Transmigrating Into Soul Land, I, Jiang Zhu, Will Control Life and Death

An auxiliary soul master with a level 8 healing scepter, and a swan warrior soul master with a century-old soul ring. You want the former to defeat the latter when he is exhausted and has no self-defense soul tools/hidden weapons other than his martial soul. He only has two hands, two feet and a mouth. After failing to defeat him, he will blame him weirdly for not relying on willpower to defeat him. In other words, your martial soul is of no use at all. If you think the auxiliary soul master is useless, why do you still call in the auxiliary soul master? Why do you still need to teach the auxiliary soul master? Speechless (I only saw Chapter 5, I don't know if there will be any changes later)

There is a big poisonous point at the beginning of the chapter. A 6-year-old child exercises in a masochistic style, and also says that he wants to learn from the Shrek Seven Monsters. At that time, their soul power is level 30. They also take medicinal baths and supplement nutrition. What else can a 6-year-old village kid do besides dying of muscle necrosis from exhaustion? Secondly, it is said later that the healing system is useless. You must let the healing system and the attack system fight. Let humans race against cheetahs. No matter how hard humans try, they can't outrun cheetahs.

I admire the heroine's hard work and perseverance, but the character creation of Liu Erlong is not very good. I feel like the author wanted to write that Liu Erlong wanted to put pressure on the female protagonist, and then inspire her to get married and eventually become a teacher. However, at the beginning of the article, Liu Erlong's attitude towards the female protagonist and the school's attitude towards the female protagonist were quite poor. For such a person, I don't understand why the heroine wants to become his teacher? Would you seek a teacher from someone who looks down on you, ridicules you and suppresses you? And considering that the heroine is an auxiliary type and has eight innate soul powers, he will get a very good treatment wherever he goes.

She is very abusive to the protagonist (maybe I am a female protagonist, so I think it is very abusive to the protagonist), the logic is not clear, I know she wants to train the protagonist, but Liu Erlong's character is definitely not like that, it is very intellectual, and what Liu Erlong said is quite speechless 😒 (Don't criticize if you don't like it, thank you)

As a second comment, I hope the author can see my suggestion in Chapter 4. I suggest that the protagonist Jiangzhu can take the lone wolf route in the later stage? I want to see the protagonist dominate the world alone, and the content should be more exciting, which should attract many people to come and watch [laughter]

After reading Chapter 7, it's hard to say what Liu Erlong wrote...

The author writes really well!! 💕 I have always wanted to watch the kind of cultivation of ordinary people. There are not many opportunities and plug-ins. They all rely on their own hard work. The plot is not exactly based on the original work. It has its own plot. Some people don't be so mean in your comments. You ask for the plot to be the same as the original work. Why don't you just read the original work. The author should ignore them. It is normal for the characters to have slight deviations. After all, it is fan fiction. Do you still want to be exactly the same as the official one? Do you have to focus on some details and say that you should take a good look at it? 🥺

Not very good, maybe it's not to my liking

Suddenly tied. . . The writing style is smooth and worth pursuing () If the mine is cleared, it will probably rob the original protagonist of his opportunity (Ambrosia) At present, it seems that there are no other poisonous points, um, that's it

It's good-looking, with a very novel angle, and the heroine is not someone who can easily get plug-ins. Although she is the protagonist, you can clearly see the heroine's efforts and down-to-earth improvement step by step [licking the screen] I like it very much