[Card + Chinese History + Combat + Zhang Jiao + No System + Not Brainless + Partial Group Image]
Su Yan came back through time with the memory of China.
At the critical moment of synthesizing the life spirit card, he used his powerful spirit to condense his majestic thoughts:
"The sky is dead, Huang Tian must stand!"
The great sage Zhang Jiao, holding the nine-section staff, stepped out of the dusty history!
The Taiping Sutra is recited, and the mind and soul are confused. The beans scattered on the ground turn into thousands of soldiers, and the fingertips trigger the thunder clouds to tear the sky!
The forgotten power of "walking on behalf of heaven" is using the spirit card as a carrier to return to this world in his hands and become a thunder that shakes the times!
Card quality: grey-white-green-blue-purple-gold-red-color
Level of Lingka Master: Bronze-Silver-Gold-Platinum-Diamond-Master-Grandmaster-King-Legend
Reader comments
It's okay, but I feel it's a bit delayed, and I feel like the current protagonist group seems to be a fixed protagonist group, but it doesn't matter, after all, those two have quite important identities, and the protagonist should be able to keep up with the rhythm if they give a few reminders on the card.
As for the other two supporting characters falling in love, I actually think it's okay. It's okay. After all, we can't just leave it all there, right? Just use it as a conditioner, otherwise it will get really boring after watching it for a long time! And the atmosphere in the main character group is pretty good now.
Although it has some shortcomings, overall this book is quite good.
Spoiler: Don't worry, brothers. In Chapter 39, Zhang Jue no longer has any resentment and has become a normal Zhang Jue.
@Xuanyuanzimu By the way, I forgot to ask the author, will there be any card making in the future? And the author, Chapter 53 and 54, is this too different from others? The quality is the same, and the protagonist group has suffered no less than them, right? Even if you are restrained, you can't do this, right? Is this gap reasonable? Also, this book has too many descriptions and too many modifiers. And the coolness was not stimulated. Another point is that every battle is like a life and death battle. If that were the case, then the world would be completely over.
To be honest, the author, for this novel, adding a villain will not have a particularly good effect, but will have a negative impact. If you want resistance, just add some positive, powerful characters. Even if there is a villain, it is best not to have negative characters outside of the battle, otherwise it will be very off-putting.
Moreover, the world view and background of this book are not done well, that is, the random drawing of cards, and their learning content before awakening should focus on mental strength and combat skills. The most important thing is the ability to write stories. The quality of the cards can be obtained by relying on these scores.
By the way, there is also a group of legendary and durable kings! ! !
@Xuanyuan Zimu Well, much better. [Laughs]
@Xuanyuanzimu By the way, there is another problem, that is, the protagonist seems to have no other life except fighting. There was nothing like food, drink, toilet, etc. Of course, this is just a metaphor. Then there are no branch lines except the main line. It's okay if you only develop the main plot of this book, but you absolutely, absolutely, absolutely cannot do this again in your next book, otherwise you won't be able to read it at all.
Oh, by the way, you also need to read more novels. Just pick the ones you like to read, otherwise the final result will definitely be bad writing. After all, there is no accumulation. Where did the blog come from? Including your novel, there are actually other minor problems, which can only be made up for by reading the book. The main reason is that it cannot be explained clearly, and it is impossible to correct them. I can only accumulate by reading books. Of course, if you feel tired, you can also listen to a book. Your health is the most important thing. 👍
@Xuanyuanzimu Why write something more real when you are always writing about fiction? You are introducing the main character group where their strength increases, their coordination and so on. Can you give me some actual combat? Wouldn't it be better to write more about actual combat?
I'll write the rest as I think of it.
Generally speaking, the author has written quite well. After all, many authors' first books don't even show the number of authors, but there are 15,000 authors.
The protagonist has talent and strength. But too much emphasis was placed on carving out their training and the badness of their enemies. The author greatly insisted on continuing to write.
