What Do You Mean, Your Commander Is a Corona Ship Girl?

It's good to watch, and the plot is pretty good. I hope the author will not be influenced by those who maliciously lower the score. It is the cosplay prophet who said that it will definitely collapse in the future. Just kill him🤓👆. Now I can't find any fault with the plot, it's up to the reader's personal preference.

It's very comfortable to watch. I don't play Azur Lane, and I don't know much about the related settings and the history of warships. I just read various secondary creations. These articles use settings such as games and animations and then rely on the author to write the story himself. It is particularly interesting if it is well written. After reading this novel, I feel very comfortable and natural. The setting of the protagonist is also in line with the author's first chapter (laughs). From the beginning when the protagonist comes to the new world, he subconsciously wants to become a commander and is free from the world. Then he gradually establishes a bond with the ship girl and sincerely integrates into the world, does what he wants to do, and protects his family. There are no blunt turns or far-fetched emotional connections. The protagonist gradually becomes vivid and three-dimensional. As the power form of the protagonist, the ship girl form is also well grasped. You can feel that the essence is still the protagonist herself. It is not like some transformation novels where changing the form gives people the impression that they are two characters. (Although the author also had a little epilepsy with Da Lei for no reason in the ship girl form.) The last thing I want to say is that transformation does not mean sexual change. I love reading the transformation tag! The summary of the novel is very interesting!

The writing is okay. There aren't many books about men transforming into ship girls. They are just mutually exclusive. Although I also want the protagonist to be in the ship girl state all the time, I can accept it. Moreover, the main plot in the early stage is the daily life of the protagonist and some ship girls in the academy. The goal is to become a commander.

It looks good. I want to see the reactions of all parties after the Xuan Ming meta and U556's heavy pressure on Commander Kouga after the vest explosion! But the former should be invisible. Black Cat explained that after becoming a commander, he can solve his possible metamorphosis. I still hope to see more daily stickers. After all, it is a special feature of Ship B, so you must try it. However, the main plot line has not yet been developed, the protagonist is still developing in Donghuang, and many other ship girls cannot appear yet, Lan Shou. Finally, I would like to thank the author for cooking in Hongshizi for readers. After all, in Hongshizi, readers only need to have fun, and the author who wants to write plots and portray characters has more to consider.

The writing is pretty good and the plot is very enjoyable to read. The update seems to be quite stable (? If you keep writing it, it will definitely be a good book [laughing evilly] 👍 Also, how many words does the author plan to write? Be sure to write with a longer mouth.

Okay, but there are too many emotional scenes and they are a bit clumsy. I couldn't stand most of the emotional scenes, so I had to skip reading. Apart from the emotional scenes, the whole book is pretty good. I can tell that the author wants us to cry, but I feel that the author is not suitable for writing emotional dramas. This novel is the only one that I have not felt about the emotional dramas since I read the novel. You, the author, are also a talent. No matter how bad the emotional dramas in other novels are, I still feel it.

When I read Chapter 42, it was okay, no problem. It was Mingshi who was the first to know about the identity change, not his ship. This point of design... Well, it depends on how the author handles it.

The writing style is top-notch, it's a side story, it's a shipgirl fanfiction, it's a harem story, the male protagonist can switch to the shipgirl form, and the time travel point is before the plot starts, overall it's good, the emotional line is also good, the rescue is hard to get over, well, he just wants to give every girl a warm home, funny and funny. . .

