After My Sexual Transformation, I Became the White Moonlight of the Whole School

To be honest, what I want to see is a strong woman, a genius, a beautiful face, a perseverant character, a sincere love for her family, and an unswerving belief in wanting her family to live a better life. She is full of peace and quiet in the years, a simple life without breaking her expectations for life, and she will meet like-minded friends. Gradually, there will be a good career and a happy love life, which seems simple and beautiful. I don't want the heroine to be regarded as an object in the eyes of others, and only interested in breaking her life. That is a kind of frivolity. If you want to describe emotions, it can be the mutual sympathy between strong people. Gradually the temperature is rising, this may be what readers cannot achieve but yearn for, and the description of the rich roommate is too extreme. It is just because the heroine's indifference is regarded as a kind of contempt by the other party. It may be that the author describes some people like this with bad words and meanness to reflect the heroine's firm heart, but in fact the heroine is Sexual groups are not as described in the article, but they are in a state of jealousy and hatred towards excellent people. Generally, they can get along well with some things in life, gossip, hobbies, clothing, fights between friends, etc. They will also worship or yearn for excellent people or things. Of course, it also depends on personal views. The character of the heroine is well described in the article, but the supporting characters are a bit extreme. From the article, it seems like she is remarrying. If I choose a male protagonist, I don't want him to be paranoid, crazy and possessive. For a female protagonist, I need someone who is gentle, intellectual, and has a measure of progress and retreat. Generally speaking, if the heroine's character is too aggressive, it will be counterproductive.

This is the only novel about transmutation that seems to have no sense of disobedience or embarrassment. The changes in the heroine's thoughts and behaviors are very logical. Unlike the previous novels about transmarriage, in which she accepts her physical changes so easily and is so complacent (?). It is very warm, natural, and sometimes a little touching. I hope Lin Mo will get better and better, whether in life, study, or future relationships! (Quietly asking, who is the male protagonist? Qin Lang (I don't feel like it, more like a one-sided heartbeat? Or has he not appeared yet?)

Compared with other marriage changes, this one is not so bloody. I think this book could be made more enjoyable, for example, by bringing back the system that comes and goes. If the system doesn't come back, it may be because the heroine's IQ is too high and the author didn't think of giving her any abilities for a while. I think we can first increase her strength. Although the heroine's physique has increased to over ten, she is still relatively powerless compared to adult men. If you really meet someone with evil intentions, it's really hard to tell. There is also Qin Lang. It can be seen that he is the male protagonist, but it is not enough for him to be the boyfriend of the female protagonist. He only knows that he is praised by many people, but the female protagonist is not any worse than him. I think we can change it from these two points first [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I haven't seen such a good marriage change in a long time. The male protagonist must be Qin Lang. It's best to do double cleansing [blowing kiss]

It's a very good book. Although I don't like the protagonist's character very much, I can see that the author is a person with excellent writing skills and delicate emotions.

The plot is not suspended, and under the setting of gender change, Lin Mo handles the challenges of not adapting to his new identity and system tasks very delicately. For example, from weak to strong physique, you can see the traces of his hard work. Unlocking skills does not happen overnight. Basic clothing, absolute sense of sound, etc., Slowly create the prototype of the "perfect goddess". The transformation from an unknown person to a white moonlight on campus is refreshing and real. The author lays out the growth line superbly. The following article is like following the transformation of the protagonist. I love it! I just felt that the protagonist was too rational at first, a bit like a robot, but the later interactions with the grandparents were really touching (//∇//) detailed and very specific

It's very good to read. The first 50 chapters of this book focus on the self-contradiction and differences of changing from male to female. There are novel contents that have not been seen in previous sexual transformations. It has a different look and feel, which reflects the gap, depression, and despair of male to female... And the author's writing is good (at least it is different from I am Yun Ni, the author said, I am Ni [face covering]). The writing is very detailed, very logical, and very interesting (I read it page by page without skipping, and the quality of the work is really hard to say). By the 50th chapter, there will be a sense of enlightenment for the protagonist, and the reader will finally get out of the depressing atmosphere.