It's good to watch, it's not a cliche plot, come on [love]
It's very interesting to watch, and the plot is also very good. It suits my taste very well. I hope it can continue and not end! ! ! ! ! !
Details of the battle scene [blowing kiss]
It's a little bit not very card-like, but the overall plot is still pretty good.
This is really beautiful. Keep it up.
From the current point of view, Lin Wanqiu and Zhao Zheng are a couple.
So here comes the question, does the protagonist have a girlfriend or wife?
Overall, it's pretty good. I just want to ask if I can only write one card?
It's okay, but I feel it's a bit delayed, and I feel like the current protagonist group seems to be a fixed protagonist group, but it doesn't matter, after all, those two have quite important identities, and the protagonist should be able to keep up with the rhythm if they give a few reminders on the card. As for the other two supporting characters falling in love, I actually think it's okay. It's okay. After all, we can't just leave it all there, right? Just use it as a conditioner, otherwise it will get really boring after watching it for a long time! And the atmosphere in the main character group is pretty good now. Although it has some shortcomings, overall this book is quite good. Spoiler: Don't worry, brothers. In Chapter 39, Zhang Jue no longer has any resentment and has become a normal Zhang Jue. @Xuanyuanzimu By the way, I forgot to ask the author, will there be any card making in the future? And the author, Chapter 53 and 54, is this too different from others? The quality is the same, and the protagonist group has suffered no less than them, right? Even if you are restrained, you can't do this, right? Is this gap reasonable? Also, this book has too many descriptions and too many modifiers. And the coolness was not stimulated. Another point is that every battle is like a life and death battle. If that were the case, then the world would be completely over. To be honest, the author, for this novel, adding a villain will not have a particularly good effect, but will have a negative impact. If you want resistance, just add some positive, powerful characters. Even if there is a villain, it is best not to have negative characters outside of the battle, otherwise it will be very off-putting. Moreover, the world view and background of this book are not done well, that is, the random drawing of cards, and their learning content before awakening should focus on mental strength and combat skills. The most important thing is the ability to write stories. The quality of the cards can be obtained by relying on these scores. By the way, there is also a group of legendary and durable kings! ! ! @Xuanyuan Zimu Well, much better. [Laughs] @Xuanyuanzimu By the way, there is another problem, that is, the protagonist seems to have no other life except fighting. There was nothing like food, drink, toilet, etc. Of course, this is just a metaphor. Then there are no branch lines except the main line. It's okay if you only develop the main plot of this book, but you absolutely, absolutely, absolutely cannot do this again in your next book, otherwise you won't be able to read it at all. Oh, by the way, you also need to read more novels. Just pick the ones you like to read, otherwise the final result will definitely be bad writing. After all, there is no accumulation. Where did the blog come from? Including your novel, there are actually other minor problems, which can only be made up for by reading the book. The main reason is that it cannot be explained clearly, and it is impossible to correct them. I can only accumulate by reading books. Of course, if you feel tired, you can also listen to a book. Your health is the most important thing. 👍 @Xuanyuanzimu Why write something more real when you are always writing about fiction? You are introducing the main character group where their strength increases, their coordination and so on. Can you give me some actual combat? Wouldn't it be better to write more about actual combat? I'll write the rest as I think of it. Generally speaking, the author has written quite well. After all, many authors' first books don't even show the number of authors, but there are 15,000 authors.
The protagonist has talent and strength. But too much emphasis was placed on carving out their training and the badness of their enemies. The author greatly insisted on continuing to write.
It's good to watch, it's not a cliche plot, come on [love]
It's very interesting to watch, and the plot is also very good. It suits my taste very well. I hope it can continue and not end! ! ! ! ! !
Details of the battle scene [blowing kiss]
It's a little bit not very card-like, but the overall plot is still pretty good.
This is really beautiful. Keep it up.
From the current point of view, Lin Wanqiu and Zhao Zheng are a couple. So here comes the question, does the protagonist have a girlfriend or wife?
Overall, it's pretty good. I just want to ask if I can only write one card?