I Turned Out to Be Xiao Yan's Bai Yueguang?

@KRulu who ran away alone Yes, author! I gave Narcissus an imperial title: Empress Holy Spirit, abbreviated as Holy Spirit Emperor! I also want to give her a little auxiliary plug-in: the main family of the Holy Ancient Domain who has produced some of the strongest men in the world of sword fighting from all over the world: the Di Family! Narcissus is the eldest daughter of the emperor family: Emperor Narcissus! And strengthen his talent to be no weaker than the top geniuses in the world. [Laughs] Is that okay? I hope the author can learn from it. [Laughing][laughing][laughing][cool]

It's okay, it smells like a girl's video. What makes me feel bad is that the sect master and the young sect master were photographed by the shop owner for two pieces of clothing and sold them.

I hope to be able to reflect the grand world view of Dou Qi Continent. The writing is really good, the protagonist is also taking a very novel path, and many of the private settings are also very touching to my heart.

We've only reached chapter 19. Author, do you think there's something missing [laughter]

I saw a book with great potential. This is the most combative article I have ever read in Tomato. Come on, author. Can the author write more chapters a day? It's not enough to read [adoration][adoration][adoration] Author, I won't read the update you just made. I want to save it to read enough. There will be more updates from the author [shy][shy][shy][shy]. Author, have you changed the plot? I haven't watched the plot in a few days, why is it different?

It is different from the Dou Po fan fiction I usually see. The author uses a brand new character's perspective to reveal many world views that were not rewritten in the original Dou Po. At the same time, it also enriches many marginal characters in the original Dou Po. It is a great fan fiction.

Well, the big novel bypasses the plot of the original work and fills in the plot that is not mentioned in the original work. Then Xiao Shuixian is a boy who time-travels into a girl, but his temperament is unexpectedly quiet.

Most of them have been completely changed, which is understandable. After the Emperor Ling (the book was sealed twice, his name and realm were changed) and Nalan Yanran had sex, Jingran still had an ambiguous scene with Nalan Yanran, and the original protagonist Xiao Huohuo had very few scenes. Anyway, when the protagonist returns to the Spiritual Emperor, I'll come back and take a look, and I'll be raising books.

The heroine of this article is a genius who does not need to rely on anyone. She lives for herself, for herself... She is simply a strong woman! I really like this book😃

This is a female channel, not a male channel. There is no dipping beans. It's cool.

I saw a very ambitious author who wanted to write a good, unique book

Too short, but with the sword, Yunlong, reminds me of the Dynasty of Daming

At present, it seems that there is no poisonous point. Our heroine has her own opportunity and will join the Yunlan Sect. The Yunlan Sect will not be related to the Soul Palace, which is very good [shy]

Yes, but the author should be careful. It is a bit dangerous to write about Doujin on Tomato.

It looks good, so far there are no bad points. If there is any, it is because the author is too slow to update [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry] [angry]

The writing is good, but the AI polish can be seen in many places, making it feel flashy. The depiction of the protagonist is okay, but the portrayal of Xiaoyan is obviously unsatisfactory. I can't see any signs of my own efforts, I'm greedy, I just pick up the slack, I rely on Yao Lao to take over my body, and I use a secret method similar to magic power. Is this still anti-inflammatory? Isn't this the villain? I can understand the unscrupulousness at the beginning. I have been writing for such a long time in a decent style, but now it is unreasonable to suddenly resort to unscrupulous means. The writing style is complicated and lengthy, and the prose is acceptable. I came here to read the three views of the righteous, not the villain.

Very good, well written, I personally think it is the best among Dou Po fandoms

I really like it, but after having it for a month, when I looked at it now, I thought my memory was messed up, but it turned out that it had been changed. No wonder I flipped forward a few chapters and read it again but still didn't quite get what I wanted in my mind. [Cover face]

In the blink of an eye, the cover was gone. Isn't he really the defendant? It's hard to keep writing down the story when you have no income and have to avoid the original plot as much as possible.

Is my memory confused? It feels like the plot has changed. Wasn't there a Celestial Demon Phoenix clan before?

It looks good. Did the author make some changes? Why does it feel different from what I have seen before? It feels like the protagonist has become more active, but shouldn't being single according to the profile be passive? This feels like the protagonist is taking the initiative to flirt with the master, which is not suitable for being single. I think it would be good to be like the protagonist and Nalan Yanran before the change. The author is taking a big gamble.

I particularly like your writing, especially when I see the innovative parts. I like this kind of plot so much that I hope to keep writing. I also want to ask the author to recommend a few novels of the same type to me. Thank you!

The writing is very good and can be given five stars, but it should be noted that too much is not enough. Overly detailed and cumbersome descriptions will show that the writing skills are inferior, so I am removing one star for encouragement.

Whose wife is Xiao Shuixian?

Author Author, why is your cover gone?

You can reopen it, it's very uncomfortable for river crabs now. Pressure points, too high is not good

It feels refreshing to read. However, the occasionally inserted poems have an abrupt feeling of being cut off by a cliff, as awkward as seeing a speed bump at a turn when a car is driving at high speed.

The author is so awesome. I have been in the dark room so many times and the black room is still strong. I will always support it.

The author needs to keep at it, come on The writing is very delicate

The latest version 54 currently tastes good, but the writing style needs to be improved. This is also the first time I have written for a novel.