It's my first time writing. If there are any mistakes, please point them out. Thank you.
Brothers, I have changed a lot of passages in the previous chapters. If you feel uncomfortable, just comment and tell me.
[This is actually one of the sentient beings who exists in the Bengtie universe. He has no precognitive ability and no other memories. All he has is a person who has become rich and powerful for his hometown. Although the protagonist has the strength of an envoy, he is just a young boy who has just grown up. He will do what he can to protect his companions. More than ten years is still too short in Bengtie, not to mention that his time in the universe is not as long as Xing's time. ]
[Report the information. When you get to Onfalus, the 'God War' will start. The Lords of Extermination will gather together, the Amber King will appear, and Aha will come to the rescue. ]
[In order to prevent my friends from facing the wrath of the 'sun', I will shield everyone and use my body to build a barrier called protection. ]
[Even if the body is broken, the will named [Preservation] will not dissolve]
[The wrath of the 'sun' will only bring them warmth. Even if the old tree decays, the 'nutrients' left behind will help the new branches reach into the sky. ]
[They will move forward in a direction without fire, and the 'sun' will only become a tool for them to move forward. ]
[The broken body is not the end, but continues to sow the fire of preservation. Time condenses the will into amber. The anger of the 'sun' will only reflect the spectrum of preservation. ]
[When Belloberg's 'future' touches the amber named Landau, you will hear the faint echo in the wind: it is the will called "preservation" that has never been extinguished in countless broken moments. ]
Reader comments
Did you feel like the plot went by too fast? The author can try to add other side plots, but of course if that doesn't work, there's no need to force yourself.
If you have any opinions, you can put them forward, brother, let's see and change them.
Brothers, regarding some setting matters, if they are not too outrageous and are within the acceptable range, please forgive me. After all, what I write is a fan [face covering]. I have restored the background very well. I checked and wrote when I was writing. Only if the setting is not clear in the game, I will follow what I wrote [covering face] Face], to the Commander of Wisdom, I have a million in the game, I have trouble saving up to 100,000 shields, but in the background, the setting of the Commander of Wisdom is that they are a group of stronger than ordinary destiny walkers, they have good brains, and it is difficult to fight as well as other Commanders [face covering] Brothers, please understand and understand, thank you for your understanding [Sending Hearts]
It's okay. The small problem is that I haven't felt the character of the protagonist as a commander so far.
It feels pretty good [laughing]
Anyway, keep working hard, there is a lot of room for improvement.
Did you feel like the plot went by too fast? The author can try to add other side plots, but of course if that doesn't work, there's no need to force yourself.
If you have any opinions, you can put them forward, brother, let's see and change them. Brothers, regarding some setting matters, if they are not too outrageous and are within the acceptable range, please forgive me. After all, what I write is a fan [face covering]. I have restored the background very well. I checked and wrote when I was writing. Only if the setting is not clear in the game, I will follow what I wrote [covering face] Face], to the Commander of Wisdom, I have a million in the game, I have trouble saving up to 100,000 shields, but in the background, the setting of the Commander of Wisdom is that they are a group of stronger than ordinary destiny walkers, they have good brains, and it is difficult to fight as well as other Commanders [face covering] Brothers, please understand and understand, thank you for your understanding [Sending Hearts]
It's okay. The small problem is that I haven't felt the character of the protagonist as a commander so far.
It feels pretty good [laughing]
Anyway, keep working hard, there is a lot of room for improvement.