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The author's idea is good, it can be said to be a brand new track. The interaction between Hui Liyi and Lu Mingfei is very sweet. The date between Jiang Nan and Herzog is well received. Some of the dialogues between Hui Liyi and Lu Mingfei in it are really tearful. It can be regarded as making up for the regrets of the dragon family and showing the purity of Hui Liyi. The reunion is very fast and very beautiful. I very much hope that the ending of this book will be happy. Actually, I am talking nonsense. After all, this is the purpose of watching Dragon Clan fan fiction. In fact, I think Lu Hui's rebirth is an illusion, an illusion before his death (of course, this is the answer I think everyone must have in their hearts. After all, belief is existence, and existence is reality). This is actually not sad. The war between kings has always been endless. No matter how powerful the king is, he will definitely die one day (firmly believe), Lu Mingfei's footsteps are certain. It will also stop. Death is the end of life. At that time, Lu Mingfei will find that the little monster is waiting for him at the end of the world. After all, Eri is the best and she likes Sakura the most. They will definitely be happy in the next world. This is my opinion on this book and my fantasy about the dragon clan. I think it is very reasonable. If you don't like it, please don't criticize me. Thank you very much. I hope you all have your own Eri clothes. Finally, I wish the author's books will get better and better, and the traffic can increase [please update] I'm not like you. I only finished watching Ryuzo four months ago (I watched Ryuichi and Ryuuji four or five years ago). The stamina of Eriyi was really great for me, which directly affected my happiness in summer vacation. Throughout July, I hugged Ryuzo every day while watching Sakura Day, and sat in bed in silence. When Jiang Nan wrote this paragraph, it really gave me a feeling that the ending of Eriyi can change it. This is my greatest experience in Ryusan. Unfortunately, I think I need to read some fanfics, so starting from August, I started to read Dragon Clan fanfics. There are many fanfics, but not many of them can be found on my bookshelf. This one is among them, it is considered a T1 level. First of all, the setting of this book is very interesting, with twins and inner feelings. Secondly, it makes up for my regrets. Then, the characterization of the characters is very delicate. Finally, this book is very suitable for my taste. Because of these fans, I started to block the original memories, and my mood became much better. Is it going up so fast?

The writing is very good, but I think the author could have given Lu Mingfei the cheek to ask for the Show me the flowers as a surprise for Eri Yi. Or maybe Lu Mingfei didn't want to rely on this word spirit and took the initiative to prepare a surprise when they met. (It must be explained in the article, otherwise it will easily become a poisonous point)

Jiangnan and Herzog's Dating Reviews

The writing is okay, but there are some problems with some details. The later road drawings do not share the perspective, but the previous ones have not been changed [what], but there are no major problems. I hope the road will be stronger. Aloe is always together. [Send heart][Send heart]

Brother, there is an author named Jiang Nan on the Internet who stole your book.

The Three Golden Chapters are very good. One sentence with a dragon flavor is worth a thousand words. But, it's really but, from the beginning of the interview. . . , In the eyes of a reader like me, they are all very separate. No, it should be said that every character is beginning to be different from the person in his heart. Everyone has a different understanding of the Dragon Clan. Looking at the purpose of Dragon Clan fandom, I guess it is to make up for the regrets in my heart, but if the characters are different, it will be a completely different story, a story of someone else. People will change, but the inside will not change, not to mention that except for the two rebirths, people cannot change in the novel. I'm currently reading Chapter 9, but I left. The reason for leaving is that many people are different, or my understanding of the dragon characters is very different from the author's understanding of them. I hope the author can write good results and leave~

It's rare that the characters of "Dragon Tribe" are not completely written down. There are enough reasons to suspect that the author is a trumpet opened by Jiang Nan, but he is a good person. To make up for the regret, he must be strongly supported. The author gives a big boost (ง•̀_•́)ง

Just like the dinner found in the swill, although it is not a delicacy, it can be called a delicacy here. Oh, yes, this text has been changed over and over again, resulting in some basic settings not matching up, making it very blurry, and the viewing experience is not very good.

