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Reader comments
The writing style is worthy of being the benchmark for the Chinese Department of prestigious universities, and the professionalism is revealed between the lines. This experience of being defeated by reality records in detail the author's transformation from helplessness and hesitation to collapse, to the final numb acceptance and submission. I have to admire Mamasan's shrewdness and pursuit of interests to win over people's hearts. Everything is a slave that revolves around money. It is not a circle that ordinary people can get involved in. People from the upper class and VIPs from top clubs are shown here in a more tactful and restrained manner. The charm of money has cut off the dignity and face of many people...
Although the content is relatively simple and a bit divorced from reality, the writing is really profitable. The boss is rich but not a fool, and the writing style is almost repetitive in some places. However, the psychological description is rich enough, and the inner struggle of the characters is obvious enough. Although it is not rigorous, the transitions can be seen, and there is a certain depth that makes people shine. It is really good to read as a short story. By the way, there are still areas for improvement in the work. Strengthen the plot of the parents, and change the attitude towards the parents before and after. Then the plot of Fang Qing meeting the heroine after embarking on this road due to lack of money for some reasons was put to the end. Can be more impressive.
The author won't reveal how the upper class live their lives, right [laughs awkwardly]
The writing style is worthy of being the benchmark for the Chinese Department of prestigious universities, and the professionalism is revealed between the lines. This experience of being defeated by reality records in detail the author's transformation from helplessness and hesitation to collapse, to the final numb acceptance and submission. I have to admire Mamasan's shrewdness and pursuit of interests to win over people's hearts. Everything is a slave that revolves around money. It is not a circle that ordinary people can get involved in. People from the upper class and VIPs from top clubs are shown here in a more tactful and restrained manner. The charm of money has cut off the dignity and face of many people...
Although the content is relatively simple and a bit divorced from reality, the writing is really profitable. The boss is rich but not a fool, and the writing style is almost repetitive in some places. However, the psychological description is rich enough, and the inner struggle of the characters is obvious enough. Although it is not rigorous, the transitions can be seen, and there is a certain depth that makes people shine. It is really good to read as a short story. By the way, there are still areas for improvement in the work. Strengthen the plot of the parents, and change the attitude towards the parents before and after. Then the plot of Fang Qing meeting the heroine after embarking on this road due to lack of money for some reasons was put to the end. Can be more impressive.
The author won't reveal how the upper class live their lives, right [laughs awkwardly]