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As a second comment, I hope the author can see my suggestion in Chapter 4. I suggest that the protagonist Jiangzhu can take the lone wolf route in the later stage? I want to see the protagonist dominate the world alone, and the content should be more exciting, which should attract many people to come and watch [laughter]

The author writes really well! ! [Send heart] I have always wanted to watch the kind of cultivation of ordinary people. There are not many opportunities and plug-ins. They all rely on their own hard work. The plot is not exactly based on the original work. It has its own plot. Some people don't be so mean in your comments. You ask for the plot to be the same as the original work. Why don't you just read the original work. The author should ignore them. It is normal for the characters to have slight deviations. After all, it is fan fiction. Do you still want to be exactly the same as the official one? Do you have to focus on some details and say that you should take a good look at it? [Aggrieved]

It's really good to read. Is the author considering writing a full-length novel (more than 500,000 words)? [KISS] When I read other Douluo series, the feeling is that... The articles written by elementary school students have no logic, and Goldfinger is very exaggerated. This kind of writing by the author can be considered a kind of clean flow.

I hope the author can focus on writing more about the wonderful life that the heroine will experience [laughing] and not participate too much in the original protagonist group's plot experiences [awkward laughter] If the plot is not developed well, it will easily make people think that the heroine will become the nanny of the original protagonist group or something like that [Thinking] Personal opinions and views

Suddenly tied. . . The writing style is smooth and worth pursuing () If the mine is cleared, it will probably rob the original protagonist of his opportunity (Ambrosia) At present, it seems that there are no other poisonous points, um, that's it

I've read it, but I think it's not suitable for me to read. Please keep up the good work, author!

The writing is great! There is no other fan who either hates Tang San or goes with Tang San. The heroine has her own partner, and finally she is no longer one of Shrek and the others. The writing is really good. It is really the first fan fiction that I have read that breaks away from Tang San and the others! !

Yes, I feel that the author's writing style is very good, very beautiful, and there are many opportunities. The whole book feels that the relationship with Tang San is quite good. He does not oppose Tang San, but cooperates with Tang San. Anyway, the protagonist is very powerful. I like to give it full marks.

Update a few more chapters, the author really can't read enough. Personally think it looks good Very nice, I support it. Never update the author again and again [Working on a manuscript][Working on a manuscript]

Very nice, very novel, suitable for me, but a little lacking, hehe

It's pretty good. I'm afraid I'll be kicked off the shelf if I fight too much.

Author, you are great. When I re-read Douluo Continent, I wanted to find a similar novel like this. Instead of the main plot of Tang San, I wanted to see what other people in Douluo Continent would have experienced. The author is also great! Very well written!

I saw that it is currently ranked among the top ten in Douluo Continent, but it is updated too slowly.

It's super cool. When did you write about meeting the Shrek Seven Devils and Tang San? I can't wait to see Tang San's shocked face. I feel that the protagonist is super powerful and the writing is quite good. Although you don't have to be against Tang San, you can still crush Tang San.

Yes, there are too many battle descriptions and exclamation points, but there are no big problems with the character design and plot. The logic is smooth. I like Ye Lingling, but the CP appearing later is a bit abrupt. I don't know if it is the original CP. I have watched anime and comics for several years. It feels like one can read it all at once.

Very good, very innovative [laughs]

Super invincible and beautiful

Ranked among the top 3 fandoms I have watched

This book is well written. Although I jumped to read it, I really like the heroine's character. The author's ideas are very good. The logic of the whole article is very good. But I didn't want to read it. Sometimes I just look at the title to know the plot. I skipped it after reading more than 100 chapters. I picked the ones I was interested in later.

A really nice and interesting novel! Love to watch [send heartfelt]

The author's writing is very good, but there is too little. Also, I would like to ask, does the heroine have no cp, or does she have cp?

I really think it's pretty

Nice description, I like it

Beautiful, I like it very much😊

The character composition is beautiful.

What's ok is that the heroine has CP?

I think it's too little and it's nice to watch, but if it's too little, will Tang San and the others be written about later? If you want to write about most of the combat suggestions in the Soul Arena, you can write a little more

It's very interesting and the content is very innovative! Very good! Keep up the good work, author! I have a small request, that is, try to update as much as possible each time, it is not enough to read [shy]

It's pretty good, everyone has their own development, and the writing is also very good.

It's very beautiful. The heroine is really a model of hard work. But I heard that if you are too high, you will be banned, so I didn't give it 5 stars.