White Dragon************

The subject matter is relatively novel, and the content is not too advanced. Overall, it looks okay, but the theme is not obvious. The introduction should mention the general goal, and whether the protagonist will follow a light and dark dual-line plot or a single-line plot. Suggestions: ① Have a certain understanding of the element of Yu-Gi-Oh!, You can modify it slightly, and make it clear whether it is primary or secondary. If it's secondary, then it's a cheat. If it's primary, then the plot can't stand up to scrutiny. It's easy to see through the plot at a glance, and the book will be bad. ② It is recommended to be appropriately slow in the early stage, and do not give up because there are few people urging you to update. At the end of the article, you should encourage more comments and give a questionnaire to accept other suggestions. Do not interrupt the update suddenly. Explain the reason before interrupting the update, otherwise readers will abandon the book. The book is good, I support you.

Strange subject matter, support it. ♡(.◜ω◝.)♡