The Good-for-Nothing: Fleeting Light and Rain

Although the writing style is a bit immature, overall it has a plot, emotional lines, ideas, is consistent with the original text, and the characters are well developed. After all, it's the first book, and it's already great. OS: Because I can't write it myself 😳 (I love Tan Tan 😳 so much)

It's nice to watch. I reviewed it before but didn't write a comment 😄😄

There is no OOC. The character design is basically consistent with the original work. The language expression is very cute. You can feel that the author is full of (I don't know how to express this feeling) writing this article.

Give yourself a score❤️❤️

Well, it's well written, and it's one of the more outstanding novels among the fanfics I've read. Could you please trouble the author to give Jiang Shuang a group damage skill, or a large-scale damage skill? So far, I've seen that his attack methods are a bit single, and he and Tan Fu Tongwan are the kind of talents with perfect scores. I haven't seen his talent reflected there. Of course, it may be because I haven't finished reading it. The author may have laid a foreshadowing. ٩(๑′0`๑)۶

I heard others say that giving five stars seems to be an infringement, so I only gave it four stars. This book is very interesting and the characters are well drawn. The author also writes the name of the person who gave the gift at the end of each chapter. The author has a very, very good personality.

I hope I can follow more. It's so beautiful. It's so beautiful. Can I unlock a double ability later?

Although the writing style of the whole book is a bit fresh and childish, overall it is good. Chapters will be updated on time. As a reader, I wish the author a spring of thoughts, an endless stream of thoughts, never stop writing when updating chapters, and persist in his enthusiasm for creation.

Hey, have you filled in all Tan Fu's thoughts? That's pretty good

It's a pity that the original text was not found. The original text is better than this, 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