[Gloomy self-esteem, skeleton hedgehog, poor student × angel on the surface, dark and sickly little sun behind the scenes]
[A skeleton and a madman who loves skeletons]
In order to survive, poor student Fan Yu becomes a model for school beauty Wei Yunmi, only to find that he is obsessed with his "dying beauty." In control and resistance, the two girls refine their morbid attachment into true salvation.
The two fell deeper and deeper into temptation and possession - Fanyu longed to be loved, but misunderstood Wei Yunmi's possessiveness as pity; Wei Yunmi was obsessed with her bones, but feared that she would really die of thinness.
When Fanyu discovers that Wei Yunmi's sketchbook is filled with his own dying beauty, and when Wei Yunmi tears away the disguise and exposes his paranoid sincerity, the relationship finally moves towards a dangerous symbiosis:
They are each other's disease, and they are also each other's medicine.
Fanyu knew that Wei Yunmi's tenderness was poison——
When transaction becomes symbiosis, when possessiveness meets desire for survival.
"Wei Yunmi, do you want a work of art or a living person?"
"I want you to grow flesh and blood from your skull."
"Live for me."
(Campus GL+Redemption HE+Dark Sweet Pet)
Reader comments
There are currently 24 chapters in this book, and I have only seen chapter seven. According to the past, if I wanted to write a book review, I would read all the chapters before making an evaluation, but I really can't wait any longer. To say this book is well written is to disrespect it. The entire book contains endless secret pain and sticky emotions between the lines. First-person writing not only enhances the sense of substitution, but also expresses emotions more vividly. I only read 7 chapters but cried no less than 7 times. This kind of delicate love is what I like best. Before reading this book, I had 4 favorite books on my bookshelf. After reading half of it, I only have 2 left. In general, this book is suitable for people who like to experience emotions and feel the charm of the author's words. Big cheers for the author [shy][shy][shy]
I've only seen this so far. One chapter sounds like it's rounded up to 20 minutes. I've probably read around 20 chapters. Needless to say, the writing is good and the other content is novel. I want to talk about the emotional conflicts and attitudes of the two heroines.
First of all, Fern Bar's typical family problems and material problems lead to sensitivity, insecurity and lack of love, so Mi is like a beam of light, adding a bit of warmth to the dark corners. However, in their relationship, now, they are too passive mainly because of their personal emotions and Mi. Sometimes they even only have their own emotions. The right to culture, her inferiority complex is deep in her bones, "I want to chase that inch of sunlight, but if that inch of sunlight shines on other plants, wouldn't it be easier for me to grow than if it shines on other plants?" She deserves better things instead of "me". This even turned into a behavior of hating herself in the early stage, and every sentence was a mockery of herself. Plants that grow under this situation will be more at ease with reality. They will grow even in the dark and humid. Even if they are weak and do not have much nutrients such as inorganic salts, they are at least still alive. Although sometimes you will look back and feel that you are meaningless, but at least you are still alive now, right? And this also satisfies the initial idea, I want to embrace the sunshine, but I still feel it is not necessary. But after getting used to this inch of sunshine, I can't let it go, but there is still an underlying logic that has not changed and I am content with the status quo, so I choose this ambiguous relationship between lovers and friends.
I said if, if this relationship achieves a certain degree of equality on both the material and spiritual levels, this is the so-called two-way redemption. This obviously superior one may be to create conflicts, but it is not the type I like. Ky apologizes, my ideal two-way redemption should be rescuing each other from the quagmire, not one-sided. I have never understood the mind of this character very well, so I still prefer what I said. Ky apologizes^ω^ I think the disease of erosion is very good-looking, and I suggest you check it out (Adachi and Shimamura are also very good-looking, and there is also Tide, which is good once a week)
Then there is Mi. I actually have a strong understanding of this material level. I don't know the character very well. In my impression, it is a Yang angle, and the treatment of emotions is actually quite simple and complicated. How can I put it? Mi's motivation for falling in love with ferns is quite strange to me, because in my impression, this is a portrayal of characters of this class and this kind of experience. There should be a slight sense of numbness. Of course, it's just tonight, and there are personal feelings. Ky apologizes again, perhaps because it is told from the perspective of a fern, which is also a drawback. The emotions of two people cannot be polished at the same time and cannot reflect the inner growth of the character, which will lead to some people being misled. But I think there is no need to think so seriously (dual perspectives tell this) This method is actually quite good (please refer to Adachi and Shimamura for details). Maybe Chinese people can also try it. After all, in my eyes, the dual heroines are not just the emotional entanglement of two girls, but the growth and constant running-in. Let's get back to the topic. Mi's thoughts are both simple and complex. Simply put, it is a very contradictory character thought. Influenced by my mother and so on, and my father, I want to see how to fill the gap for him later. I look forward to it. The feeling I have is, "I like you, and I also admire you at the same time. You have completed your growth and radiated vitality. Even if you are the same skeleton, you are different from her. Every bit of you is different." "It's proof that I want to live, so I like you" is still too empty. Maybe it's because this kind of character doesn't resonate with me, or maybe it's because of the first-person perspective that I can't understand. In fact, I've seen quite a few first-person perspectives, so I don't know how to describe excellence. In short, that's about it.
