From America to Name

The writing is okay. I read it in one night. It's a good book for Tomato. Keep it up. It looks fine from the front, but in the back, if you write about tactics, just write tactics. It must be chaotic.

So far there are only two flaws, both of which are in the first story. The first point is that an ordinary person started to kill directly and decisively and became a little superman. The second point is that he was too trusting and generous to that woman, and his flaws were not covered up by more than eight points.

Top rating! 5 Points! Must be 5 points [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile] Hahahaha, hit the bell [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Some stories are good, some don't want to read, Donuts is okay, the title is good, Love of Mountains and Seas to be honest, I don't really like it, they are all good and I like them very much, but I haven't finished updating this story yet, I hope the author will continue to work hard to update! Come on, author!

Okay, it's pretty good, but I feel like the second world is a little bit flawed. After all, I've experienced so much, but the psychological description of the new world is a bit like a new recruit's egg, but overall it can be used as food.

Yes, it's very interesting. I especially like the titular chapter, but there are too few.

I gave this volume five stars because of (In the Name of the People). The writing is really awesome, the protagonist sets up a dragnet specifically to protect Handong Province. In order to fight against the Zhong family.

So far, the first world is the best written. It cleverly used the fame of donuts in the real world, which aroused my curiosity about the development of the plot. The contrast between the donuts' performance on USA's senses in the real world and the novel world earned me five-star praise. However, the subsequent worlds are a bit unfinished, and the plot development rhythm is not good. I look forward to the author's further development.

The first world was okay, but it just felt like it ended before I could even start writing it. I hope this world in In the Name of the People can be written longer.

Name: The protagonist is very angry and hits the bell

It's thirty-six chapters since I started reading in name. The writing is delicate and interesting. Please stay tuned for updates.

It's very well written, keep it up!

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I'll give you a five for the good writing at the back ❤️

Look good. Shuang Wai Wai [Adoration]

Good, good, good

The grain and grass are real and can be seen at a glance

It's kind of interesting [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

In the nominal article, why did you risk your life to kill Zhao Ruilong [laughing and crying]

If you don't have enough writing skills to control the subject matter, come on!

Not bad, not bad. The first donut was not that good. The name is okay.

Very good, worthy of five stars

It's not procrastinating, the word count is not high, the plot is smooth, and it's comfortable to watch [laughs]

It's worth a look, I just looked at the name. It's very interesting. I also went to PDD and bought the book "The Rise of Great Powers". [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

The protagonist's survival depends entirely on the author's blessing.

A little extra points, Minyi has a little less detail, it just feels like an outline.

Not bad, but I don't know how long it will take to write the title.

I am from Yaoxian County. I am from Yaoxian County, Tongchuan. Thank you for your good writing.

It's very difficult to deal with here. When you wrote about donuts, I almost wanted to give it three stars. As far as the name is concerned, it's okay so far [eat melon]. My suggestion is to start reading directly from the name chapter.

I'm just superficial. The more I see the back, the better it feels. Five stars. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]