Driving the Third Hokage Crazy, the Domineering Uchiha!

The writing is really wonderful, especially the meat-eating at the beginning, which made me very comfortable to read [I learned] and I have the desire to continue reading [laughing evilly] [like] [like]

Overall, it's okay. The shortcoming is that in the early and middle stages, it feels like it's both self-contained and uncomfortably similar to the original. In the later stages, it's basically all self-contained and looks pretty good. Then there are dozens of chapters that are asking for good reviews, which is annoying to read too many times. The emotional scenes at the beginning are not good, but the writing is much better at the end. As for the other parts, the writing is quite good. It's a one-step show that doesn't overwhelm the fighting ability, and it's a satisfying ending to the harem. It's worth a read.

Very well written! It's refreshing and comfortable to watch! Unlike other Naruto stories, it's not hard to eat! Come on, author! Looking forward to your next story! I wish the author a great sale of his work!

If you like Naruto harem stories, you can read it. Although the plot is not satisfactory and the wording is quite lagging, it is still worth reading when you are short of books. The key is that it also has some pictures ~ [Laughing and crying]

Not bad, there is no green doppelgänger. The previous person commented that chapter 73 was there, so I went to read it, because it is true that there is chapter 100, but there is really no chapter 73. They must have been dazzled by it, and then I turned back to Chapter 100, which had a bit of green doppelgänger, and looked at it. There was a comment before that expressed dissatisfaction, and I found that the author had changed it. I gave it a five-star praise.

Not bad! Worth five stars, a little brainless, but still interesting. It's good to let Zhu Zhu know about the cancer.

The author has asked for 5 stars many times, so I will give it. After all, I have read it. Summarizing the harem story, the story of the daughter-in-law is basically unmarked. As for the plot, I think it is handled very well. Although I am Yun Hokage, at least the logic of the characters in the story is quite reasonable. Of course, if people who know the original work read it, they may not be able to accept it. After all, some characters have to be written to death. At the same time, from the perspective of other people, they may think that the protagonist always has his dreams come true (perhaps they think it is too smooth and lacks twists and turns in the plot). It also lacks the climax plot and the character's low period of ordinary novels. (For fan fiction, it is indeed a bit overwhelming. I can only hope that the author will work hard to improve his writing skills.) The shortcomings are personal. If you have different opinions, all viewers are right ~ I am a pure novice: The emotional line is a little thin, and it doesn't seem to conflict with the girl above, but if it does, it will be very fast, and the relationship will heat up very quickly. It's not impossible, but it's just a bit thin. (For example, although Gang Zi has been emphasizing the death of his younger brother and boyfriend, and strongly related to the conspiracy in the village, he directly started the education and training with Gang Zi. The author originally thought that you did not describe the process because you were afraid of Shen He. When I saw this, I thought maybe I didn't know how to describe it [facepalm]) I haven't read much, but I've read more or less everything. It's free to write a review, so I'll give it five stars as a reward.

The writing is good, the pace is fast, and it is not overwhelming.

I've read a lot of Naruto fan fiction, and I feel like this one is well written, and it's to my liking [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] There are pictures in every chapter, please give it a thumbs up

It's great, I just love watching this kind of thing, taking in girls, fighting the third generation, fighting Danzo

In fact, this book is about 3.5 Points. It is a little bit enjoyable to read, but there are many contradictions in it. It feels like the left and right brains are fighting each other. I don't know if the author didn't conceive it well or made a typo.

This rating is definitely low. The plot is compact and the dialogue is crisp and clear. It's worth a 9.0.

The entire plot develops without delay and is logical. The treatment of the villain and the protagonist's way of dealing with things are all traceable.

Oops, among the Hokages, Lu Uchiha is so strong and calculating, he can be regarded as the best among the few.

It's almost described in detail. I have a great imagination and ideas. Hurry up and open a new map and collect beautiful women.

The whole plot is logical and not laggy, the villain is handled just right, and the protagonist is also handled very well.

🌟This book really made my eyes shine! 📖The plot is compact, the characters are three-dimensional, and each character is flesh-and-blood, making it particularly exciting to read🔥. The author's writing style is smooth, the details are delicate, and the sense of substitution is super strong💫. Especially the protagonist's growth line, which progresses layer by layer, makes my blood boil💥. The overall rhythm is controlled just right and can't be stopped at all📚. Highly recommended to book lovers who like in-depth plots! 👏👏

I've watched Chapter 112. So far, it's a lot more enjoyable. The plot is pretty good. A few of the original characters have slightly changed their personalities, but it's innocuous. Overall good. Give it five stars. The rating is too low. Please pull it up.

A very good book. The experience of a fifteen-year-old bookworm tells you that as long as the author's settings are normal and the content does not violate the settings, then it is a good book.

It's very good and powerful. It's not a brainless and invincible text, it has ideas and plots. At the same time, it also helped me, a person who has not watched Naruto, understand some of the plot.

It's very beautiful and has a clear structure, which makes up for the shortcomings of the anime.

This book's fan fiction is pretty good, and I'd like to give the author a ten-karat star.

The early stage is very good, and there is no delay. Gaga is the solution. I just watched Learn to Fly Thunder God, and then I followed Shinkuna. I can't accept it anymore. I will give you a good review before continuing. It may be withdrawn at any time. Goodbye, very beautiful

The speed of the car is okay, there are bright spots, but Liu Bei can be more detailed (prerequisite for passing the review)

This book is very good and worth reading.

Time travel and rebirth requires a harem invincible novel. Here he comes, here he comes. It is worth recommending [laughing evilly]

A good-looking Naruto novel, a dual-study novel with a tight storyline that makes people want to put it down.

It's pretty good. I can keep watching it. The pace is not slow and the combat power is not jumpy. It's very good.

Yes, yes, yes, yes, the protagonist is from the Uchiha family, and many beauties from the Hokage, including Tsunade, have accepted it.

Good looking, no ink marks on the girl, little invincible Beautiful but not brainless