See Chapter 82. This novel gave me a rather unique feeling. Compared with other marriage-changing novels, this novel may not have strong senses, nor does it have many exciting plots, or it may be too bland to express the excitement. Many plots can be written happily, but they are not. For example, first in the grade, first in the national competition, and even the domineering president-like character, as long as it is written according to the traditional routine, it can actually be written very happily. So in terms of enjoyment, this book is actually average. But it is precisely because of this that this book is very special, with its own strong style and charm, especially the depiction of the protagonist's changing gender perception, which can be said to be quite distinctive, but this style and charm are very attractive. Those who could read it thought highly of the book, but those who couldn't read it thought it was mediocre. The biggest problem for me at the moment, or the one that is most likely to explode is probably the choice of the male protagonist. The protagonist is so unique that the few boys currently portrayed are not worthy of the protagonist. If you choose it rashly, it will be easy to explode, but if you appear too late, the portrayal will be too low. For some reason, I personally feel that a suitable male protagonist should come from academia and politics.

It's so sweet to me. After Lin Mo accepted the life of this body under the feeling of family affection, the second stage was simply a sweet and sticky young love. The details were particularly well drawn and the writing style goes without saying. I'm so sweet, so sweet

It may be a bit toxic, although I forgive and understand. But it highlights the protagonist's mental journey after his transformation. The protagonist is cold in the early stage, but becomes gentle later on, has virtuous qualities, and is a top student. The article also contains some thoughts and dreams about the protagonist changing the color of his marriage, which can be regarded as adding a bit of excitement that is not overdone. In Chapter 48, the protagonist accepts a new identity, and the main text begins, but the previous part is also very good, you can read it. At present, the writing and plot are indeed a four-star quality novel. The author is already very good. Keeping the Bianmao article updated at this level is like a fairy grass.

This is one of the best sex stories in my opinion, and the emotions are described very delicately. It is recommended that Tomato set a limit of one hour before you can comment after reading. Some netizens are really invincible and will comment after less than 30 minutes of reading.

A very good book! I am a male, and I suggest that those who lack concentration should stop after reading more than ten chapters, because the impact is a bit big! This marriage-changing novel is very different from what I have read before. It focuses on the psychological changes of the heroine and is more realistic. Um. . . I feel like there are no shortcomings or features to mention. Oh! The audience for this book will be smaller, so those who are used to reading the kind of literature on the market may find it a little uncomfortable. The heroine is set as a humanoid model. Well, you read it right. It is an extremely cold and cold story with negative emotional intelligence (I can't find any words to describe it). If you continue to watch it, I will change it to five stars.

So sweet! ! ! ! At first, I even wanted to imitate the heroine's learning style_(´ཀ`‖ ∠)_, but the writing in the end is really sweet! However, the progress is indeed a bit fast, and it is easy for others to mistakenly think that the male protagonist is inferior (><)

It perfectly matches my fantasy of high IQ and the fantasy of the steel forest in the future (except for a few plots, everything else is perfect). I am very curious about the author's mental state. It feels like another soul is writing when writing the book (maybe the protagonist is the sustenance of the author's mental state? And the hardships he experienced are a reflection of reality) All in all, the protagonist is in a good mental state, and some parts are far more rational than other novels. His mental state is very complex, and there is a feeling of conflict between rationality and sensibility. It may be due to personal reasons, but I feel that the writing is too ideal. As for the supporting characters, it is related to personal experience. If the author did not write according to those classic routines, the supporting characters he wrote would be heavier in a certain aspect, just like his grandparents, who would write more emotionally (and some plots would be too emotional). From the content point of view, if you skip the content that may appear in the future, it can be read as another novel (personal speculation, the author may have read many social-related books in reality, because the author writes the protagonist from being absolutely rational to slowly becoming emotional, and the writing is very good. I dare not say it exceeds 90%, but it definitely exceeds 80%) Then, this review is only based on my personal perspective and my cognition to review this novel. All emotional and rational understandings of the characters are analyzed from my personal perspective, so if your opinions conflict with mine, or my cognition is wrong, you are welcome to make corrections. Characterization of the protagonist: 100 (personal perspective) Story plot arrangement: 90 (interspersed with twists and turns, although there are conflicts, but overall it is harmless) Supporting character setting: 85 (some characters have the problems of early novels, such as character settings that are too logical) Total score 100+90+85=275\300= 90%*5=4.5 Stars

