Crazy Criticizes the Villain for Doting on Me Like a Treasure, but the Male Protagonist Regrets It

If you like deputy CP, it is still worth a look. After reading more than 70 chapters, the interaction between the secondary CP and the main CP is about 50/50 (actually, I think the secondary CP far exceeds the main CP). In terms of characterization, the supporting characters are still relatively three-dimensional. Of course, the deputy CP is also a highlight for me. After all, I came here to be a heartthrob, but the main CP didn't make much progress, and the secondary CP only had a lot of descriptions. Not to mention that now, the supporting characters have more descriptions than the protagonist, which is really a bit uncomfortable. The protagonist is really a bit controllable. I hope the author can describe and shape the protagonist more. Furthermore, I personally think that with so many descriptions of supporting characters, it would be better for the author to mark "partial group portrait" and "sub-CP". After all, some people don't like to see sub-CPs in heartthrobs (I'm okay, if it is pointed out, I can accept it, but if it is not pointed out, it will be quite uncomfortable when I see it. I am originally here for the protagonist) The author's writing is quite good, and the above is also based on my subjective opinion after reading this book. Some people don't like it, and some people like it. If you like this one, it's worth a look [laughs] It's really uncomfortable, and it's not like I've never seen a growth story, but everyone says it's a heartthrob, and it's a slap in the face. The protagonist has no highlights, and the supporting roles are constantly highlighted. Let's not talk about the secondary CP in the heartthrob. Let's just say that the secondary CP is at least two-thirds of the 80 chapters I've read. It takes the spotlight. I didn't really want to comment at first, but I really like the writing, and I also like the worldview that has been revealed so far. However, the description of the supporting characters is too uncomfortable. I stayed up late yesterday and read a lot, and I read a few more when I woke up at noon. I felt heartbroken. I stayed up late these days looking for articles, and they all gave me the final hit [Sadness]. You wrote a sub-CP, and there is a lot of early descriptions. Can you click on it in the copywriting? I really saw it, and it wouldn't be as uncomfortable as it is now. I slept in the middle, and the supporting characters jumped out to tell me in my dream that he has become the protagonist, and our protagonist's baby is so good, why is it like this [sad] I have a strong subjective intention to write a review, and dropped one star, just to make my heart feel right. After all, the author was very right with me in the description of the second grade. Coupled with the copywriting filter, four stars are the best [almost crying]

I feel like I could write more about the protagonist. So far, the character of the deputy CP is fuller and more vivid. The protagonist gives me the feeling that he is a silent worker, helping with upgrades, storage, and medical treatment. Others only help the protagonist with one fight. A kind-hearted stranger can help another stranger fight. The protagonist's contribution is more than the reward. As for whether they can take away all the material without the protagonist is a question. Then the main character's plot is mostly complained in his heart, hoping that he can have more plot. The same goes for the attack. The attack's plot is not as much as that of the deputy attacker. His plot is the same as that of the protagonist. The part with more plot is to help the two deputy CPs and the protagonist's survival skills. There is basically no other plot description [face covering] I hope that the character of the main CP can be like the deputy CP, using those emergencies, fights, and face-slapping plots to express them, rather than in daily life [face covering] [shy] This is just a personal opinion, if you don't like it, please don't comment [Sending my heart]

First of all, I really like this novel and stayed up late to watch the updates. But I think there are some small problems. Is the protagonist's writing a bit too little? Except for the slap-in-the-face plot at the beginning of the novel, which is dominated by Jiang Yan, later on it is either Shen Jingmo's trio or Lu Chenzhou, Jiang Wei and others, and it feels like Jiang Yan's main role in the four-person team is to collect and collect. Jiang Yan, the four-person team, does not have much communication with them. Although it can highlight the protagonist's golden finger, it really gives readers the feeling that the protagonist is just a tool in their eyes to collect props. Let's talk about the deputy CP. Although I'm very frustrated with them today. If it were written as a separate novel, I would definitely like it. However, as the deputy CP, he takes up too much text. I believe this should also be a lightning point for many people. Although, I still like this novel very much and will keep following it. The author would like to give you a lot of encouragement and update it [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's good to watch, but there are too many sub-CP scenes, which affects the main perception a bit, and then some of the plots are awkward and a bit unbearable. The main CP is still very good.