Then as for the plot, I think these few characters are still too few now, but adding other characters, because the time span is too abrupt, actually I think the biggest way to change this plot is to portray Mi's ideological problems well. Although it is not a novel, I have a good reference manga (anime) (I Will Be You). The main idea is the protagonist's first thought. My suggestion is to add a transfer station like the one inside. Listing is similar to adults educating children. They need guidance. The coffee house in this comic is positioned in this way, and if you know this comic, you will understand its authority in the Lily circle. Its emotional description is also very good. Ky, these are just suggestions based on what I have seen before, and I haven't actually seen much, so if you have better suggestions, just take it for fun (apologies for recommending these things out of nowhere). My thinking is that if you want to make a good work, you should read other good works so that you can make your own work even better (I look forward to everyone discussing with me)
I hope the author will continue to work hard! I accidentally typed more than 1,500 words. I will also be very grateful if you have the patience to read it.
I think it's very interesting. The delicate feelings of the two girls are described. It's so real. I feel a little sour and a little redemptive. I hope the ending won't be be. If it is be, I will die of pain [shy]
When I first started reading it, there were no book reviews. After reading a few chapters, my phone ran out of battery and I forgot to continue reading. It wasn't until yesterday that I remembered to read it.
This book is very beautiful, about the love between girls. The author uses delicate writing style and simplicity to write this book. Anyway, I think it's good. I've always wanted to find a lily novel, but I've never found a suitable one. When I came across this book, the title and introduction suited my taste. Only after watching it did I realize that it is really good-looking.
Come on, author, keep writing!
I have read a lot of articles, and this one is like a tomato with no guaranteed bottom, and it is very interesting.
🍅Why are there so many good meals recently? I feel full and happy after eating them
It's very interesting, and it feels like watching a TV series. Each chapter revolves around the contradictions and conflicts of the protagonist, and the evolving emotional lines connect them together. It's full of useful information. I usually read more than 100 chapters in a night. These 20 chapters directly controlled me for a night.
The author's writing is great [Congratulations] I have read one of the few stories with two campus heroines that I can calm down and read slowly. [I learned it] Wei's character is really a yandere type that I have never seen in campus novels. Although there are conflicts in the early stage, she is still in harmony with Fan Tiantian. From some plots in Chapter 8, it can be seen from the side that the author's artistic quality is quite high [Like] Come on, author, Wei Fan 99
Hmm... How should I put it? The author uses the first-person writing technique to make readers more intuitively feel the inferiority and sensitivity of Fanyu (the protagonist). She is afraid of losing the sunshine, and she feels that she may not be able to hold the ray of light.
The author's writing style is very delicate, and some scenes are described very beautifully, but can he be less sadistic in the later stages? I always feel that Meng is going to cause trouble.
The most delicate and calm writing style among all the two heroines I have come across. All the details are so perfect. It weaves together the two flawed hearts, which is both sick and sweet.
A very good book, you can clearly see the growth of the protagonist, coupled with the author's amazing writing style, the two people are each other's antidote, redeem each other, and grow together. The thoughts hidden in the heart are slowly revealed, which is slightly melancholy but contains passionate feelings. [Like][Like][Like]
It's beautiful, it's beautiful, I'll give it a thumbs up to the author if it's beautiful😭
I rarely read first-person novels. This attempt is very good. The plot is not awkward and the characters' psychological movements are very suitable. The writing is smooth and the literary talent is good. I feel that the author's mind is filled with inspiration.