I have never written a book review, but I really want to write this one. It's very slow and delicate, not as fast-paced as other books, and the heroine's psychological transformation is very natural. It is a campus-type sweet novel. Although it is late, the first chapters are devoted to portraying the heroine. Her character is very plump. In the early stage, she was just to complete the system tasks, but she never appeared in the system again. There was only a genius girl from an ordinary family who struggled to make her family live a good life through her own efforts. The male protagonist gave the heroine a human touch as she moved forward. His constant pursuit and the care of the heroine's family finally turned her from a machine without errors to a person with various emotions. I have read 80% of it so far. If the ending is not shocking, I think this is a good book.

It feels very good that all the words and deeds are in line with the male protagonist's character, no, the female protagonist's character. Although some words are a bit abstract for ordinary people, they are just right for the protagonist. The heroine is very strong, but also very fragile in some places. She may be a bit perverted to say the least. I really want the heroine to be controlled and become a canary. A little abuse is just right. Then the male protagonist comes back to redeem himself, which is great. Of course, it depends on how the author does it, I really like this.

In terms of writing style, it deserves five stars, and it is considered top-notch among daily articles in Tomato. However, this article has a clear sense of plot line tearing, and it can feel that the author has made changes and abandonments to the plot line characters and plot of the entire article. It is recommended that you write a more detailed outline in your next work. If you have novel ideas, you can keep them in future works. Try to maintain coherence and consistency, and do not let external factors affect your creation! Thanks to the author for his work.

To be honest, it's really good. Although some short reviews don't understand what the author wants to express, a 20-year-old bookworm said it's really good.

It's good to watch, but the heroine looks like a robot in the first few dozen chapters, but she gets much better in the later chapters. The hero must be Qin Lang o(*≧▽≦)ツ ~ ┴┴

. The author is so talented. This is my first time reading this type of novel. I mean the subject matter is really fantastic. In reality, no one would do this.

The whole story has a cold, non-lively feel to it, but the setting and the protagonist's awkwardness are well described. Sometimes I feel that the protagonist is having a hard time. Good looking. I hope the protagonist will be stronger, but I feel that getting stronger through the system is quite gradual. The protagonist himself is the strongest academic master.

Super beautifully written! ! ! ! The male protagonist must be Qin Lang! ! ! ! !

I hope the male protagonist can be Qin Heng, one who is rational and calm, and the other who is cautious and has strong sexual tension.

Not bad, not bad. It was a bit boring when I watched it at the beginning, but it gets better and better later on [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

It's really good-looking. The details are described in meticulous detail and are extremely emotional. The narrative has a strong sense of life. The heroine's inner transformation is very delicate and the pace is slow. Those who can see it will like it very much, while those who can't see it will find it boring. The early and late stages of this book are two worlds (can even be read as two books). The early stage is about the cold thinking inertia of the protagonist, and the later stage is about marrying a sweetheart.

This book is very good. It writes a kind of imperfect perfection. It has touching feelings, different friendships, endless tolerant and loving family ties, the pain of life and death, and the warmth of acquaintance. It is a very rational book. Keep it up with the next one, keep it up [note]

The writing style is very delicate, and the feelings are very sincere. The protagonist's initial disgust to his gradual acceptance is very well written. I hope the author will continue to update and publish a physical book as soon as possible, which will become popular all over the Internet.

Alas, the author's writing is very good. It was also the first time for me to read this subject and I felt empty in my heart. Maybe it was because I was in high school. I also lived through my youth and it felt like I was living a high school life all over again after watching it.

It's a very good book. Although I don't know why the rating is so low, I support the author to continue to make more books [please update]

It's so beautiful. I don't allow anyone to refute my point of view. It's really good-looking, and the emotional transformation of the heroine is really amazing.