After Cultivating with the Cool and Aloof Immortal Maiden, I Ascend the Immortal Path

Although there are some flaws in the early stage, the face-slapping part is a bit weird, but overall it is good, the girl is not inked, and the fighting plot is well written. After arriving in the secret realm, the pace obviously becomes faster. I feel that the world view will be huge later, and overall it is watchable.

It's okay, it's good not to be side-splitting. There are many female protagonists who like the heroine to come to the rescue after being taken advantage of. This one is not available at the moment. The heroine is completely clean. Later, you can consider creating a space that can hold living things so that the heroines can practice.

Beaten to death? It's okay to forgive him. The status of the sect master's personal disciple is not as good as that of ordinary disciples? It's okay. The protagonist likes to be scolded. The kind where the sect leader swears an oath from his inner demons under a silent order? It's okay, the Puzong disciples will come as soon as they open their mouths... The darling of heaven is not as good as the darling of the author...

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It's pretty good, it's a classic traditional fantasy

In fact, it seems that the character creation is pretty good, but the plot is a bit too classic. It involves a classic auction in a secret place and then the enemy comes to destroy the clan. The character of the first heroine is also a bit cold. If you write a character like the harem, it may not be good to be the first one, but overall it is still good, and the flaws are not concealed. There is a slight drop in combat power after adding another one, and there are also some small bugs such as cultivation level.

It's a good and refreshing article, just treat it as a pastime in your spare time. Good luck, author, for your hard work.

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Overall, the book is pretty good. The author's writing style is very good and the detail description technique is good. It can withstand scrutiny. Highly recommended.

There were some flaws in the early stage, but it got better and better later on, so it's still okay. Okay, okay, looks good