Rebirth**********

Come on, it's okay

Looks good. I hope it won't break.

Not bad, looks good, sounds good

Very well written! I hope to break the million word mark!

I saw it somewhere, I won't tell you where, it's easy to get reported.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you reach the third watch, the slightest praise begins to speak out, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates on scriptures are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

I think it looks pretty

Good guy, the protagonist is Daiwu, Metagross, Boss Cordora [face covering] The friend of the protagonist, Zhang Ming, becomes less and less likable as the story progresses. I know the author wants to write about the kind of bad friends who have a good relationship. But whether a bad friend is a bad friend or not depends on the situation. For example, my brothers are fine when they are playing together in private. But in front of my family or outsiders, they are given enough face and will not be unscrupulous at all times. Everyone is very well-behaved when the situation is wrong [face covering]. On the contrary, Zhang Ming often yells and screams regardless of the occasion. Every time he talks nonsense, some book friends will comment on this section: This person is very annoying [face covering]

Well written, keep up the good work

Isn't this the Jiang family's book? . . [What]

Urban Pokémon, a bit interesting I feel like there is no need to strengthen Zhang Ming so much. There is also the filial daughter who gave her the ice stone and gave nothing to her parents. But aside from that, it's not bad

How about giving the protagonist a Marshado, with fighting + ghost, good attack and resistance, high racial value distribution, high attack speed, coupled with the characteristics of a technical expert and exclusive skill stealing (stealing the opponent's enhancement), I feel that this elf is quite strong, but it is rare to see authors who write Pokémon articles write about this elf!

Beautiful 👀 Looking forward to becoming a million-word book

It's very interesting. The author cheers, cheers, cheers, cheers, cheers.

Very interesting and beautiful, highly recommended [thinking][thinking][thinking]

In the front is Metagross, and in the back it becomes a metal monster. Is there a female protagonist?

I say it is really beautiful. I beg the author not to give up and keep updating. I have full marks. The rating should not be so low.

A very good new book. Suitable for people who love Pokémon.

I seem to have read a similar book, but I forgot whether it was the Water King or something.

It's a pretty good Pokémon lineup. I like it very much. The ace is Metagross. There are very few Pokémon and most of them are not good-looking. Only this one is pretty good.

Really good

Just because this guy seems to be updating every day except eating and sleeping, it's hard to give a bad review. He updates as soon as he writes. He's a ruthless typing machine. Don't mind the small details. And the book is not bad. The author disappeared within two days after praising him, woo woo woo

I haven't followed you for two days. Isn't it cold?

I hope to get some of the latest ones, such as Sai Fuhao or something like that.

It's pretty good to watch, the main character has a good outlook on things

Very much better looking than most Pokémon

Oops, it's fun to show me [shy], what kind of subject matter and what kind of rhythm, it's much better than others

Okay, okay, it looks pretty good.

Not bad, good, good-looking

Not bad, personally recommended.