptation also has a unique flavor

Very good novella If you come from My Monster Girlfriend, you may find that the heroine of this book is much weaker. After all, it was modified from the game. It is relatively fragile and closer to the process of being accepted by society. The character of the male protagonist is indeed vague, but he is also considered responsible. Rather than a tough guard, he is more like a silent companion, like the kind of family members who accompany their loved ones in front of the hospital bed. 300,000 Words tells a story of care and companionship. The author is indeed a novice, but his writing style is okay. It's an excellent novel about foreigners. It stayed with me for a long time. It's very good.

I have played it, and the author revised it. The writing is very good, and the endings of the game are also written out.

It almost matches the original. The content of the original work is too short, and I still haven't finished playing it. There has been no news of a new work for the original work. I can only place my hope in the novel, hoping it can make up for the shortcomings of the original work.

I have never heard of this game, but the writing, the emotional changes between the characters, and the plot development are all very delicate and beautiful. It's very different from previous fanfics. I like it very much, and the author's writing is easy for people to resonate with, which is great.

The writing is really good, and it is very immersive, especially the bad ending (the kiss) is really shocking. It perfectly depicts "my" inner emotions, and it immediately reminds people of Papilio's observation before, which shocked me inside. It's an excellent work

The author's writing style is delicate and his control over emotions is very good. The male protagonist's emotional changes are reasonable and natural. From the perspective of the male protagonist, it really better reflects the mystery, elegance, danger and beauty of the swallowtail butterfly. And the male protagonist's name is very interesting [laughs] [like]

I don't know why the first 20 pictures were pure horror when I watched them, because I couldn't be sure whether what the protagonist thought was true (perhaps the male protagonist with the bad ending that everyone said was the most correct), or whether he was affected by other external forces (such as pheromones) and faced an inhuman thing. You can't run away, you can't beat it [I'm about to cry], and this monster looks a bit like a human. Not only is it not a human, but you can't understand its behavior (of course, this is because you haven't seen the part in the story where the heroine hands over the note. After that, it was confirmed that the heroine really has feelings for the hero). I wonder if anyone is as scary as me? Overall, the writing is very beautiful, and the characters' inner struggles and psychological thoughts are very well written👍🏻

I didn't expect that there are fanfics about Papilion Butterfly

I would like to call this book the highest quality among all the different types of Tomato fanfics. It is a real bargain to read this book for free. The writing is sophisticated, the descriptions are detailed, the writing is smooth, and it is not OOC. It is the most treasured episode [Blow kiss] [Like]

Compared with the original work, it has added a lot of daily writing and is very detailed in describing emotions. It is very good.

It is very consistent with the setting and plot of the original game, and there are quite a few internal monologues (which are both advantages and disadvantages). Those who have not played the original game can also watch it. After part of the plot developed through the original work, Fengdie's character was different from the original work (in the original work, she was inhuman, cold, elusive, and a little charming, but later the author directly wrote it as an innocent little girl). It was a bit OOC, which affected the perception a bit [face covering]

I clicked in and read a few lines, and it reminded me of the game called "The Bewitched Larva" that I had read online. After reading a few chapters, I found out about the fanfic written by the author. Although I didn't know the plot of the game very well, my curiosity was satisfied. I wanted to taste this article full of forbidden love and satisfy myself. It looks great, come on.

The author's writing is very nice, but that's why there is a sense of separation between the back and the front. In the front, it is said that it sewed the clothes by itself, but in the back, it is written that the male taught it to sew.

It is a very good game fanfic. The characters, emotions, and interactions between the protagonist and Papilion Butterfly are well described in the article. It is a very good fanfic. I look forward to how many chapters the author can tell this story. I also look forward to the author's future updates.

The writing is very good. I personally like to listen to the book and enjoy the author's creative description of the statement type. The plot can be said to be very weird, just like a magic modification game I played before, weird, very weird, but I still like it quite a lot. I forgot the name of the game. But the plot or game content is very similar to what the author described, that is, training.

This is a very good fanfic about bewitching larvae. The popularity of Swallowtail is still too low [crying]. The writing is delicate and the emotions are well portrayed. It has a unique sense of depression in the original work. The image of Swallowtail is well depicted, and it is much cuter than the original work. However, there were no obvious difficulties when faced with external pressure later (most of the difficulties were solved by doctors), but the protagonist's awareness of prevention was also really weak. Also, don't you plan to write two articles to talk about later after you get married? [Chigua]

The description of emotions is superb, and the emotions such as humiliation, shame, and shyness are written directly to the soul. And the subject matter is also very novel. If you have watched Yuanzuo and are interested in the heroine, this will be a very good article.

It's good-looking. In fact, there are not many books about characters like Papilio, and even fewer can persist. Moreover, the author's writing style is quite delicate, and my personal impression is still very comfortable. Moreover, I personally have a high impression of Papilio in that game. Good luck, author! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

I really like it, really. The long and detailed descriptions, every stroke and every drop of ink are filled with sincere feelings, which made me feel a strange but sincere love. This is a treasure that I will never get even a little bit of. I hope the author will continue to pursue his passion. Please stick to it. I am not very capable but willing to do my part.

It's an unpopular book. It describes the inner struggle of the protagonist very delicately. I hope you won't be fooled by it.

The writing style is very delicate. The first-person perspective may make some people feel uncomfortable, but once you overcome it, you will feel the warmth portrayed by the author. There is not much comment on the plot. Everyone has their own judgment standards. I don't think there is anything wrong with it, and the flaws are not hidden. It's too late. I can't understand the part where the doctor treats the patient. There is too little foreshadowing. The protagonist's reaction to the doctor is basically non-existent. Instead, the grandmother is what a normal person should be. A doctor raises a humanoid monster at home? There was no sign of panic, and the protagonist didn't feel anything was wrong at all. Isn't that a man who is so tolerant?

It's really good. I've been looking for books like this.

As a person who has won the first prize in Jiangsu Province for his essays, the author's writing style surpasses that of most Tomato writers. He maintains the length of the writing and the quality of the writing is still high. To be honest, even I can't reach the [like] level. It's particularly impressive.

Update soon, Hun Dan! Take out your archives for me, these are not enough to read, and you better not have a knife [smile] otherwise you know what to do [punch out]