The End of the World: After Turning into a Girl, She Was Criticized by Crazy People as a Yandere and Turned into a Loving Wife

Like other novels, it was not given away by a yandere trick. Instead, you can clearly understand that it is the CPU itself, full marks. Gradually like each other through posting, full marks. I want to see the knife [full] Jiang Li's desire for control was a bit too strong, and he was a bit suffocated. It feels like Xiao Ning has no possibility of counterattack as she becomes stronger. Now it is basically in vain. Even if she wants to cure Jiang Li, she is still being led around due to soft-heartedness or other reasons. I feel that my already worrying IQ is even more in danger after falling in love. You can't beat it, you can't cheat it, it's just a fragrant and soft little cake.

Add a long comment. The character design of Xiao Ning is indeed very good, but it seems to have grown too quickly compared to the previous stage. The portrayal of Xiao Ning seems a bit superhuman. I feel that the author sometimes cares too much about Jiang's psychological problems and ignores Xiao Ning's problems. Xiao Ning has been reincarnated a hundred times and her mental state is basically crazy. It is understandable that she wants to hide it from Jiang to prevent her from worrying, but the portrayal is too strange. After hugging her for a while, she will be fine. Xiao Ning's later portrayal is like a superman, both emotionally and in terms of solving apocalyptic crises. This makes it seem like Jiang is really useless other than unlocking weapons and being a tool. A good relationship must be one where both parties are equal and pay roughly the same amount. At present, I personally feel that Xiao Ning's contribution to Jiang is greater than Jiang's contribution to Xiao Ning. It must be correct to straighten out the emotional relationship between the two, but it cannot be solved by deliberately concealing or changing the problem. It requires sincerity and behavior. The author really wanted to portray and solve Jiang's psychological yandere problem, but he ignored Xiao Ning's psychological aspect too much. And to be honest, there is no need to emphasize Jiang's yandere problem all the time. Xiao Ning's understanding and strategies for yandere are the best I have ever seen. I hope Jiang can be kinder to Xiao Ning.

This kind of novel still needs to be written by a female author. The emotional details are quite delicate. If it is written by a male author, the first chapter will be subdued and the second chapter will be exciting [face covering] I'm halfway through the book. The female author should stop writing it. I feel like the author forgot that the heroine's soul is male halfway through the book. I suggest deleting all the descriptions about the male protagonist in the first chapter. It won't affect the reading at all. When I read it, I thought it was the heroine's soul that has come back [face covering]

When I first read it, I felt that the writing style was a bit poor and there were less detailed descriptions. But the more I saw the author's descriptions of details more and more, they became better and better. The characters were more three-dimensional and the emotions were more delicate. It can be seen that the author has made great progress. This is very good.

If the author didn't plan to write about knives, I think this must be a very good book. It seems to be an apocalyptic novel, but in fact it is a post-apocalyptic book. There is no Holy Mother and no thunder points. The painting style is warm and pleasant (at least it is like this now [smile]). Although I don't know what the author thinks, I think it is better to use less knife. As long as I am not allowed to eat the knife, this book should be one of the best apocalyptic books I have seen in recent times [Like]

It's a very good book. I haven't read the setting yet. This alone is enough to give it five stars. I like the content. The apocalyptic theme is very good at extending the life of this short-lived novel, but has it really been more than a month since it has more than 100 chapters? It feels like the pace is both fast and slow. I guess there are more than 200 chapters left until the end. I'm following it. In the end, I really wasn't

Wow [Love] [Love] [Love] This book is so good [laughs] It's almost 7 stars [Salute] In the book, you can see the battle of wits and courage between the protagonist and the heroine [laughing] It's a good book among online game novels [Like] It's a very typical fantasy novel [crazy] and a bit technological [exploration] Well, yes. Please remove the brackets when sending comments. Do not delete a block of each comment. This kind of good book should be enjoyed by me alone.

It's very interesting and novel. Kudos to the author.

