[No system, no harem, decisive killing, not cliche plot, online IQ, Qi-building foundation pill Yuanying]
There is no end to the immortal road, but ruthlessness is the only way to make a boat?
In Yuanchu Sect, rules are more deadly than ruthlessness!
Shen Cang, who had just crossed over, suffered a terrible disaster and fell into the hands of the demon cultivator.
After many twists and turns, Shen Cang first entered the Yuanchu Sect, and he saw clearly that this was by no means a simple and bloody place, but a sophisticated, ruthless, and efficient operation of a huge interest group!
It squeezes out every drop of value, uses rules as a cage and hope as bait to create a road to heaven.
Only by using blood as salary, using bones as ladders, and trampling on the corpses of all souls, can we have a chance of immortality!
Reader comments
Although the story is short and the ending is hasty, it is still somewhat innovative. The writing is not wordy. The full text basically meets my reading requirements in the continuous dynamic of "continuously breaking through pressure", and it also meets the "four extremes" that I require. There was an idea for the whole article at the beginning, but unfortunately it was not polished. As I wrote it, I became dissatisfied, which shows that the author still wants to make progress. Of course, bad data is also one thing. Bad money chases good money. It's okay not to be angry. You still have to calm down and produce works with a high degree of completion to gain market. Based on realistic imagination, the author shows a degree of development of the fantasy world that is different from others; the article reflects the author's life experience, cautious assessment of situations, and also reflects the experience of grassroots public security society in certain places; the violent fighting is more exciting, which is the level of writing An important bonus point is that at least 90% of the writers on the entire Internet cannot describe detailed fighting. This is a significant feature of distinction and screening when reading and browsing. Those who can't are all slender little ones, haha; the characters in the article are cold, ruthless and sinister. The plot is full of calculation, viciousness and cruelty, and there is less foreshadowing in terms of contrasting the truth, goodness, beauty, cowardice, timidity and helplessness of the characters. This makes the writing style dark and the height of the idea lowered. The human nature of the cultivators must be reflected, and the right answer is to do something and not do something; the plot has a hopeless situation. The reversal design of Liu Yin Hua Ming is not brilliant and perfect. Although there are cases to be found, this kind of brain-burning still requires talent support. Some people are very good at writing, which is amazing; the material satisfaction and advancement obtained through struggle are reflected in varying degrees. The above is my evaluation of the author's experimental works. It is recommended not to write short ones, as your creative ideas will be plagiarized by software, which is a pity. I wish you all the best to complete this book, and I encourage you.
It's not that my brother's writing is really good. Okay, okay, hurry up and update a few hundred chapters.
Man, seriously, if you keep writing like this, you'll be sure it's 9 o'clock
A truly excellent book
It's not enough to read at all, okay [smiles], can't it be updated a hundred times a day? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not slack off like this [smile]
Yes, there is no big poison, no small poison. I haven't seen the plot yet, so it's not brainless. It's not a cool article. It's considered as food among tomatoes.
It describes the cruelty of the world. It also feels quite real. Anyway, it's very interesting. Brothers rush to each other [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
Good books, good food
Come on, update, it's okay so far, the logic needs to be more rigorous, after all, the protagonist's strength is low, don't have too many plots that exceed his strength.
It's very interesting, has a plot, is well written, and the plot arrangement is clever. I hope it can be written as a long article without interruption. The reserve will be released at nine o'clock.
A fantasy rookie with full potential!
The plot is smooth and tight, and the characters are outstanding.
It's good to read, it's good to read, and I finally read a normal book, without so much romance. The only drawback is that the word count is a bit short. I hope the author will work hard.
New stuff, interesting
A rare good book
Very good, not a noob or brainless
Speculating in futures in the world of immortality is interesting and interesting [Like]
It's quite creative. Please give me your support. It's the first time I see a cultivator and he can still cultivate like this.
Why does it feel a bit like watching someone who has no money to become an immortal? It feels pretty good and worth recommending.
