EVA: Under the Throne

The writing is great, but the biggest highlight is the characterization, which reveals a lot of Eva's core. It seems that the author has really thought about the relationship between people or what he has experienced. Most Eva stories either have no characterization at all (whether it is character creation or plot creation, the key point is to have an Eva flavor), they are just entertainment products wrapped in Eva shells, such as the male protagonist time-traveling to Shinji, Shinji immediately stopped being autistic, and finally became a brainless and cool article, or they all focus on CP (of course, if you don't write like this, there will be no traffic). It would be nice if the character's tone could be changed to more closely match the original work.

Hello, author, I have read your work and I feel that it is very unique in describing the plot of the scene and the writing is very vivid. I also understood the author's mood and ideals of writing an original fanfic that was not contaminated by "Goldfinger". I also strongly support the author to continue writing and show the subsequent exciting plots. However, I still have some suggestions here. The author can refer to them: 1. You can add more novel plots, bravely break out of the scope of the original plot, and provide different and interesting perspectives. 2. Can the character "Ellie" be given a physical body later so that she can have an impact in reality in the plot? 3. How can Shinji, the main protagonist, rely on his psychology to be saved? Is it passive, active, or temporary? How should the subsequent emotional knot between Asuka and Zero be resolved? I am also very grateful to the author for providing such a wonderful work. Thank you very much [laugh][laugh][laugh] By the way, I hope that the author can come and take a look at my works when he is free and provide me with some suggestions. Thank you very much [laugh][laugh][laugh]

The wonderful writing style can reveal the spiritual core of EVA. It is one of the best EVA novels I have seen so far that depicts the characters best. You can feel the vitality of the characters through the screen. In different details, I can imagine the splendor of this huge unfinished picture, and the author has his own ideas and considerations. He also has a deep understanding of the EVA body, and it can be seen that he has devoted himself to researching the settings. I read different EVA second creations in Tomato, and I asked Tomato to publish such a masterpiece for me. I hope the author can update it in his free time😎

This is the most comprehensive introduction to the background of EVA and the closest to the world view that I have seen so far. I look forward to the unfolding of the subsequent plot. The previous explanation to Sagaguan was a bit long, but the latter part was really innovative. The writing is smooth, and when I read it, I feel like a movie is playing in front of my eyes. It's a pity that there are no good works. I hope that the follow-up will be better, come on! As things get better, I started to change the plot from the TV version, which is very innovative!

There are still people who don't want to eat those "fast food". It's really rare to find this book.

It's beautiful, and the characters are well drawn.

Come on, author, it's not your fault that a good book is not popular. I hope you can keep your original sincerity.

Come on, it's really well written!