Not bad The characters are well-drawn and the emotional lines are well developed. The current viewing experience is very good, but it has not yet passed the 100th chapter, and the only flaw is that the world view is not very complete. So first give me a five-star encouragement ([Please give me more updates][Please give me more updates])

It's so impressive. I saw a lot of the author's shadow in the book. The author's bookshelf is also full. If I say why I didn't rank 9, it might be because it was the author's first time writing a book. There were indeed some surprises and awkwardness in the plot at the beginning, but he became obviously better at the end. Personally. If the plot arrangement of some swords is properly written, the plot arrangement may be better, and the score may be higher (Mr. Meng's "The Knife" is very good). I personally feel that if the writing style and concept are not particularly good and reach a first-rate level, it will be difficult to get a high score, but it must be He. I'll give you a good review first and then add more later (I want to see the education and training)

Don't worry, it looks good, HE, most of it is candy, but there are relatively few knives. Jiang Li and Xiao Ning's mutual strategies and transformations are well written and detailed. The main plot is not procrastinating and is very unique. The world view is well constructed and interesting, and the side plot is also very attractive. In terms of character description, Jiang Li's yandere mentality is well displayed. In addition, the author is really good at using modal particles to make Xiao Ning cute and enrich the character image. Of course, you can also see interesting book friends "interpret" these modal particles, which is very interesting. Well... Except for the rushed ending, there are basically no problems. I highly recommend it. Oh, by the way, I haven't read Chengtao's Tomato Phenomenon article yet. There are already cases where I read Chengtao first and then read other articles that are boring. Please enter the trap according to your own actual situation [laughs]

The contrast between Jiang Li's crazy and affectionate character and Yun Xiaoning's cuteness and timidity is full of contrast. The bond between the two in the apocalypse is both sweet and cruel. It was heart-wrenching and addictive to read throughout, and I couldn't stop at all. The plot is full of tension, Jiang Lihu Ning's ultimate love, the pure bond of two-way running, wrapped in the thrill of the apocalypse, the stamina is so great that when you close the book, your mind is filled with the two of them. The characters are vivid to the extreme. Jiang Li's cruelty is only towards others, but his gentleness is given to Yun Xiaoning. The two-way dependence and protection make people's hearts soften. It is a treasure novel that gets better and better the more you read. No more talking, I'm going to watch it again from the beginning. Finished spreading flowers! ! ! [Love]

It's also the end of the story, I'm glad it's over, I'm glad it's not finished yet, but life can't stop. There's so much love in the world, it's attracted countless heroes to bow down. Hahahahaha, I'll finish it early and go to the next yandere novel. If I finish this one, it will be the first one I've read since I returned to being a bookworm. It's the first time [laughing]

It's pretty good. The emotional line of the work is quite detailed. Although the subject matter and content are relatively old-fashioned, it is still very novel compared with other similar genres. If it were written by someone else, Yun Xiaoning can go beyond 5 chapters without being teased. That's [like]. Anyway, the overall plot is quite coherent and interesting, but the most important thing is that I like loli.

It's very good. The plots are connected smoothly and there are no big surprises. The plot is well written, especially the tree roots section, which is my personal favorite. Whether it's the foreshadowing of the missing lemon in the front, or the fact that Xiao Ning abandons Jiang Li and chooses to pay for more than 140 crystals later. I feel that this is a very important highlight for Xiao Ning, and it also completely establishes his character here. I even think it's cute. It can be said that this paragraph is the highlight of this character in the whole book, but I personally read it for the theme of yandere, and Jiang Li felt a little bit sick to me. I think he was a bit too gentle towards Xiao Ning. In fact, I was quite curious about Gou Xiaoning, but it was a pity that the author didn't write it. Overall, the plot was very good, but the yandere feeling was a bit lacking. If it is for the setting and plot, it is still highly recommended.

