Daily Life on Campus of a Boy Who Cultivates Immortality

The writing is quite realistic. For example, the male protagonist's thoughts and personality are consistent with that of an unreborn and unsystematic high school student, and the male protagonist's mother. The feeling of being annoyed by the sight of it makes me feel particularly real [facepalm]

First let's talk about the rating, four and a half stars, rounded up to five stars You can tell me why I gave it four and a half stars. First of all, the writing is average, but the rhythm is good. To be honest, half a semester has passed in the 80 chapters of the book, and I feel that the rhythm is okay. Then the rhythm is to grasp the key points of the story. Whether it is a water ghost or an old woman, they are all key points. The character description is very good, such as a cold girl, a lively girl, the kind in secret, secret love, open love, railing dialogue, etc. It is very similar to my high school. Then in terms of writing, the story is pretty good, but the writing is very bland and there is no small climax. Some of the previous compositions were quite good, but I didn't find any later ones. . . The story is innovative and feels like a campus novel. Some of the Taoist stories are well written. At least I won't be embarrassed by them. Maybe I don't know much about Taoist things. As for advertising and the like mentioned in other comments, I think it is a real reflection of life. Can you really abandon such familiar things as a certain sound and a certain meter in your daily life? And those things do have a good reputation. When you think of electric vehicles, do you think of Yadi? This is a normal phenomenon. Is it possible that you would be happy if you actually wrote a certain sound, a certain hand, and a certain style? After reading it, let me talk about the final score. I think it can be scored as 9.0, And the novel is worth following. But I heard that it is updated once a day, which is too slow! ! ! At least 40 chapters a day is enough! ! !

I said it looked a bit familiar. It turned out to be the author of Small Town Fairy. He wrote very well and the writing style was really realistic. This book felt better than the previous one. I just wanted to ask if the heroine was Lin Meiguo. Personally, I felt that Su Yunduo was more attractive, and I felt that the protagonist did not have feelings for Lin Meiguo, but was more special to Su Yunduo [Eating Melon]

I like to read works about Taoism and school days, and this work suits my taste very well😊 Li Jiuan is a positive young man, sunny, kind, helpful, and very popular. The storyline has no major ups and downs and is indeed very touching and attractive. Thank you to the author for sharing it!

The daily writing is good, but the progress is too slow. It is not fun to write daily like this all the time, and readers will get tired of it. In addition, the main character is timid and cowardly, which makes it very frustrating to watch. I hope it will change as the plot progresses.

The confused feelings and the words that want to stop speaking, lead everyone back to the beautiful high school era. This book is worth reading.

It doesn't have the big opening and closing of ordinary immortal novels, it just unfolds slowly from the perspective of ordinary people. Some people who don't like to read it feel like it's just a running story, but in fact it just unfolds in the ordinary.

All I can say is that Piaget's book is the most natural and comfortable among all tomatoes. It's just the right amount of refreshing.

This book is well written, and the score of 8.1 Is really low. If the QD Courtyard book is based on the 10-point standard, this one will score at least 9.5. Let's talk about what I personally feel dissatisfied with. The author's portrayal of the protagonist is quite good and fits the image of a 16-year-old boy. However, it is precisely this character setting that makes the protagonist lack the freedom and calmness of a cultivator. Some people may say that the protagonist has only finished his freshman year of high school, but he has already written 1.5 Million words! In addition to getting better grades, the protagonist's character is no longer cowardly, but he is impatient and impulsive when encountering problems. He is like an ordinary 16-year-old boy. He cultivates not only the skills but also the Taoist heart. I hope the author can finish this book and never learn about courtyards.

After reading the chapter, I feel very warm, as if the timeline has been cut off and returned to the past. The past scenes of schooling are vivid in my mind. Time is like a song, and time is fleeting. The hair on the temples proves the vicissitudes of life. The author's words are as simple as a picture scroll, making people feel young after reading it immersively! Come on! More updates! Support the author.

As the review said, the book is a good book. The characters are very delicately drawn, but I was a little bit unaccustomed to it and found it bland. I usually like to read more exciting articles, and I can also read more radical and exciting daily articles. Anyway, I just can't read this type of book, maybe it's because wild boar can't eat fine chaff.

Focusing on daily life, the writing in this aspect is quite good. Although there are occasional minor points, it is still okay in Tomato. There are a lot of little poisonous spots in the back, I can't hold it any longer, so I say goodbye.

The daily life of students is in the same vein as the gods of the previous town, soft and sweet, quite beautiful.

It's very interesting. I really like this kind of cultivation that deviates from normal abilities. School life is also very interesting. There is one missing word. It means that the cultivation is not so deviated from the normal. It is not the kind of people who are completely cultivating immortals and are so awesome that they can make people laugh to the sky. They are just people who have some cultivation, some strange abilities, and are better than ordinary people.

