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Not bad... Long is quite cute... Not an exaggerated heartthrob (currently)... At first, I came here for the heartthrob without cp. After reading it, I found out that it is a double male protagonist.. I personally hope it is without cp.. Reading the comments, it seems that I hope it is Longha and Long. I don't read the upper level book... I am waiting and watching...

I read it in one go. I am very friendly to the protagonist. I like the protagonist's faint sense of inhumanity. He is strong and emotionally stable. All living beings equally like small pets like humans. It is a very good owner [like]

It's pretty cool, but I feel like people who like Malfoy will be pissed off.

It's just that Malfoy's character is a bit OOC. After all, Malfoy is the heir of a pure-blood family and has been educated since childhood, so his behavior is not so rude and stupid. Apart from this, this book is pretty good.

Love Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine! Love Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine! Love Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine! Love Draco's lightning protection! Everyone else loves Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine! Love Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine! Love Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine! Love Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine! Good! Love Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine! Love Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine! Love Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine! Love Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine! Love Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine! Love Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine! Love Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine! Love Draco's lightning protection! Everything else is fine!

Not bad, the protagonist is not aggrieved and belongs to the invincible genre. You need to have strength and ability, and you need to have good looks and good looks. The pretense should be natural and not greasy. Belongs to the type of heartthrob for both men and women. And popularity is logical, not the kind of inexplicable and mindless popularity. There's just one thing, if you like Draco, don't read it. I'm the kind of person who doesn't have any feelings for Draco, so I didn't feel any discomfort while reading this book. In this book, Draco is severely bullied, and he will constantly make trouble for the protagonist without thinking, and then be slapped in the face by the protagonist. Some of Malfoy's judgment of the situation is not reflected at all. Just like the operation of Black Ron in some articles, well, I can only say that things are changing. The other books are Black Ron, this one is Black Draco.

The character development is very good, but I hope there won't be a female protagonist. Two male protagonists or no CP will be fine [smile]

It's very interesting. I've also read another Tomb Raider fan novel by the author. Both of them are very interesting. Unlike other HP fan novels, the background of the protagonist is very large or complicated. The identity of the protagonist in the author's novel is very simple and crude, without any unnecessary redundancy or foreshadowing. I just feel that the update is a bit slow. (Maybe I read it too quickly?) Anyway, good luck to the author. (Does the author seem like a person who rarely talks? Because there is very little interaction in the comment area)

This seems to be my first time reading this type of novel. To be honest, I find it quite strange. I like this setting. I am somewhat looking forward to the author's characters growing up step by step and finally reaching a happy ending that belongs to him or them. Although it is regrettable and a bit sad, the author also has to live, and it is understandable to stop writing. I see that many readers hope that the author will continue to update, and I hope so too, but I don't want the author to have a psychological burden because of these words. Live a good life first, put life first, take care of yourself first, you are the most important, and everything else can be put aside later. Besides, I think it's okay to write it here. The road ahead still needs to be walked by themselves. They should find their own unique future. You give them a soul, and then it's up to them. Dudley's story didn't end hastily, he just felt freer.

It's actually over... Good looking The protagonist treats Hogwarts as a pet cage, and everyone is his family pet. He has the ability to compete with everyone, so he is fearless. In the end, it was Harry who kissed him. Harry was anxious and jealous of others being close to the protagonist, but he was also afraid of the protagonist's dissatisfaction. Anyway, I feel that this position is just right. The protagonist tries to understand love. Voldemort has also had three Horcruxes destroyed. Harry has the courage to kiss him. The trio has all grown up. The protagonist has become invincible. There is nothing more to learn. It stops just enough to leave room for fictional fantasy.

I have read Chapter 32 so far, and it is very interesting. The writing is very similar to the original work. Let me mention that Draco is the Draco in the original work, not the Draco played by Felton. I don't know if the protagonist will become friends with him in the later period, but I am afraid that some Draco fans will scold the author when they see Draco being embarrassed. The original Draco is such a disgusting thing. The Draco that the public likes is the movie version. Don't substitute the movie version of Draco.

I like books written in big letters, and I like both of them. Come on, big letters!♥(｡￫V￩｡)♥

To be honest, whether it is Dudley in the original text or Dudley in this fanfic, his parents really love him.

Wow, the dragon turned into a human being and became Dudley. It is indeed innovative. I like this Dudley very much and I am looking forward to the follow-up [Love] [Love] [Like]

It's a super good book. I've been following it. The plot is very comfortable to read. The heartthrob is a god-like setting. I live on this every day (*¯¯*). I keep taking supplements and giving up the trap. . . The teacher writes really well╯╰ I love this book so much π_π

Super nice \(//∇//)\ I am the author. I didn't update because the data was too bad before. I hope the author can continue to update [Blow kiss]

The subject matter is great. I hope the author can write about Hogwarts like the one next door. @Jingshentiansi can only write 3/4 of its chapters.

It's so great, so cool, so beautiful! ! !

Please update quickly. It's so beautiful, it's not enough.

They are really beautiful. They are all cute babies (except for some people). I really like Daliosaurus.

It's too short and it's really pretty. The protagonist who goes his own way is not bad.

It's really good-looking, I enjoyed it very much [crying] I was told back twice by the comment section, but it's really really good-looking! ! ! I don't understand why so few people watch it! The rating is so low! ! ! It's really, really beautiful. I hope the author can come back [crying][crying][crying]

Very pretty, not bad

The author writes beautifully

Like to watch, feel novel

Woo woo woo no more

It feels like a great book

Did something go wrong with my brain just now? Why do I feel like I heard something wrong? Am I imagining it? I think I heard the traffic is bad. Author, you must update it

I was healed, and yes, the protagonist deserves love.

The kite can fly high because of the restraints