This is my favorite setting (Corona plus Azur Lane). The protagonist setting is also good. The commander can be a ship girl. The corona building can be released and retracted. It's really good [smile] I'd love to see more [smile]

It's good-looking and good-looking. It can be said that it is a must-read for me to update. The article is overall delicate, the switching of the protagonist's identity does not feel stagnant, and the emotions are well written. It deserves my five stars. @116 Does Hajidan play Seven Saints Summons? [Sinister smile]

This fan novel, which combines Red Alert Corona and Ship Girl, brought me a big surprise. Bringing the corona force into the port area, two world views collide, the concept is novel and unique, and it is full of freshness to read. The description of the naval battle scenes in the book is very passionate, the artillery exchanges and fleet confrontations are full of atmosphere, and the tactical confrontation is very enjoyable to watch. Not only the fierce maritime battles, but also the daily interactions in the port area are written vividly and interestingly, and the jokes are just right without appearing rigid and disconnected. The characters of each ship girl are distinct, the Chinese ship girls are full of aura, and the characters have their own characteristics, making them easy to remember. The rhythm of the plot is well controlled, and tense battles alternate with relaxed daily life. The reading experience is very comfortable without excessive delay. It can be seen that the author is passionate enough about the subject matter and has carefully polished the setting. Readers who like ship girls and red alert corona themes can feel free to dive in. It coincides with the Peak Wave Camp event, and I hope more people can read this masterpiece, and look forward to more exciting naval battle plots in the future.

A warm life novel with an unusual plot. It focuses on relaxation and life. After reading too many refreshing and passionate novels, you can read this to calm down your mood. Occasionally eat fine rice bran. The emotional description is very delicate and it tastes good.

Can the author of Haokan but provide a picture? (I don't play Azur Lane)[Sending Hearts]

Excellent plot, clear and delicate emotional lines However, Xuan Ming alone cannot defeat the Arbiter now. Looking forward to Dragon Boat or Xuan Ming meta🤣

I come to the comment area to do only three things! Five stars, five stars, five stars for his "signal shielding"! Well written. In my whole life, I never thought that the corona and the blue could be put together, nor did I expect that in the 116 pen, these two unrelated things could be so suitable. It was only after reading this book that I fell in love with Bilan (actually because I didn't know the characters and was just curious) In addition, can we also write Xiao Ji Meng and Xuan Wu as ship girls? I feel that the main character Xuan Ming is a bit standout. I still owe Chapter 78, 116-chan, keep up the hard work. (We have to imagine 116 is happy)

We must imagine the author to be happy. Come on! Egg-colored Sicillus! The stone will eventually be pushed to the top of the mountain! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Commander: What should I do if my wife is in trouble? What will happen if I transform?

Rare ra3 linkage blue, come on.

More updates, take a look at Shajiang next door, I hope the protagonist will be free from electricity as soon as possible [face covering]

Not bad, but when can we build a base?

Looking forward to the day when the vest is blown away by the little knight

It's beautiful. Although love is gender-neutral, I want to see Lily [crying]

It's very interesting, with delicate emotions and reasonable plot. It's a great book among Bilan fans, Hao Chi! ! !

It's good to watch. I'd love to read more. The corona and the blue blend very well. It's not like those traveling celebrities.

Good luck. Although I said I don't play this game and don't understand the game setting and game plot, after my review, I found that the plot and emotional scenes of this book are quite good. I can still read it even if I don't understand the plot. This kind of writing must be praised with five stars. Also, I want to see the main character explode [smile]

It's really good to read. Although it's also the first fanfic about Blue that I've read. How do I feel about it? It's the kind that newbies to Blue can also read (even though I'm a newbie). Great author, come on!

Guys, there are knives. I didn't see anyone mentioning it in the comments, so I'll tell you. 6. I didn't expect that there would be a plot about an incompetent husband. Although the "emperor" later helped to take revenge, it is recommended to skip chapters such as 287 as it will not affect the subsequent plot too much. Guys, my friend said that I went too far. Maybe I didn't express myself well. The ratings are true. The book is beautiful. You can't judge the overall quality because of a few flaws.

Hiding in bed in the middle of the night, watching me squirm like a ham [laughing and crying]

This is the only novel that combines Red Three and Blue. I highly recommend it.

After reading it, I feel generally good at the moment, but I need to delve into the details more. Is there any channel for the reviewed parts to be sent to me [smile][smile][smile] Author, come on