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"This story is really great🌹🌹! But starting from the plot of "Reincarnation Blood Stone", I think the protagonist is not very happy living in Moe Academy. He realizes that this is not a relaxing and happy trip, but an involuntary abduction by the system to a different world. I really like this protagonist, and I can't help but feel sad when I see her like this. So I would like to take the liberty to ask, in the following plot, can she have more happy moments that are truly her own?

The writing style is light, and it gives me a sense of solidity, just like white rice. How can I put it, after the heroine's friend (Xu Zhen) appeared, I didn't really like to watch the rest of the plot. It is difficult to maintain a balance when multiple original characters appear in fan fiction, and it is also difficult for readers to focus on the heroine. At present, it seems that there are still a lot of foreshadowings that have not been revealed, and I hope that the writing will be better and better.

Sometimes the heroine's character is very handsome, sometimes she's very naughty, but generally speaking, there's nothing too bad about it. It's just that sometimes the heroine is really naughty and hides everything in her heart. In fact, she can also listen to what she said to Miyaxing earlier.

Yes, it's quite interesting. Why do you say that the heroine is delaying? I think it's mainly because the heroine has been affected since she found the reincarnation blood stone. It's normal to promote the development of the plot. There is nothing to complain about in this plot. I hope there can be more misunderstandings and tensions in the cp line [note]

Not bad, just like the introduction said, the heroine is an introverted and very stubborn person. If you look at it from this perspective, what the heroine does is actually quite understandable. She doesn't want to explain to others. She is very tired when she thinks that once she talks about the plot and other things, she has to go through a series of explanations. She is introverted and closed, indeed It's awkward, but regardless of God's perspective, the heroine seems to be an independent person who has these things happening. However, some plots are indeed written with insufficient writing power, and it seems that the third and fourth seasons are mixed together. The writing is a bit simple and confusing, but overall it is not bad as a Moe Academy fanfic.

I have followed the serialization to Chapter 170. So far, I feel that the overall feeling is okay. Although there are some contradictions in the descriptions and other issues, overall the plot is still okay and relatively novel. As for the emotional line, I really feel that the emotional line with Principal Ousi is more natural, and the emotional line with Ouba is weirdly drawn (for example, the previous part where I kissed Ouba's cross star totem inexplicably, it felt very abrupt to me. Also, Ouba is more like a supporting role, not the heroine's cp, but in the latest chapter, the emotional line between the heroine and Ouba is much better than before) Finally, when the movie is finished, can you write an extra chapter about the relationship between the heroine and Principal Ossie? I really like it.

What does this book say? I don't know. I looked too fast and didn't take it in. I just felt a little confused. But I can still understand it to a certain extent, but I'm a little confused in one aspect, but overall it's still good to watch.

I have read Chapter 61 so far: Although the heroine feels a bit awkward, the plot setting is very interesting. The heroine is not very involved in the cute knight, but everything that happens feels like the heroine is involved (the heroine thought she was just a passerby, hahaha)

Simple review 1. The writing style is good, although it is not at the master level, but I am not a novice either. In the Moe Academy series, the writing style is considered to be in the middle or upper reaches. 2. The existence of the protagonist is not obtrusive. Unlike other novels, he is not powerful at the beginning. He has a good relationship with the cute knight and so on. This book is suitable for adults with brains. 3. The storyline is very logical

It's quite interesting. The heroine has her own plot and the logic is on point. In a way, the heroine's attitude towards the original protagonists is very real. In the eyes of people at different latitudes, the 'protagonist' is just a strange ordinary person in my eyes. This kind of feeling [laughing] will not pay excessive attention or pursuit. It is natural to join and become friends with everyone [shy]