My Dao Companion Is a Bit of a Fool, but They're Slowly Turning Dark

It's okay. The male protagonist's original character can be said to be ruthless and selfish, but he can tolerate some of the female protagonist's minor problems and make concessions. This is actually a bit contradictory, but the essence of human beings is a collection of contradictions. All kinds of small contradictions can make readers feel that the protagonist is not a set program, but more like a human being. The male protagonist does love the female protagonist very much, but it seems that he loves himself more than himself. Perhaps the more repressed he is, the more he cares. The male protagonist is originally a repressed person, and the female protagonist is the only person he can say he likes for many years. Giving and tolerance is a given. Unfortunately, I still prefer a relationship in which both parties invest as much as possible. The one who invests less materially should invest more emotionally. It is said that the one who is attracted first will lose and will be led by the nose in the relationship. But the male protagonist is obviously the one who is attracted second, but he still becomes the one who invests more materially and emotionally. Seeing the current progress, I am already a little uncomfortable. If I force myself to continue reading, I will be just being stupid. But the various plots written above are really to my liking. . . . I hope I can get good results

I feel that the writing quality is still very good. I hope the author will not be more aggressive later. Author, you said that after chapter 56, it will be a daily sweet article. Don't forget the roots! 😫😫😫 Although it feels a little bit toxic at the back, you can still take a look at it.

I feel that the author should be an old writer from Qidian. The writing style is very good, the plot is not monotonous, and the real world of cultivation is vividly reflected. Support, the book is so short that you can read it.

The overall quality is pretty good at the moment, much better than the mindless novels that get boring after just a dozen or so pages. I hope the quality can be maintained 😄😄

For other traditional immortality novels, the male protagonist is relatively withdrawn, murderous, and cautious, while the female protagonist is relatively simple, cute and holy. The pairing of these two is also very interesting, and it is also very sweet and sweet in daily life. At the same time, there are some small theaters at the end of some chapters. The writing is very good, the imagery is strong, the characters are well portrayed, and the plot is touching and compact. In particular, the two people's handling and integration of emotions are in line with each other's wishes. Of course, starting from Chapter 112 is a bit hard to put into words. Because the data is so bad, the writing at the end is a bit unsatisfactory and runs counter to the theme. It is obvious that the three souls and seven souls are complete, but there is an extra touch to change the heroine's character, which makes me feel that the hero and heroine do not have the same close feeling as before. This leads to a hasty ending. If you can develop it according to the previous plot, you will have no problem finishing it. After all, you have to leave the secret realm. Suddenly a soul is created to give you a channel to get out of the secret realm. It is better to write a plot. After all, the data is too poor ( It will definitely be finished), but I still enjoyed reading it, starting from Chapter 112 (the discovery of that soul to be precise), but I didn't like reading it later because I hated the sudden change of character, and also at the beginning, the heroine went to the hero to ask to be a Taoist companion because it was the hero's plan, which I found hard to accept. But overall it looks good, I like it. It would be great if the male protagonist's personality and the female protagonist's personality can be together and sweet. The above is mixed with personal opinions, please don't comment if you don't like it, thank you!

It's not bad at first glance. The inner descriptions of the characters are relatively delicate, just like a couple's daily life. In the early stage, the background of the immortal world is quite strong. Later, when I went to the mortal world, I basically focused on romance. I didn't write much about upgrading. But I think the early stage is more biased toward male stories, and then the ending is rushed. I look forward to the author's next book.

It is clear and colorful to the eyes, polished to the ears, read with great clarity, and thought of thousands of times. Explore the depth of human nature and embark on the path of pure love. From what I have heard, it is indeed of high quality and can be judged to be lovely.

Yes, but can the author add some punctuation? It's okay to make up the number of words.

The only drawback is that the realm may be too detailed compared to the same period last year. The peak of the middle stage of foundation building 😂 😂 😂 😂 It's not as good as me, a mortal at the late ninth level, who has reached the peak of level 3😎

It's a good book, and the characters are really delicate. I won't say that much in my review. Most books will be said to be good books. But the score of this book is indeed low, which I really feel is a pity. 1. There are too many psychological descriptions of the characters, and the lyricism is far greater than the narrative, which is a bit empty. 2. The clear soup is short of water. In fact, it is not the case. The writing in "Daily Life" is very sweet and original. However, the sweetness is too subtle and cannot be understood without reading carefully, especially in "Tomato", which is constantly refreshing and remains unknown in many articles. It should be like this, and the platform is not suitable. Finally, from my personal point of view, the characterization is too focused on psychological description, which makes it feel weird to read, and the later stage of the narrative is too bland. In fact, it could be a good book, and the story could be ups and downs and magnificent, but the author chose to be bland, which is actually possible, but it is not suitable for Tomato. However, reading it did bring me a different feeling, so I felt it was a pity, and there was a feeling of regret and regret that a pearl has fallen into dust.