Pokemon: Reborn as a Legend of the Secret Realm

Come on, it's okay

Very well written! I hope to break the million word mark!

Not bad, looks good, sounds good

Looks good. I hope it won't break.

I saw it somewhere, I won't tell you where, it's easy to get reported.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you reach the third watch, the slightest praise begins to speak out, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates on scriptures are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

I think it looks pretty

Good guy, the protagonist is Daiwu, Metagross, Boss Cordora 🤦 The friend of the protagonist, Zhang Ming, becomes less and less likable as the story progresses. I know the author wants to write about the kind of bad friends who have a good relationship. But whether a bad friend is a bad friend or not depends on the situation. For example, my brothers are fine when they are playing together in private. But in front of my family or outsiders, they are given enough face and will not be unscrupulous at all times. Everyone is very well-behaved when the situation is wrong 🤦. On the contrary, Zhang Ming often yells and screams regardless of the occasion. Every time he talks nonsense, some book friends will comment on this section: This person is very annoying 🤦

Isn't this the Jiang family's book? . . [What]

Well written, keep up the good work