Oh my gosh, this is so pretty. I thought I would give it a try, but the more I looked at it, the more I liked it. The author is great. The characters in the article are very three-dimensional. The most important thing is that no character has collapsed so far. This is a good point. I hope the author can keep high. By the way, as for the characters of the protagonists, I can only say that they are impeccable and they are very principled in doing things. To be more specific, there is too much to say and it is difficult to expand on it. I can only express my attitude again: I really like the characters you write. I hope the author can insist on updating two chapters every day. Of course, it would be even better if he could add a few more chapters every day.

This book is well written. I was attracted by the introduction. After reading the first few chapters, I felt good about it and kept reading. Then I was immersed in it and started reading straight away. I used to skip reading a lot of apocalyptic novels, but I patiently read every chapter of this book. Although the rhythm of the plot is very slow, I really like the rhythm of the author's writing, and I was attracted into the text as I read it. However, the primary and secondary CP of this article is indeed that the secondary CP takes up more space than the main CP, but I am not too surprised. After I tied it so far, the plot is really great, I like it very much, and I feel that this article is still quite group-based, focusing on the growth and upgrading of Jiang, Shen, Zhou, and Fang in the end of the world. Then I also like the author's description of other characters, which makes the characters more full, so this book is really good, so the author, come on, keep writing (but you must also pay attention to your health) [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

The author is great. I like this novel "Flying Kiss" very much. The transition in the early stage is very good. The relationship between the main CP is not like other novels that inexplicably and quickly fall in love with each other. Instead, it changes little by little. The secondary CP is also very easy to understand. But I think there are some shortcomings: too much writing about Fang, and sometimes I really feel that Fang is more of a protagonist than Jiang (especially after awakening his powers) Let me mention it again: This novel is really good! ! ! [Shy] The author must not abandon updates! [Almost crying]

It's beautiful and the characters are all cute. But the protagonist gave me a feeling that he just has a name,

First of all, it looks great! [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]. However, the author needs to be more clear about the primary and secondary CP, or make the four-person team the protagonist, otherwise it will be easy to be criticized. But it's so pretty! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The plot is very novel. If you like watching the end of the world, you can pick it up. Compared with the novel where the supernatural power is awakened inexplicably at the beginning, this book has a good sense of logic. What happens in the beginning and what happens next will lead to the result. The rendering is very nice and interesting. Not obtrusive

Very nice! ! The author greatly appreciates the update! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Send a heart] But I hope that the author can spend more ink on the main cp at his original pace [sending my heart] (that is, he mainly focuses on the main cp, and I feel that the sub-cp has a lot more pen and ink than the main cp...) What I mean is that the main readers are attracted by the main cp and the plot after reading the introduction, so the first thing readers want to read is the main cp. It would be better to write about the main cp with key words [blowing kiss] [sending my heart] I really like this book [sending my heart]

It looks great. Eschatology The writing style is relatively unique, and the description of the characters' language and details is very complete. At first, I felt a bit slow in reading, but I have a but! I usually read plots such as the outbreak of the apocalypse, the acquisition of supernatural powers, etc., Which can be summarized in one or two chapters. The author of this book describes the specific causes, processes, etc. In great detail, but it does not appear to be lengthy. The more you read, the more you will gain stamina, and you will gradually become addicted to the plot, and the content is attractive. Everyone will understand if you insist on reading to the end, it is a mind-blowing feeling, it is beautiful.

The plot is interesting and novel, and it's the beginning of a doomsday novel. The main character's own system has glitches. I stocked up on space in advance, stocked up on a lot of things, and used the counterattack value draw to get good things. Next comes the awakening of superpowers. This world view spans a huge span, and it's all written about the awakening of the divine fragment. The awakening of the deputy CP does not go smoothly, and the protagonist cheats and gives them things to upgrade, and heals them to help them overcome difficulties and awaken top-notch abilities. You don't have to be the strongest, but you can't just be a tool. For now, the secondary CP has more descriptions and plots and has stronger abilities than the main CP. This may be because it is weak in the early stages, but it may become stronger later on.

It's amazing, it's amazing, it's so good. It's different from what I've seen before. It's so attractive. I have a strong desire to watch it. The relationship between the protagonists is also very exciting. In short, it's good-looking (๑•.•๑). Please update.