The author's description of Eri is super cute. It feels very consistent with the ignorant look in the original work. The setting is also quite novel and worth recommending [laughs]

Lu Mingfei and Eri Yi are so close to each other! Super sweet! Lu Mingfei is finally no longer that bad boy! Mr. Lu, you must protect Eriyi this time and don't let the tragedy happen again!

Let me give the author some very practical suggestions. 1* Author, if you can add a sentence or even half a sentence at the end of each paragraph to deepen the description or explain the content, your writing will be better. Even if everyone knows the plot you write, you have to explain it immediately, otherwise it will be empty. If you read it carefully and work hard to construct the picture, this novel would be very good. 2* Please add more action descriptions. Psychological descriptions alone cannot highlight the character's psychological process. 3* Please make your rhythm more ups and downs. A very useful method is to make the sentence patterns of each paragraph different.

Although the author made some minor mistakes in some details, this book is really beautiful. Www. The interactions between the road paintings are super cute. I haven't seen a road painting text that appeals to me in a long time (´இωஇ｀)

This is the best fanfic I've ever read.

So far, there are no poisonous points, the logic is quite good, and the author's writing has a hint of Jiangnan. To be honest, none of the self-made protagonists created by Dragon Clan fans can be read. Those who are the characters in the original book are the protagonists. It is good enough to read the original cp. The self-made protagonists written by others feel that they can't be brought into the circle. Is it better for Lu Mingfei to be the protagonist?

Author, Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 Hun Xi Returns... Hun Xi When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is more focused. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates on scriptures are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally.

It's a pretty good fanfic, but let me tell you in advance that this fanfic does not belong to the Return of the King genre, and of course it is not a loser style. The protagonist is just like an ordinary mixed race, a mortal flow between the loser style and the Return of the Dragon King style. If you want to read the Return of the Dragon King style, you don't need to read this book.

Very good. The description of the characters is better than the original work. The grasp of details is also very good. The characters have rich emotional settings, which is very good.

This is a super cute and beautiful article It's just that there's less of it now. It makes people's hearts melt when they see it. Please also ask the author to work hard and update

The writing is very good. The writing style is very good. I read it in one sitting. It is very enjoyable. Although it is relatively short, this is not a shortcoming. It is that I was fed a knife at the end. I thought there was a knife, but it turned out to be a joke to me? !

The ending is very hasty and touching. It doesn't talk about Dragon 4 and Dragon 5. I think Koji will protect Eri even then. After all, the little monster is now Lu Mingfei's world.

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It's very good, and it ranks among the fans I've read.

Beautiful, no need to say more

It's really beautiful! ! ! I hope the author won't disappear. It's hard to find such good-looking and continuously updated dragon fanfics [crying]

Chapter 51 has no flaws so far, it looks very good [Chigua]

Jiang Nan is just a fan writer. What does he know about the Dragon Clan? [Laughs] From now on, you will be Jiang Nan.

In fact, I don't like Lu Hui that much, I just like Lu Mingfei. Lu Mingfei is simply too pitiful. He is not liked by his classmates in the book and hated by readers outside the book. Moreover, Jiang Nan can't understand Lu Mingfei now. This is simply the ultimate blood sorrow. I have recently read too many books that insult Ming Fei (blunt masochism, reading each book less than thirty minutes before deleting it), and now I feel better after reading the author's books.

I just finished reading Dragon Trilogy, and it's great to read this again. I have my own judgment on who is the real author of Dragon Trilogy. Jiangnan will just follow the author's arrangement and live a good life with Herzog, hahahahahahaha

It suits my taste very well! ! ! But I don't know why, few people watch it! You must persist until the end! ! !

It's quite sweet, so sweet that I, a non-authentic dragon reader, find it boring.