Oops! the Sick Girl Who Has Been Abused Has Become a Crazy Critic of Powerful Officials.

It looks good. Personally, I prefer the early stage, because I think I might have a bit of an S tendency. I was really happy when the heroine whipped the hero.

The heroine's character is well received. She is a very charming, independent and strong person. Whether she resists feudal etiquette, responds wittyly to insults, or responds flexibly to crises, she always demonstrates the heroine's flexibility and resourcefulness. Moreover, the plot with Jing Xian in the early stage is also very interesting, and it also reflects the other side of the heroine who has no choice but to do so. Although the heroine has "abused" Jing Xian for four years, the conflict between the two is not irreconcilable. Jing Xian can feel that the heroine cares about him. When the male protagonist is full of illness later, everything he does to the heroine will not be abrupt. In short, the logic is very strong👍

I love it so much It's been a long time since I've read a book that appeals to me so much The male and female protagonists are both very good. I love this immoral literature. Secondly, other minor supporting characters are also full of characters and have their own characteristics. The changes in Lingluo's early and late stages make me feel so cute, haha. Aunt Chun and the puppy are still the same. I hope your family is doing well! ! Blessed is the girl Youbao! No hen competition! ! The original heroine is also a really good baby. Blessed are those who love their sisters! Whether it's the two men or not, they also have their own characteristics. But I still support the male lead the most, you have to work hard [OK] So far, very high quality, love it very much, I love you so much

Special touch, the author will update soon! I have been depressed these past few days, and I am no different today, but the author knows it well. A feeling of melancholy came over me for no reason, as if I had lost something, and felt melancholy in my heart. I don't know where I will go in a moment, I want to cry, but there are no tears in my eyes, let alone tears. Only the author responds with love and chapters. It takes more than ten chapters to feel at ease.

One word: exciting! It's really good-looking, full of sense of immorality, and very friendly to the heroine. So far, the author loves the heroine's baby in his novel very much. This book is a piece of gold that I found out when tomato poems are everywhere. It's good-looking. So far, the character of the heroine is: smart, cautious, thinking of the worst-case outcome in everything so that she can be prepared when things happen, loving herself, putting herself first while being kind to others (who knows the value of this character, I really like the way the heroine loves herself) Suggestion: I hope the author will continue writing in this style and not abuse the heroine in the future. The heroine must love herself first, and secondly love the hero and others.

It's so good that I stayed up all night www. It's so appealing to my taste. Although it's hard to agree with others, the author's writing style is so good. This book should have a score of 9.2 Or above. How come it only has a score of 7.1? I watched a third of it, but I gave up because I was too lazy to read the series, and I particularly liked Nianxia, which later changed to Nianxia. . .

Author update soon! , This is my ration! I am usually very picky about novels and have a very sharp eye. You are the one among the few novels that I can read. Good luck (ง˙o˙)ว The writing is also very good, and I really like the plot. The reason why I can continue reading is because it is already written at the beginning of the novel that the male protagonist has feelings for the female protagonist. This makes me feel that the subsequent writing will not be so procrastinating╮（＿）╭

I think it's very interesting, the immoral literature is very exciting, and the heroine is very good and charming. As for the controversial behavior of the heroine who beats and scolds the hero on the surface but cares about the hero secretly, I won't comment too much, because I think this is a system task that the heroine has no choice but to do, but the heroine is kind-hearted and can't bear to be so cruel, so the heroine is still good. The male protagonist is a yandere character who is good at self-strategy. His observations are very meticulous and very interesting! The heroine, stop fighting, let the male protagonist feel good hahaha

I'll go, I'll go! Even though the rating is only over 7 points, it does not prevent the content from being good-looking at all! I'm so horny, I feel so happy watching this male protagonist, go watch it! [Love][love][love]

It's super good. I read it all in one night, but the updates are a bit slow, so don't you dare update ten chapters a day to shock me [shy]

The author wrote it well, but the heroine is actually quite nice to the hero. She thinks she is torturing her but is reluctant to really torture her. This is not in my XP. I like selfish heroines, which is a pity.

