The Belated Confession Is the Most Painful and Makes the Villainous Heroine Cry

Hey hey hey, don't be afraid kids, Lao Zhang is here [top post], watch my duration, Lao Zhang has seen the latest 50 chapters. The male and female protagonists are 18 years old and are twins. They have a showdown at the beginning to confirm their relationship. Both of them are very strong. The male protagonist was doing system check-in tasks before he turned 18, and then started a wonderful life after turning 18. The male protagonist did not hide his strength and showed himself in front of the whole school. The heroine is developing her own power. The interaction between the two people is very sweet. There is no ambiguity between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, and the female protagonist is not pursued by the male protagonist or male villain. Lao Zhang said: "Pure love is right [like]" The female protagonist said that she and the male protagonist should share the responsibility. At present, it seems that the female protagonist is not a role-playing role. The author should write a lot of scenes for the female protagonist in the future. I hope there will be more scenes in the future where the female protagonist and the male protagonist fight side by side. What may be a bit unsatisfactory at the moment is that the male protagonist in the latest plot did not directly tell the female protagonist that he is very capable of refining medicine, but instead told the female protagonist that you will get to know me slowly. I don't think this is a big deal, and I guess the heroine will know it within a few chapters. Summary: The future is promising, and the current situation is good. The author himself promises pure love and smooth writing. You can take a look at it first. When the follow-up author writes well, I will change it to five stars. If it fails, I will comment with everyone [upvote]. Lao Zhang is now very skeptical about this book, so you can lower your expectations. Although I feel sorry for the author, I decided to tell the truth. There is actually nothing sinister in the back. If I have to say it, the female protagonist falls in love with the male protagonist after he saves her. Some people may feel uncomfortable. I personally think the explanation of the causes and consequences is pretty good. The plot does become a bit cliche later on, and the pace is a bit too fast. The plot of the chapters updated later has been pushed forward a lot. For example, the sudden appearance of an angel and Yong Ye giving inheritance to the male and female protagonists is a bit deus ex machina. There are also classic stories where the male protagonist deceives the female protagonist for her safety and then goes out to open a dungeon alone (here it seems that the enhancement the heroine has just received is a bit clownish). Later, a bunch of new characters and new plot clues were added, and the quality of the writing was not as good as in the previous chapters. Lao Zhang basically failed to get the key points and exciting points, especially after the emotional line was faded later, it seemed a bit boring. Maybe my expectations were too high, but the settings at the beginning were really good. But it becomes very mediocre later on, and the writing has no obvious features that differ from other books. The sense of separation between front and back made me feel like I was not reading the same book written by the same author. When I first read that the timeline of past lives was set many years ago, I thought this book would be a long one. But the frequency and quality of the author's subsequent updates seem to be running out of steam. I should have offended the author by saying this, but I still decided to be responsible to the readers. I'm not going to sympathize with a mediocre book just because the author had a hard time writing it. I was still relying on myself to live my life. I wanted to go online and read the new book I was looking forward to to adjust, but I was disappointed. Let me predict, 50% will be cut off at the waist and 50% will be unfinished. I hope the author can slap me in the face later. This book will be left to you to evaluate and discuss later, and you are welcome to come and exchange views.

It's very interesting. The male and female protagonists are reborn at the same time, and they get to know each other in the second chapter. It's very sweet, and the whole story is smooth. I hope the author will never stop updating [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Except for the initial acquaintance, half of the rest is okay

The writing is okay, there's nothing too outrageous about it, it's just that the jokes are too funny, and that's it. It's so fucking routine. I want to forget about this world in your world now. The first few chapters at the beginning belong to the world after the aura or the recovery of immortality, and then there is a world mixed with the modern world of technology. Then the whole book is just a daily book, you can read it if you want it

It's totally not enough to read. I want a pig-raising book [laughing]

OK, now I am also a veteran [shy]

Looking at the introduction, "Rebirth without a Sword", and looking at the latest chapter 71, the heroine is gone, and she should be resurrected later, but with this, my five stars are gone. If you don't have those four words in your introduction, you can still get 5 stars.

Dude, it's all up to you.

Pretty good, relatively smooth

Although the back part is a bit cliche, the look and feel is actually okay.

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking

The description of the characters is quite good.

It's much better to just confess in this meeting without saying much than those who are nagging [face covering] [face covering]

So far, it's okay. Come on, author.

It's pretty, but it's a bit sharp in the later stages.

Very cool, the hero and heroine recognized each other at the beginning and confessed to being reborn, no delay

The logic of the novel is okay, you can continue reading it

You must support the author's return. Come on author, your writing is very good.

I haven't read much, but based on the speed of this confession, I give it a five-star rating! [Understood]

Love, career, both are right! I love candy [laughs]. The author keeps [blowing kisses].

It's not bad, but it's a bit of a template. The pace is too fast. Maybe it would be better to slow down the pace. Also, I want to watch daily life.