I really admire the author's writing style
I'll give it a try. The writing is pretty good, but I can't understand the emotional line more and more. Most of the EM plots are filled with contradictions. I personally think it may be a misunderstanding. I apologize in advance. I feel that the emotional tone of each chapter is similar. The general content is also ambiguity + contradiction + explanation + reconciliation. I don't know how many conflicts have arisen between Wei and Fan. There are I'm a bit tired of aesthetics, I hope to advance the plot, and try to pass high school as quickly as possible. It's hard to comment on Meng. Most of Xiao Yu's jealousy comes from her. Wei said before that it would be solved, but I really didn't see anything solved. To be honest, I don't feel that there has been any change. Meng and Wei are still a bit ambiguous, and Xiao Yu is also jealous of her repeatedly [awkward laugh] Let's take some practical measures Wei (personal opinion)
Very nice
"You are the light I chase, but I also want you to always only look at me."
"Just believe without reservation that I will always love you and you will always love me."
It's very well written. I look forward to this story and the rest of their lives [Love][Love]
I like it so much. It's so beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]
Love makes her grow flesh and blood
Highly recommended but if the author doesn't update it you will lose me😡
Two-way redemption between two devastated people [crying] [admiration]
Lily is delicious, and the teacher's writing is good. "Two incomplete souls found the completeness of patchwork in each other."
Very delicate writing style, good at describing sour moods, really good
The writing style is delicate and you can tell that the author is very tasteful. The sentences are written like poetry and the emotional lines are well grasped. You can still write. I really like the setting of such a gloomy low self-esteem puppy and such a delicate and possessive sister. I am so happy.
Very nice, very enjoyable to watch
This schoolbag is very popular, the writing is very good [like][like]
It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone come to see it? It's really great, the writing is great! ! !
T really makes people love and hate her. She makes Xiao Fern become a better person but at the same time, she sometimes has no sense of boundaries for others, and Wei Yunmi's love and control do not allow Xiao Fern to get close to anyone except her (currently, looking at the campus chapter, there seems to be an adult chapter) [laughs]
The writing style is good, the author has a good writing style, and the language in it really taught me what freshness is, and it is vulgar when it should be vulgar.
It's sweet and sad, the author is really good at writing, and it's super beautiful! I was also moved to tears by the redemption article.
The writing is delicate and the emotional description is very good. Recommended
The writing is very delicate, and the young couple is both sadistic and sweet. I don't care about Miyu 99
I can't say that the writing is too good. This is a niche subject and is relatively new. I highly recommend it.
There are currently 24 chapters in this book, and I have only seen chapter seven. According to the past, if I wanted to write a book review, I would read all the chapters before making an evaluation, but I really can't wait any longer. To say this book is well written is to disrespect it. The entire book contains endless secret pain and sticky emotions between the lines. First-person writing not only enhances the sense of substitution, but also expresses emotions more vividly. I only read 7 chapters but cried no less than 7 times. This kind of delicate love is what I like best. Before reading this book, I had 4 favorite books on my bookshelf. After reading half of it, I only have 2 left. In general, this book is suitable for people who like to experience emotions and feel the charm of the author's words. Big cheers for the author [shy][shy][shy]
I've only seen this so far. One chapter sounds like it's rounded up to 20 minutes. I've probably read around 20 chapters. Needless to say, the writing is good and the other content is novel. I want to talk about the emotional conflicts and attitudes of the two heroines. First of all, Fern Bar's typical family problems and material problems lead to sensitivity, insecurity and lack of love, so Mi is like a beam of light, adding a bit of warmth to the dark corners. However, in their relationship, now, they are too passive mainly because of their personal emotions and Mi. Sometimes they even only have their own emotions. The right to culture, her inferiority complex is deep in her bones, "I want to chase that inch of sunlight, but if that inch of sunlight shines on other plants, wouldn't it be easier for me to grow than if it shines on other plants?" She deserves better things instead of "me". This even turned into a behavior of hating herself in the early stage, and every sentence was a mockery of herself. Plants that grow under this situation will be more at ease with reality. They will grow even in the dark and humid. Even if they are weak and do not have much nutrients such as inorganic salts, they are at least