Time Travel, a New Life Starting from the Original God

From a logical point of view, there is basically no problem. One of the possible poisonous points is that he cried when he first arrived at Teyvat (forget about vomiting, he was the first one to cry). Also, the protagonist must have some ability to rub weapons with his hands, and learn how to use knives and swords, otherwise he will not have the advantage in short-hand combat or he will not be able to perform in street fighting (bad news, I have watched too many monthly plans recently, and I always feel that blowing up buildings is easy) Finally, the subsequent growth is to learn the talisman (the true monarch who cuts the moon and builds the sun), learns the spear (the emperor), moves the degree (the mandrill), and at the same time exercises the virtual world power.

It's okay, but there is a plot where others use the protagonist's kindness to judge the protagonist's danger (the protagonist can leave, but still chooses to deal with Osel together, but they are forced to use his power to judge the protagonist's danger. Zhongli at least acquiesces in the attitude, which is not a poisonous point)

It looks good, and the protagonist's character design is also acceptable [I learned]

It's rare to find a serious original novel. The protagonist is well portrayed, the original character design is not OOC, and the main plot has not been changed much. The author will continue to work hard.

It can be seen that the book is very thoughtful and the plot is reasonable [blowing kiss]

Pay attention to the paragraphs, it's too long, just two or three lines will be enough

I quite like the slow pace. The protagonist is well-portrayed and has a growth-oriented character. Zhongli and Alice showed obvious growth when he taught him a lesson. I just don't like it that much. Uncontrollable factors. These are the two people behind the scenes as you mentioned. It smells like a conspiracy theory. I prefer light-hearted novels and don't like conspiracy theories.

Although I didn't watch it for long, I quite like the slow pace [laughs]

Okay, very nice

Good looking, good luck to the author

Ness, come on, author

They're all good, but they're old and broken. The power of the abyss is quite attractive, but it's rarely used. It's also the elemental power of mimicry.

Great book! Great content! I just like reading this kind of thoughtful book!

A, um, good book. Push the whole army to attack (((ꎤ'ω')و ꎤ'ω')-o≡

Come on, I'm optimistic about you