[Invincible + single female protagonist (Tushan Yaya) + no cp removal + alternative to make up for the difficulty + change some settings of the original work to make the plot more reasonable]
Bai Ye, an ox-horse beater, ran a red light because he was about to be late for work. In the process of rushing, he encountered an accident and was taken to the early Bai period by the unknown "boss" of Gaowei Life. At the beginning of the plot, the world of the fox demon matchmaker, and he received the auxiliary golden finger "Reincarnation Simulator"
At this point, Bai Ye started his new life in the world of fox demons.
The reincarnation simulator is only an auxiliary cheat. After the simulation, all Bai Ye can obtain is the talent he chooses. One of them is similar to trying out the talent in advance. The final choice is made based on the results of trying out the talent in the simulation. Choosing the talent cannot directly make Bai Ye stronger in this world, so...
The first life: Bai Ye obtained the talent entry [Number One in the World]. The side effects of the entry prevented Bai Ye from living past the age of 30, but before the age of 30, Bai Ye would definitely become the Number One in the World.
If you know, your life in this life is false.
If you know, your life is in the future.
If you know, you will become very strong in this life.
So, you who are destined to become the best in the world, will you block your life in this life and carve out a way for the future for the sake of future generations, when you have no power and it is extremely difficult to survive in a world surrounded by monsters?
I can
Reader comments
@Grasp a moment of inspiration. The writing is very good, I personally like it better. It would be nice if you could pay attention to the punctuation marks. Some occasional minor problems are acceptable, but
Here is a section of Chapter 36
It seems that there is no difference between you Tushan 1 and Aolai Kingdom 1, they are both 1, so insincere, that is, you say 1 that you want to help us 1, retrieve our memories, let us gain 1, the power to resist the Aolai Kingdom, but in reality 1, I don't know what you think.
Punctuation marks plus numbers mean that there is no need to add punctuation marks here. This way, listening to the book will be smoother.
The simulation is well written and the timeline is displayed well, but there are no quotation marks, which makes the plot feel too alienated. There is no so-called golden elixir system, but a re-innovation based on the fox demon system, demonstrated through various arguments. The protagonist is the best in the world in his first life, his emotional line is in his second life, and his reality line reaches the Tushan Grand Theater. He does not lick Aolaiguo and directly removes his waistcoat. He does not force Bai Wang and Bai Wang to reminisce about their relationship, but looks at the memory from a third perspective to find the truth. Except for the short word count, this is a good book.
Before I didn't have the strength, I was submissive. Now that I have the strength, I won't eat beef.
I finally added the quotation marks. It's really fun to read, but the number of words is short and the protagonist hasn't woken up. It's not quite cool yet. I hope the protagonist doesn't lose the B-square.
The third follow-up comment: Open high and go low, pull a big one
I particularly like it. Finally, someone is suppressing Na Mo (only referring to the fox demon). The fox demons I watched before were either plotted by Na Mo or cooperated with Na Mo. Finally, someone wrote about Na Mo.
It's very nice, but there's a bit too much nonsense at the front.
The author wants to write an ending that the author likes and increase the plausibility of the story, but due to insufficient writing, it may be a bit nondescript🤔.
(So, if there are any points that need to be paid attention to during the story, I hope that the masters will give you more guidance and we can make progress together)
In addition, due to insufficient writing, the book may be updated slowly, but it will definitely not be unfinished or discontinued. [Working on draft]
In addition, for a new author who is writing a novel for the first time, is there a possibility that the author is very "ignorant". The so-called slanderous remarks must first be "knowledgeable" before being slanderous. Please don't be too self-righteous, because the author does not even understand what you are talking about.
In the end, progress is always slow. The author can only take it step by step, first improving the writing style, and then after the story is finished, go back and correct the previous mistakes of insufficient writing.
How should I put it? This book is a bit similar to a narration book. The only drawback is that the writing at the beginning may not be very good, but the writing at the end is better.
I really like this novel
Not bad, just can I get the pronouns and punctuation right?
