Crayon Shin-Chan: I Am Gradually Growing Up

Yes, the dialogue between the characters is quite original. I hope to see more of Xiaoxin Xiaoai's sweetness [blowing kisses] in the future.

It has become more mature and does not have the original taste of Shinnosuke. There is less description in the early stage and more direct dialogues using names. It has the flavor of a dialogue article like a quick storybook. There is no excessive poisonous point for the time being. In short, there is a lot of room for improvement.

The writing is very Xiaoxin-like, and the length of Xiaoai is also large, which also makes up for a lot of regrets, Ame and Delang, Ueio and Kurohime... And it is a constantly developing story. I look forward to Crayon Shin-chan's elementary school, junior high school, and high school. Come on, author, don't give up~

Yysy, the article written by this author has the flavor of Crayon Shin-chan TV series. The plots of many chapters made me feel like I was watching a TV series. He must also be someone who has watched a lot of Crayon Shin-chan. The writing is also very good, and it is obviously written by Zhan Xiaoai, who sent out a lot of sweets. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Five stars is worth it. Among the Crayon Shin-chan novels I have read so far, it can be ranked in the top five I have read. It is very close to the original work and has its own innovations. At the same time, the author listens to readers' suggestions. From this, it can be seen that the author is a true fan of Crayon Shin-chan. The shortcomings are also obvious, that is, the writing style is still a little lacking and not proficient enough. This article is still written by Xinai CP, and the interaction and characters are written to fit the original work. To sum up, Crayon Shin-chan is a book with great potential and worth reading. Rating: five stars!

I hope Xiao Ai can participate in the theater version, it's very well written, keep up the good work

It is a well-written novel, and the character of Xiaoxin is also very well developed. It is exactly the same as in the anime. However, many places are omitted. For example, in the theatrical version of the showdown in time and space, there is no detailed explanation. What is the knot of the five little ones? There are many places like this. If the author doesn't omit these words, I think the rating of this book will be even higher. All in all, it is a very good Crayon Shin-chan book. I highly recommend it to those who are interested in Crayon Shin-chan.

Here it is, I have been reading this book for so long to write a review. This book is really good to read and I really appreciate it. It can be summed up in two words, "comfortable". The characters' speech and behavior are very similar to the original book. It gives people the impression that they are the things they would do. Moreover, the author's writing style is delicate and he has a good control over emotions. , The most important point is that the growth of the characters is also very comfortable, making people feel that this is what they will naturally become. The viewing experience is as smooth as a stream. I have watched it without knowing it, and I have finished it without knowing it. It is as easy as breathing. In short, I will write a novel for the rest of my life, I'm sorry.

Very good way of writing! It's easy to watch... It's just that the update is a bit slow. But slow work makes the difference, just take your time and don't stop. After I saw the latest chapter, I was ready to read it again from the first chapter...

"After reading this article, I couldn't calm down in my heart for a long time. This is probably the most beautiful form of fan creation - not a poor imitation, but a continuation of the soul. The author's portrait of him is exactly the same as in my mind. Time has taken away a lot, but given him a tougher core. Those familiar characteristics have not disappeared, but have become more gentle and powerful under the polish of the years. I can clearly feel every breath and every emotion of the character. He lives in the text so naturally, as if this is the trajectory he should have. The author's writing style is indispensable, it is delicate and not pretentious, and it deeply explores the inner world of the characters, making this "growth" seem so real and believable. Thank you for giving this character the opportunity to grow up, and for giving me a glimpse of his more moving scenery. Please keep working hard and look forward to more miracles from your writing! "

Sashi did appear, but she had very few scenes. The main attraction between her and Xiaoxin is the feeling of a princess and a knight. After all, she has been looking for a tapir with Xiaoxin, and Xiaoxin is that tapir, but Xiao Ai's writing is quite good.

It's great to watch, Xiaoxin and his friends are growing up together. Xiao Ai has always firmly chosen Xiao Xin. It's very heartwarming, but the update is too slow. The latest one has not graduated from elementary school yet, so the author keeps writing~ In the junior high school chapter, I want to see the interaction between Xiaoxin and Lihai University's tennis club. I hope Xiaoxin can bring the victory they deserve to Lihai University~

The best Crayon Shin-chan fic I have seen on Tomato so far. The plot is interesting and the character is restored. The single female protagonist is Xiao Ai.

Who is the heroine of this book? I hope it's Xiao Ai. CP, please give me more candy.

The author holds on

It's good-looking and in line with the original work. It can be regarded as a solution to Xiaoxin's regret that he can't grow up. Moreover, the author and teacher are very perseverant and almost constantly update it. I just don't know why the rating is so low.

Great, is it new love? Is it new love? [Adoration] [Adoration]

The author's writing is really good, but I don't know why there is no traffic. I'm afraid the author won't write anymore. But the author insists on updating every day for 200 days, so it should not be interrupted. He is not afraid of missing, but is afraid of interruption.

It's really rare to see this kind of thing. Whether it's the character, the way of speaking, or the plot, it's all in line with the original work, and the author is also the kind of active author who makes changes when there are problems.

It's very nice. I hope Xiao Ai can join the theatrical version.

Very beautiful, especially in line with the original work

It looks good, and it feels like watching Crayon Shin-chan anime. The author writes it very well.

A very good book, the characters are consistent with the original work, and it also makes up for some of the regrets of the original work.

It must be given a five-star rating. The self-written plot is also very good and the heroine is still Xiao Ai. It just so happens that the other book has been completed a long time ago. It is interesting to read. Come on, author! ! !

The grown-up sequel to Crayon Shin-chan, written by Yoshito Usui.

This is pretty good-looking

Blessed are the New Love Party

It was a little weird at first, but then it was perfect.

It's really good, but there are too few authors, so I finished it in a few days.

It's so beautiful. I hope the author will speed up the update, for example, two chapters a day.