The Brave Man Returns Home

Overall, except for the slightly lacking writing style, it's pretty good. Protagonist - what I feel about the protagonist is that he looks like a human being, really like a human being. He is not the kind of "genius" or "superman" who is decisive, wise and rational, but the kind of ordinary person who is more in line with reality. Plot - What I like the most is what happened in the two locations "Village" and "Coast". Although the protagonist is relatively weak during this period and has low initiative, the settings are explained, and the portrayal of the characters is also okay, especially the perseverance of the characters themselves. The "dungeon" feels like a completely forced development of events. The team formed an unknown situation when meeting the elves, and helped the mixed-race dwarves regardless of the risk. It is different from the protagonist's previous personality, and this is not the category of "ordinary people". It is too careless, but except for the "motivation", the other descriptions are not bad. Characters - Except for some tool-like characters that account for a small proportion, the author has been portraying them all, but the label is "micro-group portrait". This level of portrayal is already very good. At present, generally speaking, this is still a world where there are more "good people" than "bad people", so after getting through the depressing period at the beginning (I actually quite enjoyed watching this part), it is still very friendly. Generally speaking, it is suitable for reading at a slow pace and for those who are not part of the Long Aotian Party. After all, the protagonist's current life is not very happy. Readers who like this type of novel should be happier reading it. It would be better if the author could improve the motivation of meeting the elves and helping the half-blood dwarves.

It would have been nice if it had been written longer. The progress and rhythm are pretty good. One part didn't take too long, and it wouldn't be over in one go. It's a pity that it's a growth type. It's too early and it's still in the early stages. The two parts of the first volume are roughly about the male protagonist traveling through time and then adapting to a different world. The extreme rejection of outsiders by the locals may be due to the predecessors cutting down trees and the exposure of others later, but it is not clear why the time traveled. The current world structure does not say that the help of foreign heroes is needed. It can only be understood that the will of the world (the author) has a bad taste to see the adventures of the brave in another world. The useless golden finger in the village stage was not understood until the second volume. The male protagonist in the early stage (volume 1) is indeed extremely weak. Later, Mermaid added a conflict between the mentality of the male protagonist as an ordinary earthling and the concept of another world, which is not usually dealt with in otherworld novels. The male protagonist is indeed a person with relatively positive views (perhaps a bit too positive), and the part of learning from Mermaid is particularly mentally draining. The pressure of the male protagonist in this volume is quite strong, it feels like he used too much force) In the second volume, I feel that the male protagonist is beginning to blend in. First, he helped others steal fire and agreed quite happily), and changed from lawful good to chaotic good. However, the male protagonist's combat power improves very quickly, and he can fight and run.

The writing style is very comfortable to read, and the village in front is a bit depressing with negative emotions. However, it is still recommended to read it. After you have suppressed your emotions, it will be very refreshing to have your emotions burst out at Miss Mermaid's place.

The first 44 chapters were really frustrating. Reading them all was a kind of torture. There was no hope at all. It was only after I talked to the mermaid in Chapter 44 that I felt a little hopeful. I read the comments section and knew that it would be very frustrating in the early stages, but I didn't expect that it would take so many chapters until the emotions are released.

It's very interesting, I really like the story and the character of the male protagonist. I hope the author can persevere and not collapse. It doesn't matter if the update cycle is longer, as long as he can finish it. (And I guess I won't have any new readers now that I've written it this far)

What does this book say? It may be a little depressing in the early stage, but it feels really good in the later stage, and the plot is also very good. But to be honest, I was confused after watching it. I felt that the protagonist was really helpless when he first entered the village. However, I feel that the character of the protagonist is really cute. The author wrote it well [Blow kiss]

I like this male protagonist's early character very much. I hope that in the future I will not become the kind of person who refuses to save anyone, kills innocent people indiscriminately, and kills everything for their own benefit [Love]

If you want to write a good story, people will always want to support it. It can be seen that what the author wants to write is not a mindless article but a wonderful story, so a work like this will be more difficult to write. All I can say is that I hope this sticks.

Oh my god, the feeling of frustration at the beginning is almost the same as that of the person next door who was reincarnated as a goblin [face covering] Fortunately, I persevered. I watched updates along the way and witnessed the protagonist's growth so far. It's good [like]

It's not easy to find a good book among a bunch of interesting articles_(:з∠)_

The writing is good and the description is okay, but it won't be popular.

The pace was indeed a bit slow in the beginning. Nowadays most people like to read fast books, but I quite like this story. Good luck to the author.

The male protagonist is a great mother-in-law, and the plot is also good. I must go home!

It's so damn good. You can use this thing as a weather forecast or a small diary. It's very comfortable.

The writing is average, but the story is told more smoothly. I like this story very much.

A very human protagonist, right? It's not a traditional time travel to another world, it's a bit similar to re0 (?) But the protagonist has no reincarnation. It's okay for the whole day

Is the boss coming back? [Crying] [crying]

The writing is quite good, but the first chapter is a bit too long. If you don't like it, I suggest you skip it and read it.

The unique relationship with Miss Mermaid is quite interesting [laughing]

I personally like the plot in it, but is it devoid of cp?

It's a very good story, I hope I can continue writing it, but there are still too few of it now.

It's a bit dry, and there are no flaws other than a bit of drag in the early stages, but it may not be in line with the mainstream idea of ​​refreshing writing. I personally think this is an advantage

It's very slow and not popular at the moment. I feel like I can save 100 chapters and jump through them.

The plot is quite good, and the concept is great. I am very curious about the subsequent story unfolding, so the author will update it soon! ! ! 🥺🥺

Bu Shuang Wen, a very realistic thing that happened when an ordinary person went to another world.

Too little [angry], more updates will be added! ! ! !

Very good, I wish I could be more cruel It feels so chaotic. The more I listen, the more chaotic it becomes.

It's pretty good. Is there a female protagonist?

Very suitable for my taste

Beautiful, really beautiful.