It's very interesting to watch, and the interaction between Fang Lanxing and Zhou Zhuoye is interesting and hilarious. I thought they had a good rivalry with each other before. After reading the latest chapter, I felt that there was something interesting about it. I hope the author doesn't write about this couple as deputy CPs.

The first part was very interesting, but when I got to the second part, I felt that too many settings were added, which made the game look fragmented. The world view was too big, and many plots felt strange, completely different from the emotions I felt in the early stages. I think Dada can just follow the previous instructions and write a post-apocalyptic novel. The setting will make it exciting for us to watch, but too many settings will deviate from the original feeling. However, Dada's literary talent is still very good, and the male protagonist's character is very good. I still like Dada and Dada's novels very much, and will support Dada.

The overall feeling is okay, but the content of the story is a bit ink in some places. It is recommended to skip and read [star] [star]

The author is great. I have read more than 300 chapters from one chapter. I really like it very much. Can the author be updated? I really beg you, I really like this novel (›´ω`‹). I like the story in it very much. I hope you will update it more. Thank you very much [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's very interesting. Those who like rebirth literature and doomsday zombies can give it a look. I hope Jiang Yan will wake up soon and get together with Shen Jingmo soon. I also hope that our Fang Lanxing and Zhou Zhuoye will be happy.

Nice. This book was exactly what I imagined. At first I thought it was through a book, and that it was a soul sacrifice from the original owner. Green tea is rebirth. The male protagonist is wearing a book. When I saw Soul Sacrifice, I wondered if the protagonist might be some kind of god who summoned him. It turned out to be true. Two pairs of CP. A couple, childhood sweethearts, and a bright, cheerful, careless, talkative treasure. A man of few words and self-protective. She seems impatient but is actually very loving. The other pair, the overbearing yandere is strong in the field

It's pretty good to watch, the plot is very interesting, and there's a big picture in it, but it's a pity that it's a bit slow. The only shortcoming is that it's not over yet [crying] I hope the author will work hard to write the words as soon as possible [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

There are too many descriptions of the secondary CP. It feels like the main CP appears for a short period of time but consumes a lot of mana bars. It gives me a feeling that the protagonist's strength is just to set off who is stronger. Even so, the author is still very detailed in describing aspects such as clothes and demeanor.

It's so good, but it's a new book and I can't get enough of it ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

This novel is really beautiful, with a compact plot, vivid characters, and every page is full of unexpected twists and turns. The protagonist's growth process is moving. From the initial confusion to the final determination, every choice tugs at the readers' heartstrings. The world described by the author is so lifelike, and the details are so delicate that it makes people smell the fragrance of the earth after the rain and feel the dappled light and shadow of the sun shining through the leaves. The supporting characters are equally brilliant, and their story lines are intertwined with the main plot, adding a rich sense of layering to the entire story. The setting for suspense is just right and people really like it. I really like these CPs, but I hope that the ancient actor also has a CP. I don't like his involvement in Jiang Yan and Shen Jingmo. But overall I still like it very much, and I sincerely recommend [adoration][adoration][adoration] I've already read it in other software

After seeing Chapter 130, it's tied. My evaluation is: Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! But I want to protect some friends from lightning, because my classmate is like this. The following is not a purely apocalyptic novel, it involves the godhead plane and the like, the world view is relatively large, but the writing is very good, and the writing skills are also good, so I am very hungry, begging for food!

It's okay. Overall, after watching it, I feel that the deputy CP has more scenes than the main CP.

It's so good, I still want to see it, but it's not enough. When did Jiang Yan realize that Shen Jingmo likes him? I'm really worried about them [crazy][crazy]. When will Fang Lanxing find Fang's mother? There was some news, but I missed it again. I'm really worried about them [crazy][crazy]

It looks good and I love to read and write more. The author is great [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

It's very interesting because I've basically never finished reading a book, but this one is one of the few that I've finished. Although it's still being serialized, I've already read the latest chapter. I love the main and secondary CP characters. I really like this type of article, but I haven't found it. Now I have found it. I look forward to the author's big update [Blow kiss]

It was the first time I read a post-apocalyptic literature with two male protagonists, and it turned out that they were two strong characters [love]! ! ! Jiang Yan comes with his own system! ! When I saw it, the four of them were so handsome. Shen Jingmo, you have found a treasure! ! The other pair of cps are also very good [blowing kiss] I like to read, love to read, I hope the author will update more chapters [laughing]