Azur Lane: Reborn as a Crown Shipgirl, I Strike My Teammates from the Start

It's good to watch, and the plot is pretty good. I hope the author will not be influenced by those who maliciously lower the score. It is the cosplay prophet who said that it will definitely collapse in the future. Just kill him🤓👆. Now I can't find any fault with the plot, it's up to the reader's personal preference.

It's very comfortable to watch. I don't play Azur Lane, and I don't know much about the related settings and the history of warships. I just read various secondary creations. These articles use settings such as games and animations and then rely on the author to write the story himself. It is particularly interesting if it is well written. After reading this novel, I feel very comfortable and natural. The setting of the protagonist is also in line with the author's first chapter (laughs). From the beginning when the protagonist comes to the new world, he subconsciously wants to become a commander and is free from the world. Then he gradually establishes a bond with the ship girl and sincerely integrates into the world, does what he wants to do, and protects his family. There are no blunt turns or far-fetched emotional connections. The protagonist gradually becomes vivid and three-dimensional. As the power form of the protagonist, the ship girl form is also well grasped. You can feel that the essence is still the protagonist herself. It is not like some transformation novels where changing the form gives people the impression that they are two characters. (Although the author also had a little epilepsy with Da Lei for no reason in the ship girl form.) The last thing I want to say is that transformation does not mean sexual change. I love reading the transformation tag! The summary of the novel is very interesting!

The writing is okay. There aren't many books about men transforming into ship girls. They are just mutually exclusive. Although I also want the protagonist to be in the ship girl state all the time, I can accept it. Moreover, the main plot in the early stage is the daily life of the protagonist and some ship girls in the academy. The goal is to become a commander.

It looks good. I want to see the reactions of all parties after the Xuan Ming meta and U556's heavy pressure on Commander Kouga after the vest explosion! But the former should be invisible. Black Cat explained that after becoming a commander, he can solve his possible metamorphosis. I still hope to see more daily stickers. After all, it is a special feature of Ship B, so you must try it. However, the main plot line has not yet been developed, the protagonist is still developing in Donghuang, and many other ship girls cannot appear yet, Lan Shou. Finally, I would like to thank the author for cooking in Hongshizi for readers. After all, in Hongshizi, readers only need to have fun, and the author who wants to write plots and portray characters has more to consider.

The writing is pretty good and the plot is very enjoyable to read. The update seems to be quite stable (? If you keep writing it, it will definitely be a good book 😏 👍 Also, how many words does the author plan to write? Be sure to write with a longer mouth.

Okay, but there are too many emotional scenes and they are a bit clumsy. I couldn't stand most of the emotional scenes, so I had to skip reading. Apart from the emotional scenes, the whole book is pretty good. I can tell that the author wants us to cry, but I feel that the author is not suitable for writing emotional dramas. This novel is the only one that I have not felt about the emotional dramas since I read the novel. You, the author, are also a talent. No matter how bad the emotional dramas in other novels are, I still feel it.

When I read Chapter 42, it was okay, no problem. It was Mingshi who was the first to know about the identity change, not his ship. This point of design... Well, it depends on how the author handles it.

The writing style is top-notch, it's a side story, it's a shipgirl fanfiction, it's a harem story, the male protagonist can switch to the shipgirl form, and the time travel point is before the plot starts, overall it's good, the emotional line is also good, the rescue is hard to get over, well, he just wants to give every girl a warm home, funny and funny. . .

It's good-looking and good-looking. It can be said that it is a must-read for me to update. The article is overall delicate, the switching of the protagonist's identity does not feel stagnant, and the emotions are well written. It deserves my five stars. @116 Does Hajidan play Seven Saints Summons? 😏

This is my favorite setting (Corona plus Azur Lane). The protagonist setting is also good. The commander can be a ship girl. The corona building can be released and retracted. It's really good [smile] I'd love to see more [smile]