After Traveling Through Time, They All Came to Visit Me Because They Were so Fond of Her.

The writing is good, the plot is coherent, and the creative ideas are clear. The emotional line is also relatively clear, and the writing style is appropriate. If you keep writing and make some innovations, it might not be a million-word masterpiece. Although I have only seen the updated version, this is my old Shennong's evaluation, and it is already acceptable in Tomato. Come on, more updates

It's a useless start, and the heroine is taken away. It gives the newly-wearing protagonist a goal and an opportunity to adjust, but it's not exciting enough. Overall, it's okay.

The rhythm is controlled just right, it's beautiful

Em don't know whether to tell the truth or a lie

It looks pretty good, but a little lacking.

A masterpiece, depicting emotions delicately. [Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's simply a fairy 😋

The emotional line in the later stage is pretty good

I hope Su Li is the main palace. Please [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Not bad. .

Okay, nothing poisonous

Not bad, not bad, not bad.

Yes, the characters are vividly described. The structure is clear and the characters are delicate and vivid.

It feels really good. I hope the author won't kill me. I really love Su Li.