First of all, this is a very popular subject, but the author is different from others and the plot is very rigorous. The author is very knowledgeable, and I can see that the author thinks very carefully. It can mainly be expressed in the interactive dialogue between the two people. Of course, the plot direction is also important. The second thing is that the author has thought about the plot of the timeline for a long time, probably since the beginning of the book. The author tells us that we must have strong perseverance and not give in to others. He also tells us that... People cannot pursue perfection excessively. He profoundly exposed the contradictions of human nature. Finally, the redemption told by the author is also an indispensable part of this book. From the distortion of the heart to normality, from master and servant to equality, this also adds strength, unyielding, and perseverance. Disadvantages of this book: The emotions still need to be improved, the emotions are not too sincere, and more other methods can be used. The shortcomings of this book are also advantages: yes, it is the poisonous points. Some points will make people feel good. Readers will stay and think this book is better. Some points will make some readers leave directly. Old authors will try their best to avoid these, believing that his writing style can retain all readers. But this is the author's way of writing, and I can better understand the author's painstaking efforts on this book. Overall: a very good book, worth reading. The entire plot is laid out layer by layer, and an apocalyptic novel unfolds around the redemption of the two girls. This is not a routine article, the author has his own ideas. Finally, if the author sees it, I would like to say: Yes, you must have your own ideas, and if you love, love deeply. Let me first talk about the biggest flaw in this novel, and then talk about my feelings. That's right, 21 days for 300 chapters and one week for 100 chapters can't make the yandere's disease disappear at all. I recommend three months here. If you have enough time, you can also add more. Two days or three days later, I can finish writing easily. I even feel that the time inside the roots is longer than outside. It is even said that Jiang Li will have to wait 10 years. This... I have only known the heroine for 21 days. Of course, the novel is finished. Woo woo XX I felt really sad when I finished reading The follow-up of raising a daughter, the human base, and a lot of follow-ups are covered in one chapter. I feel an inexplicable sense of disparity in my heart. After I read a few more key points, it became even stronger. Alas, this is the only novel I haven't skipped through a chapter. The image of the protagonist in the novel is really well shaped, especially Xiao Ning, who has characteristics, a bottom line, and a sense of self. But to be honest, the two of them have only met for two months. But I will refresh the screen again Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful, Yun Xiaoning Jiangli is so beautiful.

It's so beautiful, I almost want to take off [adoration][adoration][adoration]

I highly approve of the fact that after the protagonist falls in love with the heroine, he insists on transforming the heroine, insists on giving trust to the heroine, and uses this plot to derive various exciting gameplay. The two female protagonists, as lone wolves, reduce the messy interactions between people in common post-apocalyptic literature, and downplay commonplace topics such as pretentiousness and the darkness of human nature. The focus is on the emotional interaction and ability improvement between the protagonist and the heroine. The rhythm is tighter and more enjoyable to watch. All in all, it's really cool. Although there are also yanderes, the symptoms are not as severe as they appear. However, there were some parts that were uncomfortable to watch. The last paragraph at the end, clearing out Crazy Little Ning, made me jump to read it.

Looks good, update soon, I want to see the next development of Kou Ya! [Anger]

I had to pay to read this book, and although it was silly in places, most of the plot's development paths made sense, and the ways in which problems arose and how they were resolved were not obtrusive. The daily clips are very cute, the main plot is logically self-consistent, the advancement speed is appropriate, and the book is of moderate length. The relationship between the protagonists is very cute, and there is a certain amount of knives, but first of all, it is not mindless abuse, and secondly, the number is not as much as sugar, and it is refreshing. Although the portrayal of the supporting characters is a bit toxic, overall it is excellent, and the characters have distinct personalities. In order to avoid spoilers, I will leave it in suspense and won't go into details. There is no villain throughout the whole story, but many times when I see the sad parts, I still want to strangle all the current enemies to death ㅠㅠ Personally, I think the best thing about the story is the protagonist's character growth during the development of the plot. At the beginning, both people have their own shortcomings, whether they are too cold or too weak, but in the end, the cold person is willing to show his fragile side, and the weak person is willing to be strong for her. It is a very comfortable growth curve. Overall, the five stars are worth it. As long as you don't hate the subject, you can give it a try. I choose to read the author's new book as soon as possible. Come on, author [sending heartfelt wishes] A good story has a strong sense of involvement, just like when I brought two people together, it's very satisfying [laughing]

Come on! It would be nice if I could write better. Come on! Author[Like][Like][Like] Come on, [like][like][like][like]

It's been a long time since I've seen two post-apocalyptic heroines with such an appetite. The writing is on point and the worldview does not collapse. The most rare thing is that the bond between the two heroines is written delicately and powerfully - it is not attachment, but equality, trust and living together. The apocalyptic atmosphere is full of dangers, but as long as they are side by side, everything feels hopeful. The emotions are delicate and not obtrusive, the plot is entertaining enough to make you cry, and there are no flaws throughout. I sincerely recommend it with five stars!

