The Eastern Palace's Inkstone

It's so beautiful that I can't help but swear. The plot twists and turns depicted here are great, more in line with historical facts, and thoughtful. This is the first time I've seen something that matches the taste so well. I highly recommend it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I have read Chapter 20 so far. Let me talk about the writing first. It is rigorous and well-written. The characters' movements, expressions, and language are spot on. From the description of the environment, we can see that the author has a good literary talent. As for the characterization, the general character traits of the two protagonists are very carefully expressed (I don't dare to draw a conclusion before I finish reading). However, the rendering of the atmosphere is too tight and too heavy on description. If the description of the environment accounts for too much in the novel, it will be top-heavy and the plot will be slow-paced. However, in some aspects of description, the author may need to learn how to deal with a more natural approach. For example, the description of the environment does not need to be too careful. It only needs to be able to render the atmosphere. More character dialogue can be added. The author does not need to analyze the protagonist's speech too much. If you want to highlight the protagonist's speaking situation or psychology at the time, you can use actions and psychological descriptions. Language description is the most direct, and readers can feel the atmosphere of the situation. Too much emphasis will be artificial and unnatural. A little sense of mystery can be retained, such as "the tip of the iceberg". Big cheers for the author! [Sending Hearts] The description is good, but it needs to be relaxed

It is really not easy for the protagonist to escape from adversity. Cautiousness is my best summary of the protagonist's character. Although the title of the book is very sweet, the protagonist and the prince are more of a monarch-subject relationship. The protagonist is super enterprising. I am a little curious about how to fall in love later. In terms of the main plot, the author handles various cases and clues surrounding the royal party and government very well, and the connection is very smooth. Good luck to those who like to watch more serious plots.

Lin Yan, you will be the prince's young master! Bachelor of Wenyuan Pavilion! Participate in maintenance! Everyone has finished reading the sweet story about two male protagonists. I highly recommend this novel. Although it is a serialization, I don't know how the author will write in the future, but I strongly recommend this novel. Although it is a time-travel and rebirth novel, the male protagonist here does not use a system, a prophet, or the like. He relies on the historical knowledge he learned before time-traveling, and his analysis, step by step, to make a cold-hearted prince who was born in an emperor's family discover and praise little by little. Appreciation, beyond the appreciation and love of men and women. Having the courage to express your feelings and protect yourself is really good-looking. You must try it.

Omo hasn't finished watching it yet and feels a little sleepy. Let me tell you my feelings after watching it. This is a very surprising book. It has good tactics, clear logic, and clear organization. Everything is well-founded and consistent with reality. Friends who like to read more rigorous logic can give it a try! The only thing that makes me feel a little uncomfortable is the author's writing style(?) Some sentences in the article are repeated too many times, some descriptions of the prince are a bit stiff, and the protagonist's words have an indescribable strangeness (not the content, but the way of expression) And there are many long paragraphs and many exclamation points, which is a bit uncomfortable... Everything else is okay, if you like to be Machiavellian, check it out.

So far, the overall content and development logic are good. It suits my taste for Machiavellian plots and is compact. But the emotional line is not to my liking, so what exactly is the relationship between the princess and the princess? , Double cleansing? Have you ever liked "Father Wife" when you were young? How will he and the Crown Princess develop after that? Death or reconciliation? And is the Crown Princess good or bad? Also, the characters are too monotonous now. Machiavellian writings are not limited to these people. I hope the author can have as many as possible, but he cannot have too many skills without seeking refinement. When will Shou finally become a true strategist (the willing one)? Shou now gives me the feeling of being "brave and resourceful", tough, calm, and like a wolf ready to attack in the early stage, very decisive. I like it (hehe) Come on, I look forward to great work. [Laughing][laughing]

It's super beautiful, the ideas are very clear, there are many small details, and the characters are well drawn. This is the first time I have seen such an amazing Gu Mouquan novel. I can't get enough of it [Admiration] [Admiration] The first thing I do when I wake up every day is to click in and read [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] The author is also very attentive and gives us extra meals from time to time. I am so happy! Great author, come on! I raise a banner for you! Love you, love you, love you!! [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's simply so beautiful! ! ! It is a very nice Machiavellian novel, with a plot that is not cliché, tense and full of ups and downs. The excitement of the plot is difficult to express in words. The little girl expresses deep appreciation and hopes that the author will be diligent in updating it in the future. I will definitely follow it (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡(*˘˘*). .:*♡

Two male protagonists, ancient fiction, please see the text for details The current focus is on Lin Yan's growth line. When he encountered a desperate situation while traveling, he relied on his own judgment and reasoning without a golden finger, and was able to get out of danger and gain the trust of the prince. There is also the author's description of the environment, including the entire court, the harem, the atmosphere of the war, and the characters' idioms, which are very antique. At first glance, it seems that the author collected information very carefully and made a fictional dynasty. However, the settings of the court, war arrangements, and people's livelihood arrangements seem to fit the environment very well. In addition, the protagonist is a modern restored ancient book, and the restoration process is very specific. The emotional line is probably of a slow-burning type, and the setting of the identity difference between the prince and the slave (will change later) is very touching. What I have seen so far is the foreshadowing of the changes in the characters' hearts. The prince originally had a princess, but I don't know what will happen next. I can also feel that the protagonist's court situation is quite difficult and quite challenging for them. I don't know if it's to highlight Lin Yan, why there is no one around the prince, but generally he is not allowed to have a close team, and I don't know what will happen next. Overall, it's still worth watching.

Super love [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] I think some people say that relationships progress slowly, but this kind of subtle and well-founded relationship progress is not abrupt at all. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I am really looking forward to the plot of the book where the protagonist becomes the prince's "palm"... And Tiantian's interaction...