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Not bad, the headliner who pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, hides his strength to make people laugh, says it is for safety, and is an upright kid holding gold in the city, I can only say that the left and right brains are fighting each other, 👍🏻

The writing is very enjoyable, unlike other articles that have the behavior of giving away pets, it perfectly embodies what we, who represent the will of the players, should do.

It looks good. I just mentioned that it's okay to want revenge, but when facing a villain, especially one like Sakaki, don't talk too much nonsense, otherwise it will be easy to expose some things. It's better to fight directly. The rest looks pretty good at the moment. More

The update speed is normal and the plot is pretty good. Anyway, it looks pretty comfortable to me. Come on, author! [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] I don't dare to keep it, I'll finish it by reading a few books. Being able to see a little bit is a little bit. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Going downhill

(18) Green, 22.275/50 Sense of immersion + follow-up reading: 2 (normal) + 2 (unknown main plot) Writing style + imagination: 3 (half and half) + 3 (non-TV world view) Plug-in + background: 3 (yes) + 3 (general development) Rhythm + plot: 2 (normal) + 2 (normal) Character + logic: 3 (rubbing) + 2 (unknown) Extra: -10% Feelings: The main line is not clear, the level of plug-in development is low, the level system is not obvious, the special chapter + a simple summary of Donghuang's background. Calculation: (4×1.5+6×1.25+15×0.75)×0.9=22.275

There's nothing particularly bad about it, it's not bad. I just messed up the cultivation of elves, and I felt like I couldn't afford to cultivate them. But from the author's point of view, a full-level three-bee colony from the system was enough to feed that large group of people.

It's pretty good. The bad thing is that there are more than 30 chapters in the beginning.

It's super good-looking. Don't be fooled by the ratings. It's super fun to watch.

The plot is still okay, but maybe the title of the book doesn't match the content, or maybe it's not written in this direction in the early stage. Five stars for encouragement.

It's very interesting. I finished reading it in one sitting. I hope the updates can be faster.

A 10-year-old Pokémon fan thinks it looks good [laughs]

Can you change the title of your book?

There is a kind of Versailles

It's great. I wonder if there is a female lead? If so, who is it?

Super beautiful👀, big cheers to the author⛽

Why hide your strength?ᗜ𖥦ᗜ

Encourage the author

[Adoration] Very good and beautiful

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

[Laughing and crying] It's too short and everything else is good.

Very funny, quite interesting

Why is the score so low?

Beautiful and well written

The ultimate cool novel, the main character 👌

Come on, the author is great

Very good elf writing [like][like][like]

How interesting! Come on

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It's okay, but I don't know who the heroines are at the moment.

All I can say is that it's really good. At least I didn't find any faults.