The System Ran Away and the Heroine Remembered Me! !

This book is definitely a good book. I was so fascinated by it that I lost track of time when I read it in the afternoon. But he actually got stuck at a critical point. I really can't stand it. The author must update more, otherwise it will be so uncomfortable to watch [cry][cry][cry]. Come on, author. I highly recommend this book. I have read many books, and it is indeed possible. This one, however, has it. Need some not so ok places. Neglect. After all, this is a book. About love and yandere. The war stuff can be ignored, I think. [Like][Like][Like][Like] I just don't know if Xu Yao can be considered a heroine [laughing evilly] I think some of the things written by the author are redundant. Did Lin Qingquan and his senior sister make up the word count? I don't think the other ones are suitable either, because what I want to read is not the traditional fairy tales…

Not bad, the front looks pretty good. But I think 6 female protagonists are enough, and it's still a yandere novel [face covering], but now there's a female supporting character

Holy shit, what's going on? All three comments are criticizing, and the two with very low ratings all say that the progress is slow, but I think it's well written. I feel that the author has a good grasp of the plot progression. It's good, really good. If this is true, as some reviews say, more than half of Tomato's books can be exiled. Now that I have read Chapter 7, I feel that this level is very good. The author is carefully grasping this level. This beginning can really kill many books in an instant, which makes me review and review it. No matter what I write later, this beginning makes me feel dizzy, twice as dizzy

Good. The character creation is in place, and judging from the early stage, it is considered qualified. Looking forward to future development Basically the chase is over. The writing is simple and the tempo in the early stages is too slow, so I jumped right into it. This is a training work for newbies, please keep up the good work.

Write yourself a five-point score, hehe

The plot score is 7.3 And the emotional line score is 8.6.

It is recommended to change it to wearing clothes instead of soul wearing.

It's okay. I personally feel that currently only the Master's Memories chapter is a bit long, so I skipped it. There are a lot of typos in other aspects and sometimes the words can't be read smoothly. The rhythm is pretty good (except for the Master chapter). When I saw Chapter 79, I suddenly remembered that the previous system ran away. Why did it get better here? Did I skip it? I looked through the table of contents and it seems that there are some memories at the back. It's a bit long (I personally would probably skip it). I hope the author will pay attention to the typos. It's a bit uncomfortable.

Very good-looking, do you have many female protagonists?

Come on, author, it's really good, but I think the author still has a lot of room for improvement.

The author's writing style is different from other authors. It is relatively good in Tomato. The whole book is logical and has a beginning and an end. You can still read it.

I have read a lot of books. The pace of this book is slow, but it is very comfortable to read. It may not be suitable for those who like fast pace, but slow pace has the advantage of slow pace. Anyway, I feel pretty good.

The writing is average and the characterization is interesting.

It's okay so far, you can watch it

Very very beautiful

It looks good, no need to say more

Not bad, good, catch your heart

Okay, good, very beautiful

Recommendation index four stars

Very good, good luck to the author

Looks good, I'll go, it's dawn

Looks good, hope to add more

You can watch it. Why do you have to type so many words?

It's a good listen to pass the time. What impressed me deeply is that Master, don't practice like this. He often loses control and is in a trance.

It's okay, it's okay to watch it without thinking [laughs evilly]

It's great, the male protagonist is well portrayed, unlike some yandere novels where the male protagonist is a scumbag. He has a strong sense of responsibility and his inner weakness gives this character his aura. Broken! ! ! !

The front is fine, but the back is fine.

It's okay, but the pace is a bit slow, but the creation is very successful, the plot is not too problematic, and the writing is good. I've just seen Bai Ling now, and it's quite interesting. The cutting of the spirit root is a bit funny. It's okay, it's okay, but there aren't really many yanderes, and there seems to be a bit too much harem. I don't know how to write it later. It's ridiculous that Little Memory is over forty and it's still unfinished. But I didn't expect that the author dared to mark the serial number. If it's not finished, I won't be able to keep the book [face covering]