[Mastermind Behind the Scenes] [Ensemble Cast] [Founding a Supernatural Organization] [No Saintly Protagonist]
Reborn before the apocalypse, Ji Chuan binds himself to the "Make the Fake Real" System: the more people believe something without question, the lower the cost of exchanging for supernatural powers!
A little test from the start? He stages a "lottery drama," leading the neighborhood "intelligence bureau" through layer upon layer of deductions until they are convinced he won five million! The plot comes full circle, the exchange gets discounted, and he pockets the jackpot with ease!
But this is only the prologue! Ji Chuan's ambition is to create a world-saving organization out of thin air: [Velashir]!
Joseph, the lost young man at the church? He ignites the glory of his bloodline with a secret ancestral scroll, his blood boiling as he declares, "Mentor, I will follow you!"
Aurora, the young astrologer at the docks? He guides her to awaken her destiny as an astrologer, and she offers her loyalty with reverence: "I will fight for Velashir!"
When the Stone Man calamity erupts, Ji Chuan grants them "Tier 0 supernatural powers." The Starborn are grateful and charge forward to defend their world! Little do they know that 99% of the dark energy they risk their lives to collect is skimmed by Ji Chuan through the backend of his "Star Network"! Want to rank up? They need to amass ten thousand contribution points!
Clad in a black robe, he is the Supreme Mentor. Master of the Star Network, he is the power behind the scenes. Three fictional supreme gods (the Torchbearer, the Keeper of Secrets, and the Seal Forger) hang high in the starry sky, their divine might as oppressive as a prison!
Delete your account, descend into the world... With the permissions in his hands, the Starborn have no choice but to work harder!
As strange phenomena erupt across the globe, the savior organization earns worldwide renown. Leaders everywhere are tearing their hair out: Where on earth is Velashir?! Ji Chuan smiles and sips his wine. "Don't ask. The organization is fake, but saving the world is real!"
I don't think it's more interesting for the protagonist to grasp the general direction and play the villain to fight against himself? The setting of your star network means that there is only one way to become a transcendent. You can establish multiple organizations that defect from the organization. In this way, doesn't it matter whether he is loyal or not? The star network setting of the protagonist in the author's book makes it less interesting later. A small number of people can awaken naturally. Most of the cultivation systems have extraordinary awakenings, and they even awaken in symbiosis with evil. They can also awaken in a sequence, which is for those who have faith in the awakening.
It doesn't look good, it looks very bland and doesn't feel attractive.
A little bit poisonous,
Don't write in a way that is difficult to understand