The writing is great, and it's really a piece of cake in Tomato. I hope the author can keep writing and update more stably [please update]
It's pretty good. It makes people feel like the other supporting characters are not stupid.
In fact, the writing is quite novel.
The idea is clear, it doesn't necessarily mean cultivating the world of immortality. The setting is very interesting. Please update it soon. I want to see your ideas later.
Your settings are fine, please keep writing.
Although the story is short and the ending is hasty, it is still somewhat innovative. The writing is not wordy. The full text basically meets my reading requirements in the continuous dynamic of "continuously breaking through pressure", and it also meets the "four extremes" that I require. There was an idea for the whole article at the beginning, but unfortunately it was not polished. As I wrote it, I became dissatisfied, which shows that the author still wants to make progress. Of course, bad data is also one thing. Bad money chases good money. It's okay not to be angry. You still have to calm down and produce works with a high degree of completion to gain market. Based on realistic imagination, the author shows a degree of development of the fantasy world that is different from others; the article reflects the author's life experience, cautious assessment of situations, and also reflects the experience of grassroots public security society in certain places; the violent fighting is more exciting, which is the level of writing An important bonus point is that at least 90% of the writers on the entire Internet cannot describe detailed fighting. This is a significant feature of distinction and screening when reading and browsing. Those who can't are all slender little ones, haha; the characters in the article are cold, ruthless and sinister. The plot is full of calculation, viciousness and cruelty, and there is less foreshadowing in terms of contrasting the truth, goodness, beauty, cowardice, timidity and helplessness of the characters. This makes the writing style dark and the height of the idea lowered. The human nature of the cultivators must be reflected, and the right answer is to do something and not do something; the plot has a hopeless situation. The reversal design of Liu Yin Hua Ming is not brilliant and perfect. Although there are cases to be found, this kind of brain-burning still requires talent support. Some people are very good at writing, which is amazing; the material satisfaction and advancement obtained through struggle are reflected in varying degrees. The above is my evaluation of the author's experimental works. It is recommended not to write short ones, as your creative ideas will be plagiarized by software, which is a pity. I wish you all the best to complete this book, and I encourage you.
It's not that my brother's writing is really good. Okay, okay, hurry up and update a few hundred chapters. Man, seriously, if you keep writing like this, you'll be sure it's 9 o'clock
A truly excellent book
It's not enough to read at all, okay [smiles], can't it be updated a hundred times a day? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not slack off like this [smile]
Yes, there is no big poison, no small poison. I haven't seen the plot yet, so it's not brainless. It's not a cool article. It's considered as food among tomatoes.
It describes the cruelty of the world. It also feels quite real. Anyway, it's very interesting. Brothers rush to each other [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
Good books, good food
Come on, update, it's okay so far, the logic needs to be more rigorous, after all, the protagonist's strength is low, don't have too many plots that exceed his strength.
It's very interesting, has a plot, is well written, and the plot arrangement is clever. I hope it can be written as a long article without interruption. The reserve will be released at nine o'clock.
A fantasy rookie with full potential!
The plot is smooth and tight, and the characters are outstanding.
It's good to read, it's good to read, and I finally read a normal book, without so much romance. The only drawback is that the word count is a bit short. I hope the author will work hard.
New stuff, interesting
A rare good book
Very good, not a noob or brainless
Speculating in futures in the world of immortality is interesting and interesting [Like]
It's quite creative. Please give me your support. It's the first time I see a cultivator and he can still cultivate like this.
Why does it feel a bit like watching someone who has no money to become an immortal? It feels pretty good and worth recommending.
The writing is great, and it's really a piece of cake in Tomato. I hope the author can keep writing and update more stably [please update]
It's pretty good. It makes people feel like the other supporting characters are not stupid. In fact, the writing is quite novel.
The idea is clear, it doesn't necessarily mean cultivating the world of immortality. The setting is very interesting. Please update it soon. I want to see your ideas later. Your settings are fine, please keep writing.