Elden's Circle: a Guide to Becoming a King of the Borderlands

Beautiful, love watching. Although sometimes my speech is stilted, it doesn't matter. First of all, it is not limited to the game settings. For example, taking combat skills, not only weapons engraved with combat skills can release combat skills, but the protagonist can use them after learning them. It has better broken the barrier between the game setting and the Ring of Law world, and the Ring of Law world is more like a real world. Moreover, the battle of Gerik is very well written, and it's not like Xiao Ge who takes a bunch of hands but doesn't know how to use them.

The world of the Ring of Law is actually a very good theme that integrates other soul traveling elements. And it seems that the love line seems to be two heroines? Regarding Lani or the Dark Moon Line, I have an idea here. Goldfinger is the protagonist group of the past Soul Games, so under certain conditions, the protagonist can get the Moonlight Sword in Dark Souls as an important entry point (after all, the Dark Moon Sword is Lani's dowry :-D), and the introduction finally mentions the Outer God, which is considered a strong connection if you want to be related to the blood source in the future. In fact, when I was simulating group running on DS, I used the background of Magic Circle + Dark Souls, and when I saw Mikayla holding Latarn, I thought of a scene. A'Die is carrying Lani on his back, holding the Dark Moon Sword in his hand against Latarn carries little boy girl Michaela on her back Below is a picture from a painter at Station B. The image is almost what I imagined.

I hope the author can write about Melina's strength - even if she knows her cruel fate, she still has great love and is willing to sacrifice for the world. This kind of her is an unforgettable regret, so the author will write a subtle plot with the three of Lani. There is no need for Xiaomei to just be silent. She has an independent spirit and personality charm that is not inferior to that of the Dark Moon Princess. She should not be treated as a puppet to be rescued. She should have more self-expression. Alas, in almost all the fanfics I have read, Melina is protected [face covering]

The writing is good, and the characters are well developed so far. It is a very high-quality dharma circle fanfic, and it is worth recommending. The popularity of the dharma circle is getting lower and lower, and the fan authors will either stop updating or finish it hastily. I hope the author can try his best to write, even if he is really unable to maintain it, he will use an outline to give an ending. Don't let this journey of redemption be lost in the cyberspace.

This book is really good to read. My evaluation is very objective, not because I am a calm person, but because I have accumulated thousands of hours of reading. This is objective and visible. This book also taught me a lot. It can be regarded as a collision between the body and the will. It is not a complicated book but can be reflected on. Although I like the work of Elden's Circle very much, I like not only the charm of the characters, but also the thinking about life, "Do you want to go to gold or the law of the dark moon? Warrior!"

The best book among Elden's Ring fanfics Melina! ! !

Code 5 stars here, take them back if it doesn't work anymore,,, The imagery is very strong and the writing is delicate. Will writing too much consume your brain cells? Too many gorgeous words will cause a sense of repetition and fatigue, including repeated fights with the same actions, which will lead to reading fatigue., Em, if the author has time, you can read another DLC redemption dlc fanfic. Life is already full of suffering, and we need more humor and sincerity. Whether the story is good-looking or not, the rhythm of the plot, light and heavy, which ones should be emphasized and which should be lighter. It is very suitable for readers who have never played the game. The description of the environment is very good, and the presentation has a strong visual sense and is very detailed.

It looks like there aren't many people there, but in fact there are people playing with old headsets and reading novels [Chigua]

Nice! Characters other than the protagonist are all portrayed with great detail and unique characteristics. Key chapters can occasionally be written with a cinematic feel. The junction described in the article is becoming more and more real. Looking forward to further updates...

The writing is quite good. The characters in the book are very consistent with the images in the Dharma Ring. I didn't expect that the black ring could be sewn in. [Laughing and crying] I read all the current chapters in one go and can hardly find any faults. I'm just curious about how the Monger Line and the Baylor Line will be written. It seemed that Meng Ge would not have a particularly arrogant style as he could attract a real hero like An Pahhe not long after he escaped from the sewer. Also, the protagonist in the article can accept demi-humans and hybrids. But they killed all the flying dragons in Nimugefu, big or small, even their cubs, for a dragon feast. Is it because some people did one thing before and another behind the scenes? [Thinking] The context is a little illogical. But overall I quite like this book, and I'm also quite puzzled as to why the rating is only 6.7. I hope the author can maintain his status and continue to produce high-quality content for us. You must become a king. Update faster and faster, please come on, author. The score has reached 7 points. I can guarantee that this book's Tomato score is really low.

Wait a minute, the introduction doesn't say if there are multiple female protagonists, let me ask politely. The writing style doesn't fit well with the background of the Dharma Ring, and it always feels weird. The protagonist's kind-hearted, evasive character always feels too idealistic and awkward in the border area.

The author's writing is very good, and the rating may not be high when it comes out, but it is indeed a must-read novel. It is rich in content, plot and emotional, and the characters are in line with the original work without OOC. I just hope that the author will stick to it and not run away [crying], wow Darcy can do anything.

A book of very high quality, although it has some flaws, it does not affect the overall reading. The slow pace and detailed characterization make it accessible even to people who don't know the original work. Personally, I think the rating should be between 8.5 And 9.0 (It's hard to get higher for fan fiction). I feel that the current rating and the number of readers are due to the setting and the circle. It's really a pity that such a good book has this kind of data. The half-literate and half-white language style is very expressive in some places, but in some parts it is a bit too much, making people feel too stiff. However, it is only a small part, and the vast majority of it is quite excellent.

The first volume has been read. What should I say? It can be said to be a masterpiece among the niche fan works of the Soul series such as Elden's Ring. But I feel like Melina's character has changed a lot. But I have a question. Does the Faded One have to be the king? There should be other ways to go. I think God and the King are not the only ones who can bring a new possibility to the borderland. I hope the protagonist goes out of tradition and creates a gentle and perfect ending. For example, completely overturning the system of gods and kings and creating a new situation The only regret is that this book does not have the faint atmosphere of loneliness and silence in the Soul series, the regret of the brokenness of a great era, the loneliness of leaving the heyday, and the overflowing heaviness. But this novel still deserves five stars. I remember wrongly. I am now reading Chapter 14 of Volume 2. [Face covering] Also, I hope the author can write more.

You won't unlock the first plug-in after killing Greg, right?

I would like to call it the best Elden Ring fanfic. Fidel is a real hero and a veritable king. I see in him a similar quality to the brave Simmel: pure sincerity. This is not an empty talk, but more like a bottle of old wine filled with dreams and expectations. The idealism is very heavy, but the game itself is sad enough. Now please let us pay tribute to the king, praise the golden tree, and praise King Fidel.

It is definitely one of the best novels among Lao Tou Huan fans, and it is very well written. I just don't know if the author can write the protagonist to become the king.

It's super good-looking. As a fader, it has all the plots it should have~

It looks very good. It should be considered a Western fantasy. There are a lot of fantasy words in it, which makes it feel a bit confusing. Anyway, it's not very comfortable to read.

Not bad, I suggest starting a harem

How many heroines are there? Are there multiple heroines? Receive them all [face covering]

We must make peace with Melina Okay, okay, keep writing.

The future is bright, come on

A very good book

How many heroines are there, author?

Can the author post pictures of the weapons? Those who have never played it really don't know what it looks like.

It's well written. I really like it. Come on.

You can watch it as DLC of the original work.

Come on! Thumbs up for every player who loves Soul Games. [Full]

It's well written, with characters and content. It's worth recommending. Good luck to the author.