The male protagonist is delicate, sinister, crazy and loving. He is really good-looking. This book hasn't been updated with a few pictures, but the front part is really nice. (First time writing a book review👉👈) I think the front part looks good, but the back part is inexplicable after the heroine changes her identity. Pushing it from the front doesn't look good from the back.

It's really, really good to read. It makes people feel happy when they read it. It's not like other books that people read here and there, and the content is very compact and not laggy. Why is the rating so low? Don't give up because of the title. It's really super, super, super good to read [crying] [crying] [crying] [admiration] [admiration]. The male and female protagonists are also very well portrayed.

✨This article has a sense of setting, and the conflict between robbery and identity switching creates tension. 🔥Qiao Jiayin dressed up as a vicious widower and "raised" the second male lead to be crazy according to the system requirements, while secretly getting entangled in the interaction. ✨Jing Xuan became a yandere because of her obsession with "family", and the pull to resist hunting in the later stage was very touching, and the 1v1 between Shuang Jie also made the emotional line pure. 🔥Crazy cultivation + two-way sinking, the morbid emotions are written in a sadistic and lustful way. Watching the two of them shackle each other in a twisted bond is both satisfying and heart-wrenching. It is very appetizing for lovers of robbery! ✨

It's super good-looking, and the plot is also very exciting. The setting of the female protagonist who knows martial arts and the male protagonist who doesn't is quite interesting. The male protagonist is often suppressed by the female protagonist, and his yandere attribute is also suppressed to death. He can only be a wet puppy and is reluctant to hurt the female protagonist. The female protagonist is brave and resourceful, and the male protagonist is very good even if he is surrounded by other female protagonists. The disadvantage of doting on the heroine is that there are too many misunderstandings between the male and female protagonists, which are too coincidental, but this is also to promote the plot, and the brain circuits of the two are often not on the same channel. It cannot be said that the two are dumb, I can only say that it is difficult for two people with different positions to believe each other's words. This is how misunderstandings come about, which is to my liking [laughing]

Once I've been fucked, I like to watch women torture men. It's just the right amount of soft-hearted and doesn't give out warmth easily, and it's ambiguous and painful during the extreme pulling [Sending Hearts]

I usually don't dare to watch games with low ratings when playing split-screen games. But I didn't even read the introduction of this one, so I just forced myself to watch it. Moreover, the heroine is brave, resourceful, realistic, and makes money. So funny. Hahahahahaha, the hero has a self-guided strategy! ! My sister-in-law still cares about me [almost crying] What I like the most is that there is a second male lead, and then the male lead is jealous, and if he is yellow, he feels at ease [laughs][laughs]

I think there is no big problem in shaping the emotional line of the characters. The relationship between the male protagonist being abused by the female protagonist but falling in love with her is rare to be written in detail (the female protagonist's behavior is not a big evil), and there are many ambiguous scenes that can be written. Then let me remind you of some points that may be inappropriate [exploration]. This article harmonizes a lot of content and the author directly writes and codes it without adding it in the comment area. In severe cases, a few hundred words of description are coded in three or four places on a page. The happy ending of this article is that the male protagonist does not abuse the female protagonist, but the system is a human trafficker type [face covering]. 90% Of the time the female protagonist will be forced to be silent and helpless to advance the plot and entangle the fate of her lover and relatives. The female protagonist considers running away.

It's super good-looking, and the pulling between the sister-in-law and the puppy is so exciting. There is no female protagonist between the original heroine and the heroine, there is only love for each other. The original heroine and the heroine are both cute babies, and there are no insulting words in the article. Many female romance novels cannot do this. One-on-one, I still hope that there are not so many male supporting characters who misunderstand the heroine. This is also a small suggestion, I hope you can adopt it. After reading this review, the rating is only 8.8, Which is really low. It is definitely better than some 9.5-Rated articles that abuse women. It really deserves a five-star rating! I also hope that the author can produce more articles of this type. This is the kind of article suitable for normal girls to read [Flowing Kiss]

Super good-looking, sisters who like a sense of immorality can go for it [full]

