Xiaoyao************

The beginning of the game is very weird. The person who cultivates immortality comes up with two whips. I was stunned for a while. The five spiritual roots cannot be cultivated. And then it goes through so much. It makes people speechless and embarrassing. I just read the beginning and the first three chapters. I have no right to comment, so I will just express my complaints.

Are you writing about the exercises? It makes me feel uncomfortable and irritable.

This book is a novel focusing on leisure farming and cultivating immortals. The description of life details is quite interesting, especially the food. The emotional processing between the characters is relatively delicate. It gives you a soothing feeling after reading it. There are few plots of conspiracy and killing. If you are tired of fighting and killing, you can read it!

I've only read a few chapters, and I think it's not good! Also, you have to write the name of each chapter in a jingle. Do you want to take the postgraduate entrance examination?

Literary talent is relatively good. Reading the book felt very depressing.

The writing is the same as the memorials written by ancient ministers. After reading a thousand words, only two sentences are the content.

Beautiful writing, edible, excellent work

Well written but too boring to read

The first few chapters are pretty good, but I hope the author can break them into sections so that more people can read them.

Writing novels about cultivating immortals does not mean that your writing style should be delicate so that people will not be able to read it. If it is too delicate, the composition will not be attractive. A good work can only be rough and detailed!

Too lonely?

Where are you free? This is simply dark cultivation

I felt very irritated and had no desire to continue reading.

To be honest, I felt a little uncomfortable after reading a few pages. There was too much nonsense.

There are too many modifying words, and there is no sense of substitution.

I'm tired of reading classical Chinese.

Savor it carefully and you will have a different experience

Ok ok listen

I'm a low-culture person and can't understand.

This book is too tiring to read, the text is chewy and the paragraph layout is unreasonable