Maybe I am from the same region. The school life, family routine, festival customs, and even slang in the book are very familiar to me. Moreover, I have friends who grow flowers just like the protagonist in the book. All of these combined make it worth reading. The author allows an ordinary high school boy to slowly grow from a low self-esteem to self-confidence through writing about spiritual cultivation. There is no Long Aotian-style content like the ordinary urban cultivation novels in which he is bullied for no reason in the early stage and is slapped in the face in the later stage. The protagonist, as a high school boy, still puts study first and spiritual cultivation as a supplement. He respects his teachers and has a love for the weak. He can also laugh and joke with relatives and friends. Isn't this a warm daily cultivation life on campus?

It is a very unique book. Chekhov said that the gun that appears in the first act will definitely fire in the third act. However, this book does the opposite. Countless events are not foreshadowing and adventures, but just chance encounters. The final product is a campus work similar to a boy's diary with a bit of fantasy elements. Disadvantages: There are too many descriptions of the protagonist's family and it's boring, and the mother and grandmother are intentionally or unintentionally portrayed as rural women with low cognition, unreasonableness, and strong control. Every time I read about family trivia, I can't help but skip it. It's almost 4 stars+ in my mind, but considering the average level of tomatoes, I can barely give it five stars [awkward laugh]

The ignorant youth in high school, no ambiguous ambiguity, youthful love without confession, the plot is light and compact, no green tea, and the villain has a big conspiracy. It is very relaxing to watch, as if you are back in high school. Highly recommended! ! !

The count can fly with peace of mind, and the i count will always be with you. I read this from the previous book. I hope it can be updated all the time. It is really super good. The first thing I do when I turn on my phone every morning is to check if there are any updates.

This book is quite real. The male protagonist has not traveled through time and has not been reborn. He occasionally receives the inheritance of cultivating immortals. There are other monks in the world view. However, the male protagonist does have a normal student EQ [face covering] and often says the wrong things. He also cannot understand the thoughts of female classmates (in line with the EQ of an ordinary boy). It seems that there should be multiple female protagonists? [Facepalm] If it's not that there are many girls, then I feel like there are a lot of interactions with the girls. It should be that there are many girls.

Reading this book seemed to take me back to my high school days, which was ordinary and beautiful. When I was in high school, I often fantasized about being able to become an immortal. This book is simply a reflection of my fantasy. Very well written, five stars! ! !

The author writes plainly, warmly and with great care. I would like to give it a good review. The daily life described is too cumbersome and even the small things in life are described. I will give you a seven-star rating to support the author.

It is plain yet real, just like our high school life, and the hazy throbbing of youth is evocative. There are more than 500,000 words in one semester. If I finish high school, it will be about 3 million words.

The writing is quite good, but it's too everyday and bland, so it's not suitable for me. If you like this kind of thing, you can read it. It's about daily life in high school. It's much more relaxed than normal high school. I didn't have that much time in high school before.

I have just read dozens of chapters, and I feel that it is quite good. There is no bitterness or hatred, no pretentiousness and slap in the face, and no family clan. Very good, fresh and natural ordinary campus experience

Nice. It's really good. The writing is very good. To be honest, the name is bad. The content is very good

Simple and delicate daily writing, I hope to keep it updated. I feel like writing it this way, the plot is still very long, and I can follow it for a long time. I write slowly, and the high school chapter can be written for a long time. I look forward to Jiu'an's wonderful life in the future, and who will become my confidante.

It's good-looking, please update more. I came here after reading this book, and I like this kind of daily life.

After seeing the latest update of 186, the overall feeling is okay, but I feel tired from reading it. I have been writing about trivial matters and real daily life for a semester so far. It seems that the title of the book is correct. I have no patience to read it, haha

The youthful writing style is clean and pure, and the middle school years are written tenderly and truly. The confused thoughts, daily life of classmates, and youthful throbs come alive on the page. The plot is delicate and healing, and the characters are vivid and down-to-earth. There is no deliberate sensationalism, but it is full of youthful beauty and youthful thoughts. When reading, it feels like returning to the innocent school days, which is gentle and healing.

The plot is soothing and bland, with a very homely feel. Daily life is also mixed with the mentality of youth, ordinary and happy daily life. This makes the book unique and attracts some readers. But at the same time, the overly complicated daily routine and slow foreshadowing have dissuaded some readers. However, there are currently no major poisonous points, and I hope this book will have greater breakthroughs. I have to add, there are so many descriptions of eating! Almost every chapter has it, it's a bit watery