That's it [laughs]
It was so beautiful, but it disappeared at the most critical moment, snap, it was almost gone [crying]
The writing is very good and highly recommended, but there are a few pictures that I still can't understand.
The plot at the end is still very interesting, but there is too much analysis at the beginning. You can skip it without affecting the overall look and feel.
Not bad, pretty good-looking
Not bad, great idea.
Okay, okay, no need to say more
It's good to watch. Except for the part after the protagonist's simulation, the rest of the plot seems to be very enjoyable after watching it [Love]
Interesting thoughts and great ones!
Although I watched the front part for a long time and it didn't look good, the back part is definitely very good and it's so cool ૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა
I can only say that the author's thoughts are 666. This novel is very nice. I hope the author will continue to update it and it will get better and better in the future.
@Grasp a moment of inspiration. The writing is very good, I personally like it better. It would be nice if you could pay attention to the punctuation marks. Some occasional minor problems are acceptable, but Here is a section of Chapter 36 It seems that there is no difference between you Tushan 1 and Aolai Kingdom 1, they are both 1, so insincere, that is, you say 1 that you want to help us 1, retrieve our memories, let us gain 1, the power to resist the Aolai Kingdom, but in reality 1, I don't know what you think. Punctuation marks plus numbers mean that there is no need to add punctuation marks here. This way, listening to the book will be smoother.
The simulation is well written and the timeline is displayed well, but there are no quotation marks, which makes the plot feel too alienated. There is no so-called golden elixir system, but a re-innovation based on the fox demon system, demonstrated through various arguments. The protagonist is the best in the world in his first life, his emotional line is in his second life, and his reality line reaches the Tushan Grand Theater. He does not lick Aolaiguo and directly removes his waistcoat. He does not force Bai Wang and Bai Wang to reminisce about their relationship, but looks at the memory from a third perspective to find the truth. Except for the short word count, this is a good book. Before I didn't have the strength, I was submissive. Now that I have the strength, I won't eat beef. I finally added the quotation marks. It's really fun to read, but the number of words is short and the protagonist hasn't woken up. It's not quite cool yet. I hope the protagonist doesn't lose the B-square. The third follow-up comment: Open high and go low, pull a big one
I particularly like it. Finally, someone is suppressing Na Mo (only referring to the fox demon). The fox demons I watched before were either plotted by Na Mo or cooperated with Na Mo. Finally, someone wrote about Na Mo.
It's very nice, but there's a bit too much nonsense at the front.
The author wants to write an ending that the author likes and increase the plausibility of the story, but due to insufficient writing, it may be a bit nondescript🤔. (So, if there are any points that need to be paid attention to during the story, I hope that the masters will give you more guidance and we can make progress together) In addition, due to insufficient writing, the book may be updated slowly, but it will definitely not be unfinished or discontinued. [Working on draft] In addition, for a new author who is writing a novel for the first time, is there a possibility that the author is very "ignorant". The so-called slanderous remarks must first be "knowledgeable" before being slanderous. Please don't be too self-righteous, because the author does not even understand what you are talking about. In the end, progress is always slow. The author can only take it step by step, first improving the writing style, and then after the story is finished, go back and correct the previous mistakes of insufficient writing.
How should I put it? This book is a bit similar to a narration book. The only drawback is that the writing at the beginning may not be very good, but the writing at the end is better.
I really like this novel
Not bad, just can I get the pronouns and punctuation right? That's it [laughs]
It was so beautiful, but it disappeared at the most critical moment, snap, it was almost gone [crying]
The writing is very good and highly recommended, but there are a few pictures that I still can't understand.
The plot at the end is still very interesting, but there is too much analysis at the beginning. You can skip it without affecting the overall look and feel.
Not bad, pretty good-looking
Not bad, great idea.
Okay, okay, no need to say more
It's good to watch. Except for the part after the protagonist's simulation, the rest of the plot seems to be very enjoyable after watching it [Love]
Interesting thoughts and great ones!
Although I watched the front part for a long time and it didn't look good, the back part is definitely very good and it's so cool ૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა
I can only say that the author's thoughts are 666. This novel is very nice. I hope the author will continue to update it and it will get better and better in the future.