[No system, no CP] [Mask] [Demon] [Enter the prehistoric world view later in the plot] [The Adventures of Jackie Chan] [Prehistoric]
What, you said I turned into the sky demon Ximu?
And it starts in hell? Is this still early in the plot?
Wouldn't that ruin the child?
After waiting so hard for the Demon Chapter, and watching your demon brothers being sent back one by one?
Of course not, I definitely have to do something.
? The first thing you do after choosing to be released by the Holy Lord is to run directly.
After finally getting the last mask, you told me that Bazaar was also sealed, and now he and the Holy Lord are the only ones left?
Holy Lord: In that case, I will open my door and let you pass through.
"? You said someone is ready to open my door?" The Holy Master looked confused.
Demons: Back to hell again, what to do now?
? : Maybe there are other ways.
Reader comments
Well, the writing is quite good, and the content is well-founded. Well, the writing is quite good, and the content is well-founded. I hope the protagonist can finally regain his authority. At the same time, there are no poisonous points or any plot that forcibly suppresses the ability.
The writing is quite nice, at least it doesn't have too many flaws and it flows quite smoothly. But I'm quite worried about the follow-up positioning, and the sky is a bit blurry. Overall good review.
I have read so many fans of Jackie Chan's Adventures, and this one is really well written, full marks! Does the author plan to write a female protagonist? How about Xiaoyu?
It's been a long time since I've given five stars to a novel. Really, I didn't expect to give it to a fanfic. It's well written, basically no poisonous points, and the points given are very reasonable. The writing is relatively smooth, and the foreshadowing is also very reasonable.
The Jackie Chan Adventures fanfics are of pretty good quality, the plot writing is top-notch, and the sense of immersion is obvious. It's not like those mindless and cool articles with dozens of invincible pictures. This Westwood book has been struggling to explode in the early stage, which is much better than those that have always been fun.
It's okay, I can keep watching it, but I don't write much, and it's hard to guarantee the follow-up plot.
The writing is very good, at least it's not toxic so far. Keep up the good work, author.
It's okay so far, so I'll give it four stars and wait for the plot in the future. [Understood]
To be honest, this book is still very good. There is nothing poisonous about it. From Jackie Chan to the prehistoric era, the eight demons share the same heart. If you like Jackie Chan's adventures and prehistoric novels, you can read it. The low score must be deliberately brushed by someone.
Why do so many people like to suppress this book? I think it's pretty good. I can understand some of the layouts. For example, who doesn't want to add more cards to their collection? In the future of the prehistoric world, I hope Hongjun is a good person, and it must not be a conspiracy theory, because conspiracy theories cannot be justified. They all seem good so far, but why does the Water Demon feel so dumb and afraid of society? Is there any foreshadowing in this?
It's good for passing the time, and it looks good.
Still quite interesting. Come on
I took a look, it's very good
Come on, come on, come on
You can watch before the prehistoric times. After the prehistoric times, the combat power collapsed.
A fan of Adventures, I like it, it's good
The subject matter is novel and interesting. I love watching. Can I have Nishiki and Xiaoyu CP? [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
It's really hard to be black
What about Su in Thunder and Lightning? Will he be rescued later? Will previous promises work? What about the relationship with Xiaoyu?
Not bad, very pretty
Good, good, good
It's interesting to see Chapter 55
Ok ok ok
Very beautiful, very beautiful
This book is pretty good
Not bad, not bad. Stay steady from behind.
Come on, author, come on!
I don't feel like there's any big problem now, I don't know what will happen in the future.
Author, this book has been written so far
This is a very well-written book. This is one of the few books that I saw hundreds of people urging me to update, but not many people "powering for love" to reward it [laughing and crying]
Well, the writing is quite good, and the content is well-founded. Well, the writing is quite good, and the content is well-founded. I hope the protagonist can finally regain his authority. At the same time, there are no poisonous points or any plot that forcibly suppresses the ability.
The writing is quite nice, at least it doesn't have too many flaws and it flows quite smoothly. But I'm quite worried about the follow-up positioning, and the sky is a bit blurry. Overall good review.
I have read so many fans of Jackie Chan's Adventures, and this one is really well written, full marks! Does the author plan to write a female protagonist? How about Xiaoyu?
It's been a long time since I've given five stars to a novel. Really, I didn't expect to give it to a fanfic. It's well written, basically no poisonous points, and the points given are very reasonable. The writing is relatively smooth, and the foreshadowing is also very reasonable.
The Jackie Chan Adventures fanfics are of pretty good quality, the plot writing is top-notch, and the sense of immersion is obvious. It's not like those mindless and cool articles with dozens of invincible pictures. This Westwood book has been struggling to explode in the early stage, which is much better than those that have always been fun.
It's okay, I can keep watching it, but I don't write much, and it's hard to guarantee the follow-up plot.
The writing is very good, at least it's not toxic so far. Keep up the good work, author.
It's okay so far, so I'll give it four stars and wait for the plot in the future. [Understood]
To be honest, this book is still very good. There is nothing poisonous about it. From Jackie Chan to the prehistoric era, the eight demons share the same heart. If you like Jackie Chan's adventures and prehistoric novels, you can read it. The low score must be deliberately brushed by someone.
Why do so many people like to suppress this book? I think it's pretty good. I can understand some of the layouts. For example, who doesn't want to add more cards to their collection? In the future of the prehistoric world, I hope Hongjun is a good person, and it must not be a conspiracy theory, because conspiracy theories cannot be justified. They all seem good so far, but why does the Water Demon feel so dumb and afraid of society? Is there any foreshadowing in this?
It's good for passing the time, and it looks good.
Still quite interesting. Come on
I took a look, it's very good
Come on, come on, come on
You can watch before the prehistoric times. After the prehistoric times, the combat power collapsed.
A fan of Adventures, I like it, it's good
The subject matter is novel and interesting. I love watching. Can I have Nishiki and Xiaoyu CP? [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
It's really hard to be black
What about Su in Thunder and Lightning? Will he be rescued later? Will previous promises work? What about the relationship with Xiaoyu?
Not bad, very pretty
Good, good, good
It's interesting to see Chapter 55
Ok ok ok
Very beautiful, very beautiful
This book is pretty good
Not bad, not bad. Stay steady from behind.
Come on, author, come on!
I don't feel like there's any big problem now, I don't know what will happen in the future.
Author, this book has been written so far
This is a very well-written book. This is one of the few books that I saw hundreds of people urging me to update, but not many people "powering for love" to reward it [laughing and crying]