Manchurian: Starting from Yao Ma Yelang and Gradually Becoming Stronger

In my own opinion, I feel that the protagonist of this book is very flesh-and-blood, has his own goals and thoughts, is brave and resourceful, but can also make mistakes and be reckless. I think it is better than the character of the poet in other books who is calm and has no emotions, and is a crazy poet. This kind of passionate and energetic character is my favorite character. [Shy][Like][Making faces]

It's okay, the writing is a bit poor but I can still read it. Do you still remember Kishibe Rohan's secret? The most important thing in a novel is the sense of substitution

Very nice! The daily interactions between the protagonist group are very interesting, and the battles are also okay, without the heroine having to gnash her teeth! ｜д•´)!!

It looks good, except for the combat description which may be a bit off, everything else is okay.

Beautiful, super beautiful! Although the protagonist's character has both the dark will and the golden spirit, the protagonist is more inclined to the dark will, but it is precisely because of this that the protagonist's flesh-and-blood character is highlighted. The protagonist is very reliable, but loses track at critical moments. I like it both in terms of intelligence and character. The protagonist's fighting style is a bit scary, which can also highlight the protagonist's background of climbing from the bottom to the top after the death of his sister. Summary: The character creation is very three-dimensional, and foreshadowing will be laid at the right moment. If there is no foreshadowing, it will continue without any pitfalls. Not OOC.

I haven't left a comment after watching it for so long. Well, I think it's pretty good. Although I haven't watched this one, I only have a brief understanding of it, but it's really well written. There's nothing wrong with the way the protagonists interact with each other and Johnny.

I like the protagonist's character very much, and there's nothing sinister about it. I hope this book will become popular.

How can I put it? The writing is good and the character description is good. The protagonist is neither a virgin nor born with a dark will. Non-toxic and edible[Thoughts]

It's not too much to give yourself a five-star rating [you taste it carefully]

I really like this novel

How to deal with the main character's shooting in Philadelphia later? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I have an idea that the way for the president to win is to blow him up with a high-level game, then put the gold leaf on his head and clamp it, and then use D4C to go to the parallel world to attract the enemy's peers.

It's really good. I'm quite satisfied with this fanfic of jojoSBR. It's not like it's airy at the beginning. The protagonist grows up step by step. In addition, in this book, Jero survives, but Johnny is still gone ("Stacked Armor" has not been resurrected yet. If someone sees it after it is resurrected, please don't blame me for not reading it.)

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Lesson1: Don't have any strange expectations for me Lesson2: Don't let the muscles notice Lesson3: Believe in the spin, just believe it Lesson4: Show respect, show respect, and then move towards another new stage of gyration. Lesson5: The shortest shortcut is to take the long way around, and the long way around is my shortest shortcut!

Very authentic JOJO text

It's a good work, but it was slow in the early stage, and it was pretty good when I started to crusade against the president. I quite like Long Di's design, although it's a bit OOC, but this is what I hope Long Di will look like after he survives. I hope the author will keep up the good work!

Look, help 🆘This Xu Tomb is so cute(›´ω`‹), Generally speaking, there is no big problem. The friendship between the Iron Man Paralym trio is also very good. Xu Tomb has a golden spirit (sort of?) And a dark will. In addition, he can also take the initiative to admit his mistakes [love], so he is a better person. Decisive in killing, not holy, fighting is fun, fighting wits is fun (★≧▽^))★☆

LIt's okay so far

Great Puma article, come on

Can be pretty good at writing

Oh, mashed potatoes, mashed potatoes oh, oh, oh

I watched it too much. Everyone came to watch it. The interaction between the Iron Man Paralym trio was very interesting. They continued to produce food in the group. It took me so long to remember that there was no rating ()

It looks good and updates quickly, just like the northwest old man who updated quickly under the acceleration made by the priest's heaven [laughter]

Can. Very well written. I have a great sense of accomplishment, no drama, and the writing spirit is very good.

Good work, you can take a look if you have nothing to do

So awesome.

Not bad, very good-looking

Ask the author if he later learned how to use punctuation marks? In the early stage, it was a bit difficult to find a sentence or punctuation in a long paragraph.

Okay, quite normal