still alive. Although sometimes you will look back and feel that you are meaningless, but at least you are still alive now, right? And this also satisfies the initial idea, I want to embrace the sunshine, but I still feel it is not necessary. But after getting used to this inch of sunshine, I can't let it go, but there is still an underlying logic that has not changed and I am content with the status quo, so I choose this ambiguous relationship between lovers and friends. I said if, if this relationship achieves a certain degree of equality on both the material and spiritual levels, this is the so-called two-way redemption. This obviously superior one may be to create conflicts, but it is not the type I like. Ky apologizes, my ideal two-way redemption should be rescuing each other from the quagmire, not one-sided. I have never understood the mind of this character very well, so I still prefer what I said. Ky apologizes^ω^ I think the disease of erosion is very good-looking, and I suggest you check it out (Adachi and Shimamura are also very good-looking, and there is also Tide, which is good once a week) Then there is Mi. I actually have a strong understanding of this material level. I don't know the character very well. In my impression, it is a Yang angle, and the treatment of emotions is actually quite simple and complicated. How can I put it? Mi's motivation for falling in love with ferns is quite strange to me, because in my impression, this is a portrayal of characters of this class and this kind of experience. There should be a slight sense of numbness. Of course, it's just tonight, and there are personal feelings. Ky apologizes again, perhaps because it is told from the perspective of a fern, which is also a drawback. The emotions of two people cannot be polished at the same time and cannot reflect the inner growth of the character, which will lead to some people being misled. But I think there is no need to think so seriously (dual perspectives tell this) This method is actually quite good (please refer to Adachi and Shimamura for details). Maybe Chinese people can also try it. After all, in my eyes, the dual heroines are not just the emotional entanglement of two girls, but the growth and constant running-in. Let's get back to the topic. Mi's thoughts are both simple and complex. Simply put, it is a very contradictory character thought. Influenced by my mother and so on, and my father, I want to see how to fill the gap for him later. I look forward to it. The feeling I have is, "I like you, and I also admire you at the same time. You have completed your growth and radiated vitality. Even if you are the same skeleton, you are different from her. Every bit of you is different." "It's proof that I want to live, so I like you" is still too empty. Maybe it's because this kind of character doesn't resonate with me, or maybe it's because of the first-person perspective that I can't understand. In fact, I've seen quite a few first-person perspectives, so I don't know how to describe excellence. In short, that's about it. Then as for the plot, I think these few characters are still too few now, but adding other characters, because the time span is too abrupt, actually I think the biggest way to change this plot is to portray Mi's ideological problems well. Although it is not a novel, I have a good reference manga (anime) (I Will Be You). The main idea is the protagonist's first thought. My suggestion is to add a transfer station like the one inside. Listing is similar to adults educating children. They need guidance. The coffee house in this comic is positioned in this way, and if you know this comic, you will understand its authority in the Lily circle. Its emotional description is also very good. Ky, these are just suggestions based on what I have seen before, and I haven't actually seen much, so if you have better suggestions, just take it for fun (apologies for recommending these things out of nowhere). My thinking is that if you want to make a good work, you should read other good works so that you can make your own work even better (I look forward to everyone discussing with me) I hope the author will continue to work hard! I accidentally typed more than 1,500 words. I will also be very grateful if you have the patience to read it.
I think it's very interesting. The delicate feelings of the two girls are described. It's so real. I feel a little sour and a little redemptive. I hope the ending won't be be. If it is be, I will die of pain [shy]
When I first started reading it, there were no book reviews. After reading a few chapters, my phone ran out of battery and I forgot to continue reading. It wasn't until yesterday that I remembered to read it. This book is very beautiful, about the love between girls. The author uses delicate writing style and simplicity to write this book. Anyway, I think it's good. I've always wanted to find a lily novel, but I've never found a suitable one. When I came across this book, the title and introduction suited my taste. Only after watching it did I realize that it is really good-looking. Come on, author, keep writing!
I have read a lot of articles, and this one is like a tomato with no guaranteed bottom, and it is very interesting.