I've almost finished reading it, let's give a brief review. (Some spoilers are not plot summary, just my thoughts) Personally, I feel that the first half of the plot is the kind of yandere novel that "treats the protagonist (Yun) as a toy" (I personally feel that this kind of novel becomes very depressing when it gets longer, so I rarely read it, but luckily I couldn't bear to read this one). Later, Yun (the time-travel protagonist) realizes that something is wrong with her relationship with Jiang (the heroine of the original world): Yun truly loves Jiang, but Jiang treats Yun as a toy. So Yun began to think of ways to change Jiang's distorted thoughts, and of course he succeeded in the end. Jiang came out because of Yun (but Yun seemed to be a bit tuned?). The two finally got together happily (of course, there were two other couples as well). Maybe I haven't watched enough, but anyway, this is the first time I've seen a yandere being corrected hh (it's also the first time I've seen someone choose to correct a yandere instead of running away and being caught in a small dark room), and it feels quite fresh. The main plot is set in the end of the world, but the plot is a bit like "The Beginning of the Street Stall Sales Dali". What I am talking about is the kind of closed loop with multiple storylines (this analogy may be easier to understand). The multi-line plot runs throughout. The last time I saw it was in "There's Something Not Quite About the Heroine" hh. Of course, since there are multiple story lines, knives are definitely indispensable. Those who can't bear the knife remember to watch with caution. The author made Yun Zhi 147 times with his strength. I feel heartbroken [crying]

Five stars, a relatively good-looking novel. Although I am not a fan of apocalyptic novels, I can feel that it is very well written. The heroine was beaten to pieces by the heroine. The details of the plot are well handled. There is no obvious conflict. I will give you a little spoiler. 10 Minutes. Meow

First of all, I should be a relatively late reader who came across this book. I originally learned about the author from 🍍's AI Mogai article on dy, and I followed the trend and paid attention to this novel (it's better to supplement the book than to follow ❛˓◞˂̵✧) What stood out to me the most was the setting of 100 cycles Even if I write about choices and loops for a living, I think it's good. A backpack that can jump out of the loop, death and rebirth with the heart removed are all good settings. The emotional description of Xiao Ning's escape from the loop makes me feel the same way (I really felt it when I saw Xiao Ning realize that she can use her backpack to fix the bug). It makes my back shiver) But it's a little unreasonable here. It's estimated that normal people would have to wait for two or three years after having their hearts ripped out a hundred times in a row. Xiao Ning's ability to regain her energy after just crying in Jiang Li's arms is a bit superhuman (according to Xiao Ning's character, I feel that it takes longer to recover) In short, HB's 🔪 is a small knife, and ordinary daily life is as sweet as I imagined. It is fully qualified as a short story, and the time loop setting can be used as a reference for many suspense movies.

I still feel that there is something wrong with the Tomato scoring system. Some books are even worse than this book. Books that dig holes but don't fill them in can get a score of 9.7. Let me summarize, Doomsday Lily is more about survival in the early stage, and more about emotional lines in the later stage. The author's description of the emotional line is extremely delicate, and I cried many times. After reading this book, what I want to do most is to find a girl and get married (), ahem, just kidding. I am also very grateful to the author for writing a happy ending for this book. I really can't stand the knife. In addition, I feel that the theme of this book is very similar to "The Top Killer in the End of the World Reincarnated as a Loli". Both books are very good books. Come on, author, your book is really good. I hope you can write better and better books.

Very good-looking

This book is good to read, especially the description of emotions, the characterization of the characters, and the tension. They are all very well written (and the characters have mouths and speak out when they have misunderstandings. They are not stubborn, which I like very much). Although I am sorry that I did not finish reading the whole book, because I was still very tired after reading all night until 6 o'clock. Even if I took an hour's rest in the middle, I still couldn't concentrate and read carefully. I started skipping around chapter 200. I'm sorry that I didn't finish reading. But it should be said that this book is still a lily worth reading. It is in line with my expectations. 5 Stars. Great support for the author.

It's really good. In the early stage, there is suspicion and love of the heroine, and there is no lack of cruelty of the apocalypse while maintaining a sweet life. Every hint in the early stage can play a role later, while having the characteristics of love, it can still create a heroic and fearless image of united patriots. The inner shaping of the heroine is also just right, including the tension towards misunderstanding, the despair towards the desperate situation, and the love for the other party. All in all, amazing Cuckoo quack! ! ! !

It's super delicious, and the protagonists' emotional lines are very good. However, I feel that the story is a little tight and develops too fast. There are also too few and it's not enough to watch, but overall it's still powerful. I hope there will be a spin-off or something.