This book is generally very good to read. Both Ah Chan and Yinyin are very good. They must be happy. The male and female protagonists are very vivid and vivid. The setting of death escape + betrayal is also very enjoyable. The plot is interesting. The only drawback is that many words have been harmonized (of course not the author's fault). The soul interpenetration part is a bit strange. The ending is also a bit rushed. My sister Yu Wang Ling Luo Chun and Aunt Gu Nan did not give a good explanation in the end. After reading it for a long time, I hope everyone has a good ending, but overall it is good! I like this book very much

The writing is full of color, the emotional line is interesting, and the plot is exciting... Except that sometimes the too dense "*", "..." And "[]" are a bit dazzling; the map, world view and plot lines are completely developed around the emotional line of the male and female protagonists, and there are no shortcomings except that they are not perfect. When romance is enough. In fact, the portrayal of the characters' emotions and even their images is very good. Although the male protagonist is a yandere, he... Drinks the medicine that hurts his body. During the pursuit and escape stage, he still leaves time for the female protagonist to rest even if his heart is severely hurt. During the body swap, he would rather blindly deceive himself and let the female protagonist do whatever he wants... Mostly the female protagonist's wishes come first, and he is not at all the kind of yandere character who hurts others just for his own twisted feelings. Personally, I think it's quite worthy of the heroine's love.

It's okay, mainly because the male and female protagonists have a lot of interactions, and there isn't any big conspiracy or plotting. It would be okay if I didn't write it, otherwise there would be more chapters. I just feel that the subsequent plot has no surprises and is a bit flat.

The puppy got his wish and is together with his sister-in-law forever😭The ending is very sweet and beautiful! There were a lot of misunderstandings in the middle, but the plot was quite interesting. The heroine was not just a weak little white flower with both intelligence and strength. The puppy hero was also super loyal and only loved his sister-in-law from the beginning to the end. Later, he recognized his sister-in-law as a loyal dog just based on some small details in life, and the demeanor and expression of some people when encountering some things and people! (Although the identity of sister-in-law is a bit awkward when she is with her brother at first... But who cares if you read the novel so much?) Everyone in the whole story is a good baby. Does anyone understand the original heroine? It feels really cute. I hope the original heroine can always be happy in the story.

It's beautiful, highly recommended. The female protagonist is the male protagonist's sister-in-law. The female protagonist is the second male protagonist in the original book. The female protagonist has raised her to be a sick girl who can beat the male protagonist to prepare for the subsequent plot. The female protagonist has been the male protagonist's sister-in-law for four years and sent him to the best academy. Because the male protagonist is afraid of thunder, the female protagonist will do it every time when there is thunder. She makes all kinds of excuses to go to him and accompany him, with a cold face and a warm heart. The male protagonist knows that his sister-in-law is doing one thing in front of him and another behind her back. She will care about him after beating him, and then he will not let others bully him. He can only let his sister-in-law bully him, and will bully the person who bullied the male protagonist back. Later, the heroine left, and the male protagonist imprisoned the heroine and forced her to marry him. The heroine. After escaping, she jumped off a cliff and escaped. For some reasons, the heroine was brought to the world five years later by the system. She became the missing sister of the heroine in the original book. On the first day after the heroine came, the hero discovered that she was his sister-in-law because of some of the heroine's little habits, and then there was endless ambiguity.

The author's writing is really good. I think the story of the heroine and the hero's meeting and later marriage is particularly touching. The writing style is the type I like. Finally, I wish Qiao Jiayin and (Gu) Jingxuan good health and happiness in their small world 99!

The writing is really great. My God, the author is really good at writing novels. It took me about a day to read this novel. I was really crying and happy at the end. My God, this novel is so good, but it is the best novel I have read this year!

It's good-looking and good-looking. This book is very suitable for my taste. So far, there are no big problems. The only problem is that there are too few!!! The author will update soon!!

The content of this book is very novel. And it's fast-paced and doesn't drag on. The characters are also well described. This is really nice. Super recommended [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

In the early stage, he wears the soul, and in the later stage, he wears it. It's super good-looking. Lucky for him who wears the thunder soul, the male protagonist is paranoid, yandere, and overbearing. He's super good-looking.