🍅Why are there so many good meals recently? I feel full and happy after eating them It's very interesting, and it feels like watching a TV series. Each chapter revolves around the contradictions and conflicts of the protagonist, and the evolving emotional lines connect them together. It's full of useful information. I usually read more than 100 chapters in a night. These 20 chapters directly controlled me for a night.
The author's writing is great [Congratulations] I have read one of the few stories with two campus heroines that I can calm down and read slowly. [I learned it] Wei's character is really a yandere type that I have never seen in campus novels. Although there are conflicts in the early stage, she is still in harmony with Fan Tiantian. From some plots in Chapter 8, it can be seen from the side that the author's artistic quality is quite high [Like] Come on, author, Wei Fan 99
Hmm... How should I put it? The author uses the first-person writing technique to make readers more intuitively feel the inferiority and sensitivity of Fanyu (the protagonist). She is afraid of losing the sunshine, and she feels that she may not be able to hold the ray of light. The author's writing style is very delicate, and some scenes are described very beautifully, but can he be less sadistic in the later stages? I always feel that Meng is going to cause trouble.
The most delicate and calm writing style among all the two heroines I have come across. All the details are so perfect. It weaves together the two flawed hearts, which is both sick and sweet.
A very good book, you can clearly see the growth of the protagonist, coupled with the author's amazing writing style, the two people are each other's antidote, redeem each other, and grow together. The thoughts hidden in the heart are slowly revealed, which is slightly melancholy but contains passionate feelings. [Like][Like][Like]
It's beautiful, it's beautiful, I'll give it a thumbs up to the author if it's beautiful😭
I rarely read first-person novels. This attempt is very good. The plot is not awkward and the characters' psychological movements are very suitable. The writing is smooth and the literary talent is good. I feel that the author's mind is filled with inspiration.
I really admire the author's writing style I'll give it a try. The writing is pretty good, but I can't understand the emotional line more and more. Most of the EM plots are filled with contradictions. I personally think it may be a misunderstanding. I apologize in advance. I feel that the emotional tone of each chapter is similar. The general content is also ambiguity + contradiction + explanation + reconciliation. I don't know how many conflicts have arisen between Wei and Fan. There are I'm a bit tired of aesthetics, I hope to advance the plot, and try to pass high school as quickly as possible. It's hard to comment on Meng. Most of Xiao Yu's jealousy comes from her. Wei said before that it would be solved, but I really didn't see anything solved. To be honest, I don't feel that there has been any change. Meng and Wei are still a bit ambiguous, and Xiao Yu is also jealous of her repeatedly [awkward laugh] Let's take some practical measures Wei (personal opinion)
Very nice "You are the light I chase, but I also want you to always only look at me." "Just believe without reservation that I will always love you and you will always love me." It's very well written. I look forward to this story and the rest of their lives [Love][Love]
I like it so much. It's so beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]
Love makes her grow flesh and blood
Highly recommended but if the author doesn't update it you will lose me😡
Two-way redemption between two devastated people [crying] [admiration]
Lily is delicious, and the teacher's writing is good. "Two incomplete souls found the completeness of patchwork in each other."
Very delicate writing style, good at describing sour moods, really good
The writing style is delicate and you can tell that the author is very tasteful. The sentences are written like poetry and the emotional lines are well grasped. You can still write. I really like the setting of such a gloomy low self-esteem puppy and such a delicate and possessive sister. I am so happy.
Very nice, very enjoyable to watch
This schoolbag is very popular, the writing is very good [like][like] It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone come to see it? It's really great, the writing is great! ! ! T really makes people love and hate her. She makes Xiao Fern become a better person but at the same time, she sometimes has no sense of boundaries for others, and Wei Yunmi's love and control do not allow Xiao Fern to get close to anyone except her (currently, looking at the campus chapter, there seems to be an adult chapter) [laughs]
The writing style is good, the author has a good writing style, and the language in it really taught me what freshness is, and it is vulgar when it should be vulgar.
It's sweet and sad, the author is really good at writing, and it's super beautiful! I was also moved to tears by the redemption article.
The writing is delicate and the emotional description is very good. Recommended
The writing is very delicate, and the young couple is both sadistic and sweet. I don't care about Miyu 99
I can't say that the writing is too good. This is a niche subject and is relatively new. I highly recommend it.
Hahahahahahaha
The writing is very delicate and beautiful