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Personally, I feel that the world of National Games is very barren and is better than some similar works. I originally thought that when I unlocked the first power, I was given a hoe, but I didn't expect that I was given a hoe. Although it didn't hold up, it was a surprise.

That's good, but can we control the barrage? I really don't want to watch cross-circle group cp(･_･)ﾉ⌒●~*

It seems fine so far, I've seen chapter 48. It's just that I personally feel that Jeppard's character design is too OOC, especially the psychological description of Jeppard, which feels completely out of character for Geppard. I think Brother Jie is an extremely serious person who has his own judgment when it comes to business matters, but he can be a bit clumsy in life and small things. He seems to be a contrasting and humane person. Children, I am convinced. Not only Jeppard, but also other characters are not the same person as Yuan Bengtie. Jeppard is the most obvious, and Shiluva is also a character. As one of the former Belloberg leaders, he first sent a letter to the protagonist because of Star Core's intelligence. Well, the protagonist directly knocked out Cocolia and took him away, and forced his way into the Belloberg Supreme Command. Sylva still believes in the protagonist. I feel that Sylva's feelings for Beloberg are just like that. The protagonist is an alien from the outside. This is somewhat intellectual. The only one that is better is Cocolia. Maybe it's because the villain has been cleared. I can see Cocolia's courage and determination as the great guardian. This is also the case in other novels, at least I have read it and haven't written it. This is very well written.

6. The author is very NB, it has just been taken off the shelves. On the shelves again [Like]

It is rare that a national destiny story has a lot of its own things. So far, there are not many classic national destiny essays that have the false national complex. This is good. The focus is on the story rather than the national destiny. Keep it up. Do patriotic emotions really need to be vented by so-called national destiny documents? This must be negative. The strength of a country never relies on the ignorance and boasting of its enemies. If it really falls back to the traditional destiny of the country, I will come back and change the points. The point of deducting stars is that the details are not well controlled. Considering that it is a level issue, I only deducted one star.

You can write more plots about Bai E and Boss Bai, and less about foreign players (๑> <๑)

After reading a bit, I feel pretty good, but when describing the appearance of a character, there is no need to describe how beautiful or handsome that person is. Describe the general appearance of him (her, it, him), and the rest of the readers will figure it out on their own. I feel that it is comfortable to watch. Otherwise, the author's description of Boss Bai is a bit... Indescribable. Although the author said that there is no cp, there is still a feeling that she is the heroine. I hope it is a pure friendship.

The plot is very interesting, and the pure combination content without CP is also very interesting. Please speed up the update! I want to see what a whiteboard novice can do.

Overall it's good, no cp but a bit ambiguous, single recommendation for Bai'er Jieji/Sister Bai'er Jieji's cp, run quickly

The cold wind blows in the lonely valley, and the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn. The young man returns At Danghun Mountain, the stone man sheds tears, and the fixed immortal wanders to the north. Thousands of immortals on the upstream river have retreated, but love is no match for holding on to tears Destined to succeed or fail, the Immortal will regret it but I will not. I knew at an early age that things were going to be difficult, but I was still able to fly like a hero among the clouds. The cold wind feels like wadding all the way, and the fate of the sea is ups and downs, and the traveler walks alone A sword is forged with painstaking efforts and painstaking efforts. Now the sword is pointing at the clouds, refining Gu, refining people, and refining heaven The ancient emperors and immortals passed away with the wind, and the three kings of the past returned to Qingzhong Who do you think the sheep and the Han say, I worship, come back and claim the throne again Fishing for dragon fish in the Tianhe River, going against the will of heaven and walking alone in Gu Bahuang Let's spread our wings today. Tomorrow, we will ascend to heaven and eat phoenixes.

I can feel that the more I write in the future, the better I will get, and I hope to continue to make progress.

The writing is good, but I wonder if it's not very common for Bai Yuekui to be the heroine in stories about national fortunes? Even this national destiny template can be said to be overflowing. Why does this book have so many CP fans of the original characters, and why is it forbidden to cross-work CP fans?

I personally like this book better. The author can give a twist later. For example, playing Bai'e is actually himself. The role is to let him return. After the disaster of Omphalos is resolved, I hope there will be no knife.

Looks good, but these two are a bit too ambiguous

This novel can be said to be quite satisfactory, and the writing style can be seen a little bit, but it is unnecessary to add it. It seems a bit wordy, and some parts are too procrastinating. This is a purely refreshing novel, but sometimes it is too procrastinating to be enjoyable, but there is a part of the setting that is very good. Generally speaking, if I want to read a refreshing novel, I read this. [Like][Like][Like]

It's okay. There's no OOC. At first glance, it was written after reading the book next door by Bai Ke and Da Mao Wang. There was a gap of 20 days. That book was a typical time-traveling protagonist with only strength and no brains for cheating. This one is more in line with the character, although there are many authors. I didn't "learn" from that one, and even the outline is the same, but I think the writing style is better than that one. The lower score than that one is purely because it was published 20 days later, and there is a new book to score. As long as this book doesn't collapse later, it will get more than 7.3 Points [Thinking]

It's beautiful, thank you to the author!

Reduce the description of emotional scenes and cross-circle CP is not advisable

Now that the matter has come to this, I have no intention of arguing about right and wrong.... Magic↗Magic↘Technique↘Skill↗

It's a good book, worth reading. There may be some places that are not very good, but the flaws are not hidden and there is hope for the future.

It looks good, but the production capacity is a bit low [smile]

It's very interesting, although I have never been able to understand the national destiny thing. In my opinion, it is better to reduce the number of countries and throw a bunch of unimportant small countries into the big countries. After all, wars have broken out and annexation is a common thing.

It can look good

It's great. The author loves me. I want to see Xiaobai and the others go to Omfalos Awa

The descriptions are very graphic and the plot is also very good. I hope the author will update it soon [smile]

Just because of the author's attitude, his diligence, and the plot, it must be given.

Looking forward to Brother Lieyang opening up Serious OOC and too much ambiguity. . .

Let me go, is the author so diligent?

When the author is tired, he will write more. [Please update] If you are more diligent than a donkey in the production team, sooner or later you will be able to live a life of 6 to 9 (refill).

I like this kind of subject matter, but when can the author add a million enemies? I really like the CP of the two of them. Please [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]