A Mysterious World, Starting with a Contract with a Stunningly Beautiful Woman

The original flavor is good, there is no need to forcefully put on a layer of Oriental skin

A mysterious world, starting with a contract with a stunningly beautiful woman rubber destroyer This is a refreshing novel by a novice. For me, I will add one star for this subject matter. The plot is not too over the top, and the design is not too exciting, but it is still a bit fun. The protagonist's behavior is also quite wanton at the moment, well, so wanton. As a result, the pace of the development of the story is not tight enough, and the protagonist seems to be paddling, but it feels okay and has the freedom and ease of an outsider. It's just that at the current novice stage, the protagonist's behavior is already a bit repetitive. Whether it can maintain the sense of fun in the future is more important than maintaining logic. 4~4 And a half stars, new book issue, rounded up.

The story is smooth, the protagonist has a decisive character, and he doesn't hesitate to recruit girls. It's a rare masterpiece.

I felt good after listening to Chapter 122 and expressed my feelings. The author has worked hard, and the plot and combat power combine Chinese and Western elements in a harmonious way. Aesthetics are also online. The setting is considered novel, with Nicole Kidman playing the role of the ghost mother of nine sons, which is eye-catching. In Chapter 444, I heard that the character of Ikkyu's female apprentice was poorly written. I don't eat beef! ! ! ! ! Are you used to it?

The reason for deducting one star is because how could there be a division of realms in the West? Otherwise, it would have appeared in their works.

It's a genre I like to watch, and I suggest the author consider the male protagonist more when writing battle scenes. The output I've seen so far relies entirely on the explosion flow. The male protagonist is a monster with a K-head. When the enemy is crippled, he teleports over and stabs him. The most unbearable thing is the K-head three times. One was successful, one life was exchanged for another, and one was unsuccessful [face covering]. I have learned a lot of spells before, and now I have to think about how to use them in battle, how can a mage be transformed into Marvel Loki?

It's okay, the ideas are ok, but the details still need to be polished. For example, local things like Maoshan's talismans and Feng Shui need to be deepened a bit.

I love watching, but the only drawback is that I don't have enough to watch [laughing]

Very good, not abusive, a qualified and refreshing article

Jennifer's body. Underworld

The Stallion novel is interspersed with the plot of the movie. Well, it's quite interesting.

Although I came to see the harem, the plot development and connection are still good. The pig's feet are not only for recruiting people, but also ghosts and zombies.

Very good, stop being a eunuch!

It's not bad, but later on I took in a lot of girls, but I didn't take them if they were not stunningly beautiful, and I took some unimpressive girls as concubines, and I felt less picky about food than at the beginning.

This book is slow-cooked, with a bland narrative and insufficient character development.

It's a very good and refreshing article. You can dig deeper into the plot.

It's well written, the protagonist is not a virgin, and she has a moral bottom line. Although he is a pervert

Give yourself a high mark.

Very interesting, good, good, good

Very good, the author keeps up the good work

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work!

Come on, good, good, good

It looks okay, not bad

Awesome harem, no procrastination in writing

Beautiful and well written!

Still very good, worth watching It's very good. Like Jiu Shu World Time, if you don't use your brain to watch it, there won't be any problem. It's basically quite smooth. You can take a look.

How about joining a dead date?

Not bad, you can read it in Shuhuang

There is no big problem except that the time is different at home and abroad.

Eating V seems to give you an attack bonus