[Multiple heroines + traditional cultivation + no system + wearing]
(The ratings have just been released and will increase in the future)
Lin Mo, a good-for-nothing young man, accidentally crossed into the spiritual world, but before he could take a breath, he was forced to take the blame for the playboy master and was beaten half to death.
Just when he thought he was going to become the worst time traveler in history, a mysterious figure who looked exactly like him suddenly appeared in his mind!
Driven by the shadow of the human figure, Lin Mo knew at the beginning that he was pregnant with the Supreme Immortal Body, and accidentally practiced dual cultivation with Fairy Qing Leng, activating the origin of yin and yang, and then comprehended the supreme dual cultivation technique.
So, this passionate young man who traveled from the earth embarked on his long road of spiritual practice...
Reader comments
Although there are some flaws in the early stage, the face-slapping part is a bit weird, but overall it is good, the girl is not inked, and the fighting plot is well written. After arriving in the secret realm, the pace obviously becomes faster. I feel that the world view will be huge later, and overall it is watchable.
If you have any ideas and suggestions, you can put forward any questions, or you can ask any questions. I will read every post carefully (｡- .•)
It's pretty good, it's a classic traditional fantasy
It's okay, it's good not to be side-splitting. There are many female protagonists who like the heroine to come to the rescue after being taken advantage of. This one is not available at the moment. The heroine is completely clean. Later, you can consider creating a space that can hold living things so that the heroines can practice.
It's a good and refreshing article, just treat it as a pastime in your spare time. Good luck, author, for your hard work.
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In fact, it seems that the character creation is pretty good, but the plot is a bit too classic. It involves a classic auction in a secret place and then the enemy comes to destroy the clan. The character of the first heroine is also a bit cold. If you write a character like the harem, it may not be good to be the first one, but overall it is still good, and the flaws are not concealed.
There is a slight drop in combat power after adding another one, and there are also some small bugs such as cultivation level.
It's cool, and my IQ is online
There were some flaws in the early stage, but it got better and better later on, so it's still okay.
Okay, okay, looks good
Overall, the book is pretty good. The author's writing style is very good and the detail description technique is good. It can withstand scrutiny. Highly recommended.
Come here and taste it, don't let me see it alone [Learned]
It's pretty good, a relatively classic plot
Fascinating and well written,
The protagonist upgrades without any delay, the plot is detailed and interesting, and it's very enjoyable to listen to.
It's good, the male protagonist is not annoying and very interesting.
Not bad, not bad! Nice,
The mysterious and mysterious love of cultivating immortals
Can enjoy the harem
Good, no mines at the moment
It's okay. I'll give it 4 stars first.
As a time traveler from Lan Xing, don't you also know a little bit about Lan Xing's martial arts?
I'll give it four stars for now. I feel good about it now. I hope that the heroine who will appear in the middle and early stages of the follow-up will also have a plot.
The author listened and gave it a 5. The only drawback at the moment is that it feels like the update is too slow.
The book is well written and worth reading.
The writing is elegant, the logic is clear, and the plot develops smoothly but with passion.
Although there are some flaws in the early stage, the face-slapping part is a bit weird, but overall it is good, the girl is not inked, and the fighting plot is well written. After arriving in the secret realm, the pace obviously becomes faster. I feel that the world view will be huge later, and overall it is watchable.
If you have any ideas and suggestions, you can put forward any questions, or you can ask any questions. I will read every post carefully (｡- .•)
It's pretty good, it's a classic traditional fantasy
It's okay, it's good not to be side-splitting. There are many female protagonists who like the heroine to come to the rescue after being taken advantage of. This one is not available at the moment. The heroine is completely clean. Later, you can consider creating a space that can hold living things so that the heroines can practice.
It's a good and refreshing article, just treat it as a pastime in your spare time. Good luck, author, for your hard work.
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In fact, it seems that the character creation is pretty good, but the plot is a bit too classic. It involves a classic auction in a secret place and then the enemy comes to destroy the clan. The character of the first heroine is also a bit cold. If you write a character like the harem, it may not be good to be the first one, but overall it is still good, and the flaws are not concealed. There is a slight drop in combat power after adding another one, and there are also some small bugs such as cultivation level.
It's cool, and my IQ is online
There were some flaws in the early stage, but it got better and better later on, so it's still okay. Okay, okay, looks good
Overall, the book is pretty good. The author's writing style is very good and the detail description technique is good. It can withstand scrutiny. Highly recommended.
Come here and taste it, don't let me see it alone [Learned]
It's pretty good, a relatively classic plot
Fascinating and well written,
The protagonist upgrades without any delay, the plot is detailed and interesting, and it's very enjoyable to listen to.
It's good, the male protagonist is not annoying and very interesting.
Not bad, not bad! Nice,
The mysterious and mysterious love of cultivating immortals
Can enjoy the harem
Good, no mines at the moment
It's okay. I'll give it 4 stars first.
As a time traveler from Lan Xing, don't you also know a little bit about Lan Xing's martial arts?
I'll give it four stars for now. I feel good about it now. I hope that the heroine who will appear in the middle and early stages of the follow-up will also have a plot. The author listened and gave it a 5. The only drawback at the moment is that it feels like the update is too slow.
The book is well written and worth reading.
The writing is elegant, the logic is clear, and the plot develops smoothly but with passion.
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