Full-Time Beast Master

A very good book, but it was very rough at the beginning. I hope the author can think about it carefully. 1. According to the author's description, the fantasy beast is a very high-level pet. Can you design it so that it is not a super model, but has some special features, but it can show its specialness in the later stage. 2. Skill settings. The dragon's initial skills can also be effective against beings two levels higher than him. What's the reason? Is it the specialness of the fantasy beast, or is it the setting of the skills. 3. No heroine or only one heroine, Ji Ruxue? From the current point of view, the protagonist's life experience is very tragic in the author's description. Can he climb into the Ji family through love and use it to affect the situation of Blue Star? Come by to bring a little sweetness to the protagonist? 4. On the issue of antagonism, the mainland is integrating, and the issue of factions is set. There are some doubts, because the integration cannot be stopped, but the idea of ​​​​the new faction is to be a dog for others? Do the localists want to start their own business? One problem here is that there is an insurmountable gap in the high-end combat power of the two sides. In this case, is the local approach to ensure the stability of the local area by establishing relationships with the nobles of the New World and forming vertical and horizontal relationships? What is currently written is very vague or even non-existent. 5. Talent is also very vague at present, but I personally don't think it affects the perception very much. Finally, this is the first time the author has written a book. I think it is very powerful. I hope the author will keep writing and not be a eunuch. No matter what, since he wants to write a book, he should finish it to perfection first and slowly improve. Come on.

The writing is pretty good😄The author [likes], but how do you plan to deal with the heroine? I prefer Ji Ruxue, but I feel like you want the protagonist to be with Cao Qingge and rebel against his master [thinking], ugh😮‍💨, I can't live up to such a good girl like Ji Ruxue [angry], why don't I just do it all [make faces] [cool] [admiration] [cry], I'm not a child anymore! !

36. What I want to see is that the male protagonist is the protagonist of the era, but there were beast masters decades ago and even entered the academy. 36 Here we are. It's still ok.

Not bad. Generally speaking, there is nothing toxic about it.

Overall, this is a fairy tale, very good, not brainless, but it needs to speed up the pace. Slow-paced writing is not very popular in Tomato.